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3.25 （09.03.27）
Teachers should notshow their political or social views known in the classroom.

Concerning the disregard of improvement of students and inappropriatetreatment of teachers in the statement, I disagree with the assertion thatteachers should not show their political or social views known in theclassroom. Reasons can be illustrated as fallows.

To begin with, teenagers desire the instruction of political andsocial issues. According to a recent investigation, eighty percent ofnewly-graduated students have the problems of socially adaptable. Moreover, researcheson psychological problem of employment of students indicate that incorrectperception on the modern society result in these problems. Teenagers call forguidance on how to view political and social issues in school, a guidance thatconverts a raw person into a socialized adult. Accordingly, it takes a vitalpart in one's education and there is no other way can teenagers adapt to thecontemporary society efficiently.

In addition, teachers are responsibility for the education ofstudents' view on political and social issues. The target of education, asfar as we know, is to both concentrating on the development of one'sacademic qualities and the adoption of one's emotional qualities. Correspondingly,the ultimate target of teaching is not to teach those existing theories andformula, but to help student develop the critical thinking and creative ability--- to be able to analyze facts and make sound judgments. Teenage students arein a critical period when their values and world perspective are forming. Inthe meanwhile, different viewpoints from the society impact on them; henceteachers are responsibility for teaching them on how to form right values onpolitical and society issues.  

Finally, there is another factor that deserves some words here,teachers who bravely express their views on political and social issues willbring many benefits to themselves because teenagers respect and welcome thoseteachers. Their reputation will be gained and they will never fail to fascinatestudents.

Consequently, due to the analysis and reasons mentioned above, we maysafely reach the conclusion that teachers should show their political andsocial view known in the classroom.


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Concerning the disregard of improvement of students and inappropriate treatment of teachers in the statement, I disagree with the assertion that teachers should not show their political or social views known in theclassroom.首句长了一般推荐简短型 Reasons can be illustrated as fallows.首段很特别直接点题不知道多点是更好？

To begin with, teenagers desire the instruction of political andsocial issues额。。不一定吧（小孩子知道啥就知道搞对象.） According to a recent investigation, eighty percent ofnewly-graduated students没说是什么毕业？如果是大学毕业跟你前面的teenager正好相反 have the problems of socially adaptable这个有社交的含义跟政治观点也不很符合. Moreover, researches on psychological problem of employment of students indicate that incorrect perception on the modern society result in these problems. Teenagers--young people call for guidance on how to view political and social issues in school, a guidance thatconverts a raw person into a socialized adult. Accordingly, it takes a vitalpart in one's education and there is no other way can teenagers adapt to thecontemporary society efficiently

ition, teachers are responsibility-->responsible for the education ofstudents' view on political and social issues. The target of education, asfar as we know, is to both concentrating on the development of one'sacademic qualities and the adoption of one's emotional qualities. Correspondingly,the ultimate target of teaching is not to teach those existing theories andformula, but to help student develop the critical thinking and creative ability--- to be able to analyze facts and make sound judgments你表达的意思应该是学校应该培养学生有啥啥思想，跟题目貌似不符. Teenage students arein a critical period when their values and world perspective are forming. Inthe meanwhile, different viewpoints from the society impact on them; henceteachers are responsibility for teaching也是同上一句 them on how to form right values onpolitical and society issues

Finally, there is another factor that deserves some words here,teachers who bravely express their views on political and social issues willbring many benefits to themselves because teenagers respect and welcome thoseteachers.。。TS么？？ Their reputation will be gained and they will never fail to fascinatestudents.不知道为啥要有这段？就2句话

quently, due to the analysis and reasons mentioned above, we maysafely reach the conclusion that teachers should show their political andsocial view known in the classroom 觉得写走题了，老师表达自己的观点是主观的没说是在课堂上教授express instead of teaching，没有实在例子

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3.25 （09.03.27）
Teachers should notshow their political or social views known in the classroom.

Concerning the disregard of improvement of students and inappropriatetreatment of teachers in th ...
wyac 发表于 2010-3-25 23:12

3.25 （09.03.27）
Teachers should not show their political or social views known in the classroom.

Concerning the disregard of improvement of students and inappropriate treatment of teachers in the statement, I disagree with the assertion that teachers should not show their political or social views known in the classroom. Reasons can be illustrated as fallows.

To begin with, teenagers desire the instruction of political and social issues. According to a recent investigation, eighty percent of newly-graduated students have the problems of socially adaptable. (I think most graduated students are not teenagers)Moreover, researches on psychological problem(s) of employment of students indicate that incorrect perception on the modern society result in these problems. Teenagers call for guidance on how to view political and social issues in school, a guidance that converts a raw person into a socialized adult. Accordingly, it takes a vital part in one's education and there is no other way can teenagers adapt to the contemporary society efficiently.

In addition, teachers are responsibility for the education of students' view on political and social issues. The target of education, as far as we know, is to both concentrating on the development of one's academic qualities and the adoption of one's emotional qualities. Correspondingly,the ultimate target of teaching is not to teach those existing theories andformula, but to help student develop the critical thinking and creative ability--- to be able to analyze facts and make sound judgments. Teenage students are in a critical period when their values and world perspective are forming. In the meanwhile, different viewpoints from the society impact on them; hence teachers are responsibility for teaching them on how to form right values on political and society issues.  (I think the point in this parargraph is that teachers should teach student how to form right views. I agree with you. However, I think it is not related with our topic closely. Teaching students might not need to show teachers' own views, and just showing their views know might be not a proper way to teach students to form right views because teacher's views might wrong from some angles. So I think we cannot take "teaching" and "showing" as the same thing.)

Finally, there is another factor that deserves some words here,teachers who bravely express their views on political and social issues will bring many benefits to themselves because teenagers respect and welcome those teachers. Their reputation will be gained and they will never fail to fascinate students

Consequently, due to the analysis and reasons mentioned above, we may safely reach the conclusion that teachers should show their political and social view known in the classroom.