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[问题求助] 大家看看我这个提纲是不是颇纠结啊~ [复制链接]

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发表于 2010-4-5 16:29:03 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
我把提纲写得详细些,还没写全,高手看看啊~~

92. In any academic area or professional field, it is just as important to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information.

stance: agree

1.
to begin with, accumulation of facts and information helps scholars unravel the mystery of the world.

a.
new information and facts question the existing knowledge system and may well become the herald of a new theory. EXAMPLE:

b.
information and facts is the arbiter to judge the truth of a theory.

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In addition, recognizing the limits of our knowledge and understanding is a fundamental awareness not only indispensable but also of great magnitude for people to keep in mind.

a.
This awareness is raised due to reasons as follow:

the mystery of the world, with the catalyst of the development of modern technology, is much far beyond the cognitive competence of an individual. In response, manifold disciplines are spawned out to exhume the truth in their certain fields, which turns out to bring knowledge as further in every field as isolated from each other. Scholars in one field may well find themselves trapped in a seemingly dead end which could break through by a synergy of combination of more than one kinds of knowledge. EXAMPLE: EINSTEIN AND MARCEL GROSSMANN; (Einstein turned to him for help with the mathematical formulation of the theory of general relativity); INTERDISCIPLINARY COMMUNICATIONS

b.
The awareness, that of the limitation both of the knowledge of certain fields and of the capacity to master them all, functions as a guide for people to cooperate and form the bigger picture.

3.
However, this recognition is not easy for people to always bear in mind.

a.
there are always a plentitude of excuses to eschew that recognition, among which arbitration and isolation seem rather patent.

b.
Arbitration occurs when people hold excessive certitude that they can surmount the difficult alone. Admitting something is beyond their capability is more than not a truth that refused to accept by most people, especially professionals. it is the calculations that mislead us, or the model simply does not seem to be appropriate.

c.
Isolation is mentioned above, which can be cured by the recognition but before that, always acts as obstacle in the way to understand the recognition. As considerable esoteric and narrow ways are paved on which exclusively walk the ones who understand them. A mathematician cannot be surprised to find it intolerable to talk to a philosopher, which is in opposition of the case where these two roles were well combined in a Pythagoras believer.

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发表于 2010-4-5 16:40:28 |只看该作者
。。。对不起,排版有些让人恶心。。。

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发表于 2010-4-5 18:40:24 |只看该作者
我觉得跑题了。
1.
to begin with, accumulation of facts and information helps scholars unravel the mystery of the world.
题目没有提到知识积累啊?只是说对自己缺陷的认知

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In addition, recognizing the limits of our knowledge and understanding is a fundamental awareness not only indispensable but also of great magnitude for people to keep in mind.
这点沾点边,但我认为题目说的是认识到自己的问题是什么很重要,而非承认自己有问题。
而你第二点里面的a说的是能有勇气承认自己的缺陷。。所以我觉得有些偏了。
b 可以,这点可以展开说。我觉得这个才是题目想要看到的论述。

3 However, this recognition is not easy for people to always bear in mind.
这个。。。。就更偏了。。。


在我看来 ,这个题目是说: 无论在那个领域,了解自己的缺陷和学习新知识一样重要
那么你要就是,判断在各个领域的学习中,是回顾自己的问题,找出自己的缺陷重要呢还是不断学习新知识重要。

我的个人意见,LZ 辩证的看
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大家看看我这个提纲是不是颇纠结啊~
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