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本帖最后由 cp19880313 于 2010-4-13 23:32 编辑

4.13作业占座
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1063811&pid=1773852308&page=4&extra=

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本帖最后由 jack878 于 2010-4-14 09:48 编辑

4.13 占座，争取每天坚持写
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奋斗

双非DIY美硕申请总结

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本帖最后由 Frankie0616 于 2010-4-14 13:20 编辑

交晚了，请多包涵~
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1081828&pid=1773854214&page=2&extra=#pid1773854214

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本帖最后由 speedzshaw 于 2010-4-14 23:31 编辑

4.13 by speedzshaw https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1062477-7-1.html 63楼

Free your ambitious mind and learn the art of dying.

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4.13 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=9&extra= 86楼

不许急功近利！不许偷懒！不许丧气！

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本帖最后由 stefanie299 于 2010-4-14 14:55 编辑

4.13https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1061204&pid=1773854518&page=4&extra=38楼，谢谢

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本帖最后由 john_332 于 2010-4-13 23:26 编辑

4.13 作文 by 舜

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本帖最后由 yan121 于 2010-4-14 17:12 编辑

好我也占一个13号的.. 今天的题目看起来真是头空空..

写好了在这边交得晚了同组童鞋不好意思..
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1072136&pid=1773855073&page=2&extra=
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本帖最后由 zhaoliyao 于 2010-4-14 09:16 编辑

占个座写完了 4月13日https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1085711&pid=1773853199&page=1&extra=#pid1773853199

谢谢各位了

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RE: 美利坚IBT特训营独立写作小组（大家加油~~）

4.13日

Thereis a general controversy nowadays about if the students keeping rooms neat andorganized is more likely to be successful. Those who advocate students tidingthe rooms argue that a clean circumstance can create a joy mood for thestudent, which will increase his efficiency and lead him to the way of success.They believe that, this good life habit represents the virtue of the teenager,and one's virtue always determines his fortune. But, people who object to it,on the other hand, argue that weather to keep rooms neat or not, is not relatedto one's success at all. From my point of view, I definitely agree with theformer.

Among the most convincing reasons offered by people, one should beemphasized that, a neat and organized room usually has a positive influence onstudent's temper. Just take me as an example. Before I begin to study, I mustmake sure that everything in my room is in order. And then, I can feel I'membodied by relax and happy atmosphere. Surely, a happy temper can be astimulus to improve student's work quality. The higher work quality one has,the easier access to a high mark in exam. Of course he will tend to be moresuccessful.

Keeping rooms spick and span can not only create a joy mood for studentsbut it will cultivate our virtues as well. If you are able to arrange things inyour room well enough, means you've already had a good life habit. Usually, thegood habit can contribute to your virtue including independence, diligent andcompetent which are all crucial elements for one's success. Just like there isa common saying that "character determines fortune."

Onthe other hand, we have to admitted that there are a group of famous people,who never focus on the circumstance around them. All they do is just concentratingon their work even though the room is in a mass. In this case, we cannot say,they are not successful only because they don't tidy the room.

Considering all the factors above, we may come to the conclusion that,in most of the cases, students with neat and organized rooms have much moreadvantages to achieve their goals and win the competitions. I believe studentscan obtain potential benefits from keeping room neat and organized.

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