ISSUE208~O(∩_∩)O谢谢

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TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
WORDS: 573
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-1-18 19:58:30

The statement claim that people's ideas and values about a society hinges on the way people look, dress, and act, while appealing in some respects, is an over-statement at best for the reason that people's ideas and values about a society is a state of Being which is not outside but deep within he or she.

To begin with, turning to the way people look and dress, which is the appearance of people. According to the principle of Marxist philosophy, look and dress are wholly external appearance that cannot simply demonstrate the people's internalization such as ideas and values about a society. Moreover, even the skin-deep of a person could partly reflect his or her innate character. Unfortunately, within the significant development and globalization of our world, the trend of our look and dress is changing almost every season even everyday. Thus, it's cannot correctly accord with the person's intrinsic quality but his or her conformity. In short, we cannot conclusion the person's belief by observing his or her appearance, let alone the society's ideas and values.

Secondly, focus on the way people act, such as the way people talking, laughing and treat to others. Admittedly, the culture of a society has a dramatic influence of people's philosophy and sense of worth. And then reflect partly to the way of people's behavior. However, common senses informs me that the behavior of a person, especially like the sentences his or her talking or the behavior his or her taking, is automatic and somewhat self-motion that cannot really and accurately associate with the person's internal belief. For instance, assuming that we saw a monk, that is a person being prescribed cannot eating meat anymore for his belief, eat a piece of meat for the reason that there is nothing he can eat and he is significant hungry for about eating nothing lasting four days long. Is this act offending against his ideas and values? Undoubtedly not! It is just a person's nature living behavior and nobody could blame him for that essence nature of alive. I admit that this example is somewhat extreme. However, in our daily life, there also exist a myriad of conditions that could demonstrate my conclusion such as the act of a person's response to aggressive behavior is also an instinct action that cannot relation to his or her ideas and values about a society.

Finally, I have to mention some other situations such as in the third world countries that warm and food are their basic problems and they have no time, money and experiences to concern their look, dress and act.
For that reason, people's look is strikingly common like rough skin and thin body, people's dress also has the simple and somewhat lamentable purpose--prevent feeling cold.
Even the act of people is a little common for the reason that they barely have that condition to think about their own internalization and belief. Consequently, how can we observing the appearance and behavior of those people to know their society's ideas and values?

In conclusion, the speaker's assertion is not without merit when it comes to some special situations such as in some particular ceremonies like religious service. In that condition, people's look, dress and even act clearly reflect the society's ideas and values. However, in other vast situations, especially our common life, we cannot assure a society's ideas and values by simply observing the appearance and behavior of its people.

PS:写完感觉很异样，尤其是主体第二段那个和尚的例子，可我实在是想不出其他例子了。
     一直没打算背什么名人事例和名人名言，就用这些生活中的例子例子，假设，排比，设问就足够了吧？关键是我也没时间背例子了，就剩23天了，倒计时开始......

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The statement claim that people's ideasand values about a society hinges on the way people look, dress, andact, while appealing in some respects, is an over-statement at best forthe reason that people's ideas and values about a society is a state ofBeing which is not outside but deep within he or she.

To begin with, turning to the way peoplelook and dress, which is the appearance of people. According to theprinciple of Marxist philosophy, look and dress are wholly externalappearance that cannot simply demonstrate the people's internalizationsuch as ideas and values about a society. Moreover, even the skin-deepof a person could partly reflect his or her innate character.Unfortunately, within the significant development and globalization ofour world, the trend of our look and dress is changing almost everyseason even everyday. Thus, it's cannot correctly accord with theperson's intrinsic quality but his or her conformity. In short, wecannot conclusion the person's belief by observing his or herappearance, let alone the society's ideas and values. （个人觉得这段说服力不够哦，对于为什么外表不能反映内心始终没有做出直接的解释，至于为什么有色人种不能貌相也没有解释，只是直接出了结论）

Secondly, focus on the way people act,such as the way people talking, laughing and treat to others.Admittedly, the culture of a society has a dramatic influence ofpeople's philosophy and sense of worth. And then reflect partly to theway of people's behavior. However, common senses informs me that thebehavior of a person, especially like the sentences his or her talkingor the behavior his or her taking, is automatic and somewhatself-motion that cannot really and accurately associate with theperson's internal belief. For instance, assuming that we saw a monk,that is a person being prescribed cannot eating meat anymore for hisbelief, eat a piece of meat for the reason that there is nothing he caneat and he is significant hungry for about eating nothing lasting fourdays long. Is this act offending against his ideas and values?Undoubtedly not! It is just a person's nature living behavior andnobody could blame him for that essence nature of alive. I admit thatthis example is somewhat extreme. However, in our daily life, therealso exist a myriad of conditions that could demonstrate my conclusionsuch as the act of a person's response to aggressive behavior is alsoan instinct action that cannot relation to his or her ideas and valuesabout a society.（额，这个例子好神奇。。。个人觉得有点牵强。说得极端一点，他为了生存只能吃肉，只说明这个和尚修为不到家。。。得道的应该已经超脱生死了吧。。。有点扯。。。）

Finally, I have to mention some othersituations such as in the third world countries that warm and food aretheir basic problems and they have no time, money and experiences toconcern their look, dress and act.
For that reason, people's look is strikingly common like rough skin andthin body, people's dress also has the simple and somewhat lamentablepurpose--prevent feeling cold.
Even the act of people is a little common for the reason that theybarely have that condition to think about their own internalization andbelief. Consequently, how can we observing the appearance and behaviorof those people to know their society's ideas and values?（这段有说服力，例子很好）

In conclusion, the speaker's assertion isnot without merit when it comes to some special situations such as insome particular ceremonies like religious service. In that condition,people's look, dress and even act clearly reflect the society's ideasand values. However, in other vast situations, especially our commonlife, we cannot assure a society's ideas and values by simply observingthe appearance and behavior of its people.

楼主很厉害啊，45分钟就能写出这样一篇文章来，我今天也写了同样一篇，花了1小时10分钟呢。。。
个人觉得论述还不是很到位，要加强。但是文章结构和条例还是很不错的
楼主加油啊！！！
PS:不嫌弃的话也改改我的208吧https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1052251&extra=

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说实话~我真不是45分钟写出来的~是整整一个小时啊~只是直接copy过来整
篇而已~

主体第一段是有点缺乏说服力~可是我更缺乏的还是例子啊= =|

第二段和尚那个例子是有点失败，不过还是挺搞笑的吧~哈哈~就当笑话看看
吧~

我这篇是完全copy北美范文的思路，所以结构不好才怪~哎~实在是没有时间
跟精力去创新了~