[phoenix] issue130 第一次作业 by 12号

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Issue 130
How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.

今天的儿童如何被社会化决定了社会的命运。
不幸的是，我们还没有学会如何抚养能改善社会向更好方向发展的孩子。

I can not agree more with the quotation that how children are raised nowadays lead to the futuer of one society. However, I can not have the agreement of the claim that we can not socialize the next generation who the better society need.

As we all know that the children are the brilliant and hopeful sesource of any nation or race. People are generous to use all kinds of words and phrases to conmment about the child. Children are always described as the most positive danamics and power to cause the society to go ahead. Thus, the quality of how children are tought and raised determine the power of a society, to some extend, determine the destiny of one country.

Where does our contemporary civilization come from? How does our societies composed? What is the score evaluable factor of one nation? The propereast and the only answer is people. The history has showed the achievements of the past people's success of raising their children, namely us. We can also bring our kids to a new high level as the same.

Of course, we must face a large number of problems, such population, lands, water and so on. Our children might deal with a more trouble world
we left to them. But that does not means they do not have the bility to control the new situations. What's more, we could not give up our dreams to better a society which our children can built.

Admittly, some people saw the problems which come from the situation that an adult or parents can not raise their babies well enough to built a better place. But we also admitted that its only part of the overall things. One method to work out is education. Education, which was formed for thousands of years, from west to the east, from the ancient to contemporary life, is one approach to socilize the child.

To sum up, I undoubted support the opinion that the way children are raied today determine the future of society. But, I can not agree the next conclusion that we can not raise proper people to better our own society. Cause the second conclusion are not the direct result according to the reason.



这是我写完之后才写的，貌似应该开始就写的，第一次写，非常幼稚，欢迎指正。
【命题分析】
第一个命题肯定：儿童是社会的未来，他们的状况决定了社会的命运。因此，儿童的社会化过程非常重要。
第二个命题商榷：我们是否学会如何抚养孩子？
一个方面，社会上的确出现了教育失败的例子，一些孩子长大了危害社会。
另一方面，还要看到，一些孩子造福了社会。
综合，总体而言，作为社会整体的孩子的社会化是成功的，因此我们是有能力的，也懂的。