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bruce520UID: 2634940

4.19 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can benefit more
from traveling in their own country than traveling to foreign countries.
As the advancement of the economy, international tourism attract more and more
contriversy by the public. Many people hold that travel abroad is not as good as
a inside tour of your own country. Nonetheless, as far as I see, I prefer the international
trouism more for the following reasons.
People who consider to make a travel in his or her own country can benefit more than
a international tourism may hold that the later one usually cost more. Honestly speaking,
we often should pay more money and time to pursue a international tourism, however,
it is worthy for what you have spend for the following reason. First of all, traveling in other
countries may bring your some valueable sight which stands for another culture that you may never
see in your own country. Therefore, it is worthy for your cost to make this fantasy tour.
Moreover, the expenditure of travel abroad is not always high than a inside tour. For example,
may be the country which you plan to get a much lower consumption level than your country.
In that accassion, the budage may be very comfortable for you.
What is more, people who like traveling in the own country more also usually suggest
that the international tourism providing less security. The problem of security is a world
wide problem, that is means that you cannot recognize that some countries will be definitely
safe, while other countries are not. When people travel to a foreign country, his or her
safe will be focused by the local government which decide to develop its tourism. In the best
way, you can also choose some countries which are more safe than others in your mind. Maybe
that is a part of your travel plan.
Last but not least, the inside travel also supply us many precious  things. The tourism
of our own countries sometimes play a siginificant role in the progress of the local enconomy
. However, the inside tourism may not fit for some its own people because it may provide
a single culture background for them.
To sum up, although travleing in our own countries may be more convinence, we should
pay more attention to the international tourism because it present us more others things
which the inside toursim cannot provide.

wyl_stevenUID: 2728535

1# bruce520

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we often should pay more money and time to pursue a international tourism, however,
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countries may bring your some valueable(valuable) sight which stands for another culture that you may never 1 l! i' o/ _; {# k
see in your own country. Therefore, it is worthy for your cost to make this fantasy tour.
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In that accession, the budage(budget)may be very comfortable for you.
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of our own countries sometimes play a siginificant (significant)role in the progress of the local enconomy(economy) howwever, the inside tourism may not fit for some its own people because it may provide
a single culture background for them.
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which the inside tourism(tourism) cannot provide.
楼主写的逻辑很清晰 就是拼写错误太多了