琳宝贝作文贴，开贴只为5月8号再战T!!!!

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琳琳开的作文贴，第一次开贴，没办法， 逼自己每天一篇作文为了5月8号最后决战T。

琳宝贝UID: 2719878

4月14号 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should only play sports for fun, not in competition or contests.-

In the 21st century, doing sports are exerting profound impact for children in modern life. When asked about the purpose for the children of doing sports, different people hold different perspective. The majority of people think that children play sports are just for fun. However, contrary to the idea of the public is my heartfelt objection to the fact that for fun is the only purpose of doing sports, when   competition and cooperation are taken into account.
Doing sports with competition can help us understand the meaning of life in the better way. We can feel happiness of success and the depression of failure in the competition, take the marathon for instance, and learn how to face them. For example, when we running on the playground on the sports meeting, we will try spare on effort to be the first in the group and overrun other players. if you are the first people reach to the end point. you will exerting a smile and the feeling of success which beyond words and your friends will proud of you. but, if you fail the game, you will unhappy and even cry for the failure. Acturally no matter you success or failure for the game, it is a valuable experience on your life.
Playing sports like football game can teach us how to cooperate with other players. I, as well as many others, know that football game can not be winning without teamwork. that is to say that the more we cooperate with other players, the more probability we win the game. doing sports is the best time we learn how to cooperate with others, this things can not be teach by any teacher on class which is very important for us  in the future. When you graduate from school you may find that the ability of cooperate is more important for you to find a good job than the knowledge you have learned in school.
When we talk about some other benefits of doing sports, isn’t it necessary for us to take some consideration on the funny aspect? Doing sports can definitely give us a sense of funny especially when we finished a hard day's study.
From what has been discussed above. We could draw a conclusion that doing sports has many meanings, and for fun is only one aspect of that.

如是_ivyUID: 2704554

4月14号 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should only play sports for fun, not in competition or contests.


In the 21st century, doing sports are exerting profound impact for children in modern life.（标红的那俩重复了）When asked about the purpose for the children of doing sports, different people hold different perspectives. The majority of people think that children playing sports are just for fun. However, contrary to the idea of the public is my heartfelt objection to the fact that for fun is the only purpose of doing sports, when   competition and cooperation are taken into account.觉得你最后一句怪怪的。你说当考虑到竞争和合作的时候，就不同意体育运动的唯一目的是娱乐了。到底小朋友运动的时候应不应该仅仅只为娱乐呢？你没说啊。

Doing sports with competition can help us understand the meaning of life in the better way.（直接better就行）We can feel happiness of success and the depression of failure in the competition,（句号） take the marathon for instance, and learn how to face them. For example, when we（可以不要） running on the playground on the sports meeting, we will try spare on effort to be the first in the group and to overrun other players. if you are the first people reaching to the end point(貌似是finishing line).--->, you will exerting a smile and the feeling(原型） of success which beyond words（语法有问题，去掉which吧。） and your friends will be proud of you. but, if you fail the game, you will be unhappy and even cry for the failure. Acturally（拼错了） no matter （貌似要加whether） you success or failure for the game, it is a valuable experience on（in） your life.

Playing sports like football game can teach us how to cooperate with other players. I, as well as many others, know that football game can not be winning（win) without teamwork. that is to say that--->, the more we cooperate with other players, the more probability we win the game. doing sports is the best time we learn how to cooperate with others,（.)this things can not be teach（taught） by any teacher on--->in class which is very important for us  in the future.(建议写成we can never learn it from any teachers in the class.更重要那个不用写了，反正你下句有写) When you graduate from school you may find that the ability of cooperate is more important for you to find a good job than the knowledge you have learned in school.（用play a more important role的句式吧。）我觉得你这一段在证明运动好，尤其是有合作的运动好，没写比赛和一般play for fun 的区别。足球这种东西，play for fun 也要合作啊。而且就算你要写合作精神在工作中很重要的话，最后举个例子证一下。还有从上段开始你就都没写这个跟children有咩关系。

When we talk about some other benefits of doing sports, isn’t it necessary for us to take some consideration on the funny aspect? Doing sports can definitely give us a sense of funny--->fun especially when we finished--->finish or have finished a hard day's study（这个有问题）.这段存在的意义是啥啊。不如不要。


From what has been discussed above. We could draw a conclusion that doing sports has many meanings, and for fun is only one aspect of that.


是有点跑题，语法错误很多，写完之后拿word查一下吧，
加油

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In the 21st century, the relationship between parents and children is one of the most serious things that all people are concerning about. When asked about the issue that how much do the parents know their children, different people hold different opinions, nobody can give a certain answer. But in my perspective, parents do not understand their children so well as they don't know what their children cares most and what major their children like before go to university.
To begin with, parents now pay more attention on their work so as to get a better income and a promotion in the company. a recent investigation conducted by Cornell university reveals that more than 80 percent of people feel more stress and they have to work ten hours more per weak than before. From the survey, it is easier to know that the more attention that parents take on their work, the less concern they take on their children. But things are quite different 50 years before. children all living together with parents, after work parents have so much time to spare with their children like having meal, doing sports and doing housework. Via this time parents can know how their children in school were and what their children want to do in weekends  
In addition, the communication between the parents and children become hard due to the fact that they come from different background. They have totally different opinion on a issue like the style of clothing and the attitude of study for instance. They often quarrel loudly on a little thing and then children would no longer tell their parents their thoughts. Parents just ask their children to get a high score on study but never care the trouble of their children's study. If the children get a lower score, their parents will criticize their children even punish them. However, parents 50 years before will accompany their children for the low score, thinking over the process of study and learn how to get improvement in the future.

Admittedly, no body can deny that parents love their children, especially in modern life; parents want to offer their children the best circumstance for study and the better nutrition on the meal. But parents seem to fail to take into account the fact that take more care on the children and try to understand their children's thinking and communication is more important than physical circumstance.


From what has been discussed above, we could safely draw a conclusion that parents do not understand their children so well as the parents 50 years ago, especially when taking parents' heavy work and generation gap into account

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In the 21st century, doing sports are exerting profound impact for children in modern life. When asked about the purpose for the children of doing sports, different people hold different perspective（加s）. The majority of people think that children play sports are just for fun.（语法问题 可以说 people think that children play sports just for fun） However, contrary to the idea of the public is my heartfelt objection to the fact that for fun is the only purpose of doing sports, when   competition and cooperation are taken into account. （语法问题 however, contrary to their opinions, I think competition is an important element of sports as well as entertainment）
Doing sports with competition can help us understand the meaning of life in the better way. (这个理由有点空大啊 )We can feel happiness of success and the depression of failure in the competition, take the marathon for instance, and learn how to face them. For example, when we running on the playground on the sports meeting, we will try spare on effort to be the first in the group and overrun other players. if you are the first people reach to the end point. you will exerting a smile and the feeling of success which beyond words and your friends will proud of you. but, if you fail the game, you will unhappy and even cry for the failure. Acturally no matter you success or failure for the game, it is a valuable experience on your life./ I  P6 |& V+ y+ A) k
Playing sports like football game can teach us how to cooperate with other players.（如果我吹毛求疵的话，我和伙伴们打着玩也可以有Copperation） I, as well as many others, know that football game can not be winning without teamwork. that is to say that the more we cooperate with other players, the more probability we win the game. doing sports is the best time we learn how to cooperate with others, this things can not be teach by any teacher on class which is very important for us  in the future. When you graduate from school you may find that the ability of cooperate is more important for you to find a good job than the knowledge you have learned in school（有点跑题了）.0 （）j（）9 j( e& o( L8 Y) O2 f
When we talk about some other benefits of doing sports, isn’t it necessary for us to take some consideration on the funny aspect? Doing sports can definitely give us a sense of funny （滑稽感？ 而且funny 不是名词 不可以用 of）especially when we finished a hard day's study.
From what has been discussed above. We could draw a conclusion that doing sports has many meanings, and for fun is only one aspect of that.
一是内容要紧扣题目来写，而是要减少语法错误。

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4.15 by 小伙子

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4月16号，do you think people should buy things made in their own country, even the price is higher than same things made somewhere else


In the 21st century, the development of technology and globalization are all exerting profound impact on our life. And the world becomes smaller than before as we can buy the things from any other country even without stepping out our city. When it comes to the issue that what's your attitude about the goods which come from other country. Different people hold different perspectives. The majority of people think that they prefer to buy things made in their own country. However, contrary to the idea of the public is my heartfelt objections that choose the things made in our country are a wise choice, especially when the price and the quality are taken into account.

To begin with, I, as well as many others, will consider more on the price when we buy goods. as a consumer, no one could deny the fact that we do want to buy the things we like with the lowest price. For example, when I want to buy a mobile phone, there are two patterns with the same function I both like and have to choose one from them; I definitely will the one which is cheaper no matter where it is made from. as I just graduate from school and have not begin to make money, so the price is a very important element when I  purchase something.

As a developing country, we are so far fall in many aspects by the developed country that the quality of the goods like TV and computer can not compete with them. Nevertheless, the quality is the most concern when we buy things. Recently, there is a investigation conducted by the consumer union reveals that more 80 percent of individual are not satisfied with the domestic technique of the goods especially in the advanced fields. So as to meet the demand of techniques, we prefer to buy things from other country like the notebook of IBM which is from American.


When we have discussed some benefits of goods from abroad, isn’t it necessary that we should give some consideration about the advantages of the domestic goods? From what have said that our country is a developing country that it is need our encourage much more. it is can not grow up without our support.

From what has been discussed above, we could safely draw a conclusion that domestic goods is not the only choice and we should consider the price and the quality more when we purchasing things.

caoxuemeiUID: 2629828

by caoxuemei

琳宝贝UID: 2719878

4月17号 作业
In the 21st century, more and more students graduate from university and under the stress of finding a good job. When it comes to the issue that what is the most important ability for the graduations to find a good job? Different people hold different perspectives. in my opinion, the ability of plan and organize is quite important for the youth, when  capability of work  and  are taken  into account.


To begin with, the ability to plan and organize is a very important aspect when finding a good job. It is not rare to see that there are less work opportunities than the amount of graduations in our society, so the companies or other organizations surely prefer to employ the excellent people among those. What is excellence? In other words, how can you prove to the employees that you are more outstanding than other competitors? At this moment, the ability of plan and organize seem to be more important and useful. Only the person with this kind of ability can be employed by companies. a recent investigate conducted by the Cornell university reveals that more than 80 percent of companies want to select the graduations with the ability to plan and organize. So it is easy to see how this ability is important for our youth.


In addition, the ability to plan and organize can help us get a good income and a higher position in our company. for example, when we engineer an item with a group, if you can make a good plan to  the whole progress and organize every part appropriately. When the item finished, all of the people thought you are the person who contributed most and the boss will give you a encouragement like a higher income or a choice of promotion. Compared with the people who don't have the ability to plan and organize and even have not find a job, you will appear the sense of fulfillment and accomplishment.



Admittedly, we can't deny that some other qualities also very important for the youth, take the independent and professional for instance. They also play important role for the youth in the future, but they can’t compete with the ability to plan and organize.

From what has been discussed above, we could safely draw a conclusion that the ability to plan and organize is a very important quality for the youth. So I suggest that all of our youth should gradually to cultivate ourselves of this kind of ability

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7# 琳宝贝
不好意思，这两天课设太忙了，没来得及修改，请原谅
In the 21st century, the development of technology and globalization are all exerting profound impact on our life. And the world becomes smaller than before as we can buy the things from any other country even without stepping out our city. When it comes to the issue, (加上debate upon感觉好些) that what's your attitude about the goods which come from other country. Different people hold different perspectives. The majority of people think that they prefer to buy things made in their own country. However, contrary to the idea of the public is my heartfelt objections that choose the things made in our country are a wise choice, especially when the price and the quality are taken into account.

To begin with, I, as well as many others, will consider more on the price when we buy goods. as a consumer, no one could deny the fact that we do(去掉) want to buy the things that（that该不该省略忘了） we like with the lowest price. For example, when I want to buy a mobile phone, there are two patterns with the same function I both like and have to choose one from them; I definitely will buy the one which is cheaper no matter where it is made from. as I just graduate from school and have not begin to make money, so the price is a very important element when I  purchase something.

As a developing country, we are so far fall in many aspects by the developed country that the quality of the goods like TV and computer cannot compete with them. Nevertheless, the quality is the most concern when we buy things. Recently, there is an investigation conducted by the consumer union reveals that more 80 percent of individual are not satisfied with the domestic technique of the goods especially in the advanced fields. So as to meet the demand of techniques, we prefer to buy things from other country like the notebook of IBM which is from American.

When we have discussed some benefits of goods from abroad, isn’t it necessary that we should give some consideration about the advantages of the domestic goods? From what have said that our country is a developing country that it is need our encourage（是动词换个） much more. It is（去掉） cannot grow up without our support.

From what has been discussed above, we could safely draw a conclusion that domestic goods is not the only choice and we should consider the price and the quality more when we purchasing things.
楼主写的结构清晰，语言流畅，仅仅个别地方有些小问题。 感觉在一些句子连接方面楼主用词不错，学习！
今早起来新网上不去，就在这改了~
修改时如有不妥，请楼主原谅。

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9# 琳宝贝

In the 21st century, more and more students graduate from university and under the stress of finding a good job. When it comes to the issue that what is the most important ability for the graduations to find a good job?(这句不应该是问句) Different people hold different perspectives. In my opinion, the ability of(ability to do) plan and organize is quite important for the youth, when  capability of work  and  are taken  into account.

To begin with, the ability to plan and organize is a very important aspect when finding a good job. It is not rare to see that there are less work opportunities than the amount of graduations in our society, so the companies or other organizations surely prefer to employ the excellent people among those. What is excellence? In other words, how can you prove to the employees that you are more outstanding than other competitors? At this moment, the ability of plan and organize seem to be more important and useful. Only the person with this kind of ability can be employed by companies. a recent investigate conducted by the Cornell university reveals that more than 80 percent of companies want to select the graduations with the ability to plan and organize. So it is easy to see how this ability is important for our youth.

In addition, the ability to plan and organize can help us get a good income and a higher position in our company. for example, when we engineer an item with a group, if you can make a good plan to  the whole progress and organize every part appropriately. When the item finished, all of the people thought you are the person who contributed most and the boss will give you a encouragement like a higher income or a choice of promotion. Compared with the people who don't have the ability to plan and organize and even have not find a job, you will appear the sense of fulfillment and accomplishment.

Admittedly, we can't deny that some other qualities also very important for the youth, take the independent and professional for instance. They also play important role for the youth in the future, but they can’t compete with the ability to plan and organize. From what has been discussed above, we could safely draw a conclusion that the ability to plan and organize is a very important quality for the youth. So I suggest that all of our youth should gradually to cultivate ourselves of this kind of ability

你这通篇没说和keep rooms clean and organized的关系，跑题了。跑题和不跑题有可能只在一句话之间。

琳宝贝UID: 2719878

18号作业，这篇感觉很不好找论点，希望多看看别人怎么写的吧，嗨~~~~~ 好纠结的一篇啊，，
being creative， rather than planning carefully， will come up with best solution to a problem


When it comes to the issue that what is your attitude when facing problem, different people hold different perspectives. A majority of civilians think that being creative will come up with best solution to a problem. But a small group oppose to the statement, they argue that planning carefully is a wise choice. In my opinion, though the benefits that being creative when facing a problem enjoys are, they cannot compete with the merits that planning carefully have. I will give my reasons following.
First of all, a good plan can reduce the probability of making mistakes and come up with some solutions to the potential problems in advance. So many incidents may appear no matter in our life or in work that the only thing we can do is to forecast can make some possible solutions to account for them. my personal experience lead to trust that a good plan can help us solve the problem better compared with making a creative means. If you have no plan, and hold all expectation to being creative solution when facing problem, who can ensure that you will come up with a smart solution in such a short time?

Furthermore, planning carefully can give us a choice of option that select the best solution to a certain problem. Facing a problem, like an emergency during traveling, two attitudes will lead to two totally different solutions. if you can plan it in advance or solve the emergency step by step, during this process,other people can give you different suggestions that maybe more helpful to this solution, and then, you can select the best one among them. Nevertheless, if you just want to solve problem in a creative way rather than plan in advance or step by step, you may fail to the problem and conduce more problems.


When we have discussed the advantages of plan carefully when facing a problem, isn’t it necessary that we give some consideration of being creative for the problems? I should admit that being creative can make original solutions for some problems. and not all the problems we can plan in advance, more and more new problem will appear, in this moment, being creative will more useful and helpful. But this situation is not usual after all.

From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that plan carefully is more helpful and efficient than hold all the hope to be creative when facing the problems.

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请假暂停写作，需要大量时间攻击阅读和听力，，，为自己祈祷！！！