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发表于 2009-12-25 22:45:17 |显示全部楼层
题目:ISSUE226 - "People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience."
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In the history river, people of different age fronts problems of different patterns. But what insist in the progress is the development of science and technology which isolated human beings from other animals. The author insist that people always mistakenly believe that they face more complex problems than their ancestors and this illusion will be dispelled as the increase of the knowledge and experience. Although at the first glance it seems reasonable, after a second consideration I can not share the view point of the author. For the development of the science and technology induced more complex challenges for human beings and those problems may be settled by the intelligence of human but can never convert the idea that people always face complex problems than their predecessors.


We have to admit that some problems faced by our predecessors may not in front of us. A case in point is that the stress of survival
in the pristine tribe the most essential problem for human beings is to get enough food and find a place worm enough to escape from death. As the development of the productivity, people learned to culture plants and domesticate animals as the food resource, which liberated them from the starvation. As the time passed by the appearance of science and modern technology has enabled people to live a more comfortable life far beyond the imagination of that time. But this not means that the problems faced by people became less complex and challenging, for the problems face by human have transformed to other patterns which are more complex and tough.


The initial aim of the human science and technology was to make life more comfortable not only in material but also in spiritual level. The first glance of the human history the aim seems achieved during the past centuries, but the byproducts of this process are more complex challenges. The development of the transportation initiated the transport crash not only in the high way but also on the surface of the ocean and in the air. Recently the appearance of the internet initiated the globalization, which is a conception evolves nearly every aspect of the world. Admittedly it made people have a more comfortable and effective life but also caused many tough problems which out of the imagination of our predecessors. A great number of cases come in to my mind can serve as the evidence of this claim. The development of the industry brought the Green-house effect, which most likely to threat the survival of all the human beings if can not be controlled by our strives as soon as possible. The resource shortage is also a bottle neck of the further development of the human science, at least before we get an ever-lasting energy source. The development of the military science is another challenge of modern human. More and more countries learned how to produce the nuclear weapons and what is more no one can predict a global nuclear war will exploit at what time although many treaties focus on the usage of the nuclear weapon have been endorsed. All cases mentioned above are problems in front of all human beings at present. No one can deny they are more complex than only try to get enough food to survival of a single person of the pristine time.


The progress of the human technology can settle some problems but at the same time initiate some new ones, and the new ones are based on the established technology and science, as a result they are bound to be more complex and challenging than the past ones. This is a trend can not be inversed by the increase of the human knowledge and experience.


As all mentioned above, the author unfairly asserted that it is a mistake for people to hold the view point that they face more complex problems than their ancestors, and even assert this illusion can be dispelled by the increase of the knowledge and experience.

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发表于 2009-12-26 11:12:01 |显示全部楼层
In the history river, people of different age fronts problems of different patterns. But what insist in the progress is the development of science and technology which isolated human beings from other animals. The author insist that people always mistakenly believe that they face more complex problems than their ancestors and this illusion will be dispelled as the increase of the knowledge and experience. Although at the first glance it seems reasonable, after a second consideration I can not share the view point of the author. For the development of the science and technology induced more complex challenges for human beings and those problems may be settled by the intelligence of human but can never convert the idea that people always face complex problems than their predecessors.We have to admit that some problems faced by our predecessors may not in front of us any more. A case in point is that(删掉) the stress of survival:in the pristine tribe the most essential problem for human beings is(was) to get enough food and find a place worm enough(换成shelter更好点) to escape from death. As the development of the productivity, people learned to culture plants and domesticate animals as the food resource, which liberated them from the starvation. As the time passed by the appearance of science and modern technology has enabled people to live a more comfortable life far beyond the imagination of that time. But this not means(does not mean) that the problems faced by people became less complex and challenging, for the problems face by用的face by太多了,换个词,confront什么的 human have transformed to other patterns which are more complex and tough.The initial aim of the human science and technology was to make life more comfortable not only in material换成physical but also in spiritual level. The first glance of the human history the aim seems achieved during the past centuries, but the byproducts of this process are more complex challenges.这句没看太懂 The development of the transportation initiated the transport crash not only in the high way but also on the surface of the ocean and in the air. Recently the appearance of the internet initiated the globalization, which is a conception evolves nearly every aspect of the world. Admittedly it made people have a more comfortable and effective life but also caused many tough problems which out of the imagination of our predecessors. A great number of cases come in to my mind can serve as the evidence of this claim. The development of the industry brought the Green-house effect, which most likely to threat the survival of all the human beings if can not be controlled by our strives as soon as possible. The resource shortage is also a bottle neck学了个新词,没想到这样直接~~ of the further development of the human science, at least before we get an ever-lasting energy source. The development of the military science is another challenge of modern human. More and more countries learned how to produce the nuclear weapons and what is more no one can predict a global nuclear war will exploit at what time although many treaties focus on the usage of the nuclear weapon have been endorsed. All cases mentioned above are problems in front of all human beings at present. No one can deny they are more complex than only try to get enough food to survival of a single person of the pristine time.The progress of the human technology can settle some problems but at the same time initiate some new ones, and the new ones are based on the established technology and science, as a result they are bound to be more complex and challenging than the past ones. This is a trend can not be inversed by the increase of the human knowledge and experience.As all mentioned above, the author unfairly asserted that it is a mistake for people to hold the view point that they face more complex problems than their ancestors, and even assert this illusion can be dispelled by the increase of the knowledge and experience.好像不够概括~~
我第一次看你文章啊,写的不错,不愧是研究生啊~~
但是你这篇文章的重点是阐述现有的问题和以前的问题,并进行对比,对吧?但是我觉得你没有写出这些问题的解决。可能是咱俩思路不太一样吧,我觉得这是个问题解决型问题。晚上群聊的时候讨论吧!

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发表于 2009-12-26 19:01:39 |显示全部楼层
你说的很对我的失误之处就在没有说明问题的解决方法也是随着时代的发展而发展的

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