处女贴,不是处女作 ^_^ Issue 144 艺术家与批评家 考试倒计时 10天

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144 "It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value." *a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc. " [05/75; 06/11]
是艺术家而不是批评家，带给社会一些具有持久价值的东西。*批评家指经常评价艺术作品，例如小说、电影、音乐、绘画等的人。

The author contends that it is the artists rather than the critics who bring the lasting value to the society. I completely agree with the author. Artists are the group which inspires people with their works because the works reveal their positive emotions,profound thoughts, etc. which exerts an huge impact to the human.

To begin with, art, as it is known to us all, are regarded as a effective way to release the individuals lust, converting individuals libido into creativity. Besides, art helps the social progress through building person's value system, cognition, etc. which promotes a full understanding of human's life and inspiring people performing a  wonderful work. Therefore, human's life is full of art so that people's thoughts are ,more or less, effected constantly by the works of art such as movies, novels, etc. which illustrate the inner thoughts to help the development of society. As the literature tell the reader its thoughts, the music tell the listener its thoughts, and the paint tell the audience its imagination. It clearly interprets that artists are productive, for their remarkable works inspire the people on their work, their studying and their communication which benefit the social improvement indirectly.
1. 艺术的价值 意义 --> 什么是lasting value to the society

艺术解放思想 提供灵感  
通过塑造人们的人生价值观  认知来帮助人们感悟人生生活

通过文学作品来了解其思想

通过优秀的音乐来了解其希望

通过绘画来展示其思绪
Lasting value就是艺术作品在人们工作,学习和交流上激励人们的东西



Additionally,it is true that artists are the people who create the lasting value to the society, basing on their outstanding works which keep illustrating, from the ancient time to the present, the profound thoughts such as harmony, benevolent, etc to the people. Culture, as a part of the society develops the society with its ever-lasting influence on person's mind. And art, as a part of culture, improves the culture with its effective way to spread the culture though the great works continued generation after generation . For instance, hip pop, a kind of music created by American blacks, pays an important role on revealing the hope of these blacks in their darkness in order to help people attain a all-around understanding about the blacks's various difficults resulting from the discrimination. It clear illustrates that hip pop deemed as the container of the blacks' culture is a great storyteller who promotes the balcks's life with its widespread songs.
2.艺术家们的确是那些为社会创造价值的人

艺术的价值之一就是能够推动社会的发展

社会的发展伴需要文化的发展的支撑

艺术作为文化发展的一部分 对文化有深远的影响

例子:hip pop 黑人音乐是黑人文化的一部分

人们通过hip pop了解到黑人文化

所以hip pop使更多人重视黑人的种种困难 resulting from racial discrimination

However, as no one can deney that the critic, to some extent, have a favorable influence on promoting the artists. As an old saying goes, "it is best to compare truth to a flint- the harder it is struck, the more brilliantly its spark shines." Thus, to truly promote the artists, critics who point out the flaws of the artists' works which are likely to imbue people with negative thoughts such as selfish, cupidity, and so on so that artists can perfect their works with a directly way are necessary. Generally, it is beneficial to correct the direction the art develops though critics who present the voice of the audience.  

3. As an old saying that,  it is best to compare truth to a flint- the harder it is struck, the more brilliantly its spark shines.  --Marx
批评家帮助艺术家进步

因为批评家会帮助改进那些作品不足的地方
改善作品 使之更完美perfects works
批评家不断更正着艺术的发展方向


To sum up, artists who are the author of the works that inspire the individuals creativity helps the improvement of the culture that effects the way people build their understanding to the world. And outstanding works always influence people imperceptible and unobstrusively with their inner thoughts perceived the lasting value to the society.


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eeqkchenUID: 2644469

觉得是不是讲艺术的部分太多了。。

ringtailbunnyUID: 2579853

我的感觉啊，这篇文章很大程度上是受了XDF的某一块的（比如艺术）都用一样的方法来套的理论的影响。基本没怎么critics，可能会有off topic的嫌疑的。楼主要注意。

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呃...艺术说太多啦?
我的思路是说先定义啥是lasting value  
然后在这个基础上去讨论artists对社会的作用
最后在小肯定下critics

不过楼上的说的是  写到最后被我说成艺术而不是艺术家了....  
多谢提点