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The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals.The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few,but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten.

观点：历史告诉我们，杰出的领导者和广大群众都是历史的缔造者，只靠杰出的个人能力而没有无数拥护者的支持是不能书写历史的，同样没有凝聚力和精神导向的芸芸众生同样也不会给在历史史册上留下光辉的一页。
提纲：
1.常识告诉我们，我们学习历史的过程也主要是学习那些杰出的历史人物的杰出事迹和杰出思想的过程。而无数历史事件也证明了杰出人物的重要性，无论是在政治，科学，还是社会变革。作为社会趋势或者先进思想的代言人，他们引领了时代的前进。
例子，毛泽东，牛顿。。
2.时间的沙漏将那些默默无闻的，碌碌无为的芸芸众生当做历史的过客一般滤掉了，而只留下那些具有鲜明个性的历史的弄潮儿的名字和事迹。但是我们不能因此而忽视群众在历史中的重要作用。芸芸众生才是重大历史壮举和分水岭的实践者和缔造者。
金字塔，长城，法国大革命
3.但是从历史的发展趋势来看，由于社会的高度复杂化和多元化的发展，杰出人物在历史中的作用被淡化了。更多的是，经济，社会，环境和科技因素对社会造成了更大的影响。而这些因素都是用广大的普通公民的辛勤努力造就的。所以从这点来看，作者的观点可能预测了社会发展的趋势。

When it comes to the issue who is real author of history.I concede that groups of people play a crucial and ineffaceable role in the river of history.Nevertheless,the contribution devoted by those distinguished individuals ,whose charming persnal qualities lie at the bottom of history river and shine like gold,should not be ignored either by any measure.

Common sense tells us that the study of history is somewhat like the process of learning the preeminent qualities nourished by famous historical individuals,in term of faiths,experiences,as well as noble morals.And it just is those valueable qualities distinct them from common people , make them to percieve the trend of society and qualify them to be leaders of important historical events even historical watersheds.Could you describe how china will be if there was no existence of mao when all chineses were living in a miserable condition?Few people will pretest that mao's wise leading and insightful policies garantee the success of chinese revelotion and reconstruction after war.To this extent,key individuals play no less important role than mass in the impeling progress of history.

Admittedly,the filter of time excludes almost nameless and common masses,the most key individuals remain and shine like gold.However,what we should not ignore is that the author of history contains not only key individuals,but also the mass who is the actual practioner of ideas or revelotions.Although the orientation and religious need of ruler catalyzed the emergence of Pyramid,if there were no the deligent workers,would the Pyramid be there?And so were the untold feats happened before,regardless of politics,science as well as social reform.

Notwithstanding,since the society tends to be more complexitive and pluralistic,the importance of key individuals are wanning.Further more,the innovations and achievements conducted by commom people have larger impacts on society's change.With respect to this trend,the speaker's assertion may be verified in the future.But up to now,key individuals should not be ignored by any measure .

To sum,although the increasing complexity and pluralim of society may weaken the importance of key individuals in the future,history itself indicates,up to now, that key individuls and mass conspires the progress of sociey and whichever should not be ignored.

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When it comes to the issue who is real author of history.I concede that groups of people play a crucial and ineffaceable role in the river of history.Nevertheless,the contribution devoted by those distinguished individuals ,whose charming persnal qualities lie at the bottom of history river and shine like gold,should not be ignored either by any measure. 看了下作者的提纲知道作者想表达的是一直中立观点，但是这段话感觉更偏向于侧重个人对历史的作用了

Common sense tells us that the study of history is somewhat （加somewhat显得有点口语）like the process of learning the preeminent qualities nourished by famous historical individuals,in term of faiths,experiences,as well as noble morals.And it just is those valueable qualities distinct them from common people , make them to percieve the trend of society and qualify them to be leaders of important historical events even historical watersheds.Could you describe how china （要capitalize哦）will be if there was no existence of mao when all chineses were living in a miserable condition?Few people will pretest that mao's wise leading and insightful policies garantee the success of chinese revelotion and reconstruction after war.To this extent,key individuals play no less important role than mass in the impeling progress of history.

Admittedly,the filter of time excludes almost nameless and common masses,the most key individuals remain and shine like gold.However,what we should not ignore is that the author of history contains not only key individuals,but also the mass who is the actual practioner of ideas or revelotions.Although the orientation and religious need of ruler catalyzed the emergence of Pyramid,if there were no the deligent workers,would the Pyramid be there?例子不错And so were the untold feats happened before,regardless of politics,science as well as social reform.

Notwithstanding,since the society tends to be more complexitive and pluralistic,the importance of key individuals are wanning.Further more,the innovations and achievements conducted by commom people have larger impacts on society's change.(这里该加几个例子不然不知道具体在说什么
）With respect to this trend,the speaker's assertion may be verified in the future.But up to now,key individuals should not be ignored by any measure .

To sum,although the increasing complexity and pluralim of society may weaken the importance of key individuals in the future,(并没有看出名人地位下降呀）history itself indicates,up to now, that key individuls and mass conspires the progress of sociey and whichever should not be ignored.

文笔很不错~~但是多加点例子，特别是倒数第二段就好了