求拍！小弟第一篇issue

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这是小弟第一篇issue，很惨...我听说大家不愿意改语法错误多的，所以已经在word上改了些语法错误(我知道还有很多)。我的问题：1.字数不够，究竟怎样展开才能充分 2.语言请求规范 3.请帮忙看看逻辑和链接词，句的使用，请帮忙改改。特别特别地谢谢了！

88 "Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."

I totally agree with the above view that technologies play a crucial role in our social awareness that we utilize to define the relationships between ourselves with the others, and to know what is right or not.

The development of the science restricts our mind to realize individual and society while we portray it by a variety of symbols. For example, the consanguineous marriage occurred, which is a consequence that the superstition of social customs, due to the deficiency of the Genetics. It leads to high rates of genetic disease, especially among the imperial household in the Europe. But now this misfortune is less and less by advances in medical Genetics and just the advances force the government promulgate regulations of forbidding consanguineous marriage. As time passes, this custom in society disappeared and the correct ethics of marriage was set up.

On the other hand, if the technologies make no different with the social customs and ethics, why the technology of clone and the born of the sheep bring the surge of ethics to the whole world? Thousands of scientists debate the identity of the clone man, once the technology is used in the human. Because of the matter we create, need a new definition in ethics. Thus the scope of definition is limited by the last development of technology. Nonetheless, one might say that the customs and ethics are spiritual separate from the progress of technology in materially. Partly it is due to the self of spirit but our consciousness consisted with what we obverse and touch, not with itself. I argue that the caveman, eat the raw meat, couldn’t understand the modest and politeness.

As a result, the technologies determine the behaviors in the public and the standard of morality.