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Along with the rapidly economic growth , people 's life dramatically changed by modern science and technology. However , people 's independence is undergoing a decline , especially the means of tackling questions we meet . According a recent survey, people in growing numbers are beginning to make decisions depend(depending) on others . In my opinion , it is important to decide by ourselves when considering experience,convenience,and (the)family
The main reason lies in the fact that make(making) decisions by ourselves could enhance our experience,which put us in a favorable position in future questions (in solving future questions?). For example, we make a decision by ourselves to solve certain thing , if it is not a good one , we also can gain much experience ,which we will never be able to get from our textbooks . And when it comes to us again ,we could readily tackle it very well and afflict us greatly.On the contrary , if our choosing is gorgeous ,then think about what would we get? Experience , confidence , victory ---the list goes on . All comes to the point that by ourselves is worthy on both accounts
Another factor involves the recognition is that it is convenient to decide by ourselves . Especially when we are alone or in trouble ,it bring us the efficiency. For instance , we encounter a calamity when wandering outside at night , there are few people around. Would you find some people and ask him or her for helping make a decision ? Or will you wait there until anyone appears and decide what should do together ? Of course not, indisputably , we should send victims to hospital or phone without hesitate(hesitation) .
To further clarify that ,we could add that it contributes to our family. Actually ,it is very usual for us . Take me for example, i am a boy , if i always need friends to help me make decisions, what would i do in such a situation. I am going after a girl i love ,we are shopping and a particular problem comes to us , no friends there , if she helps me solve the problem , then what 's on her mind ? Undoubtedly ,it will be a tragedy ,which has no association with a family . 这一段和上面的重复了,意思基本上是一样的
Judging what (we)has been discussed above ,we can safely draw the conclusion that make a choosing(choice) by ourselves produce(exerts) an essential impact on our lives in modern society . Anyone who is blind to this point will pay a heavy price we can not afford
题目中是prefer to do something,这个你没有提到,感觉应该先提一下再说自己做决定好,然后说人们更原因自己做决定。有的句子太长了,可以用一些连接词。后两个论点基本上是一样的,有点重复了。一家之言,仅供参考~~ |
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