我的第一篇GRE文，请进来指点

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大家好，我刚开始看GRE的东西，为了确定自己能否报十月份的G,我试着写了一下作文。请大家根据作文给我提提建议，10G呢，还是明年的6G。我对分数期望比较高。今天刚下的软件，刚写的文，自己还没修改。因为时间快到了，最后就没在写。感觉写的速度太慢了。还有好多表达不知道。。。也不知有没有希望备考10G,请指示。

TOPIC: ISSUE55 - "Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education."
WORDS: 380
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-7-19 21:04:43




I confirmly think that competition for high grades among students seriously limitts the quality of learning at all levels of eduation.Although high grades demonstrates that one has master the knowledge as requested,it is often cheating and unbeliveable.And what's more,the consentration on grades usually equals to the ignorance on other abilities.

Learning is a long progress,in which we need to accumulate various knowledge tips in a long period,this is ture in some traditional majors especially.For example,a student of ancient Chinese history,need to read a lot of books concerning the evolve of this amazing east Asia ancient country.To understand a special expression or phrase on ancient Chinese's historical books,we often need to check in the library for several days,wheras this expression or phrase may just one of the small questions of an exam .If a student ,who wants to have a firmly base in Chinese history,is preparing for his exam of GRE ,may be he will find that the whole time for preparing the entire exam is merely enough for him to understand parts of question ,and thus he express elaborately in these questions and leave other questions untouched. Finally,he got a low score in this course undoubtly,but can we say he isn't a good student in those special area in Chinese history?No.And in the same time ,there are many students who just reviewed what their teachers had said in the class got a high grades.In this example ,we can find that the persue of higher grades makes the majority of students choose to obey their teaches orther than do their own reading.

Whats more,more and more students choose to get their aimed high grades by kinds of methods,no matter it's lawful or unlawful .These years, the atmosphere of academic research in China is changing worse and worse.The essence of this phenomenon is that thousands of students and even scholars cheating in their articles in order to get more attention or high social acceptance everyyear.If there aren't so many people that compete for the high grades or graduated from the universities which encourage their undergraduates compete severely in grades,i think, there will not be so many scalders in the academic research in china.

Of course,grades is important for a student who want to be a scholar,but we should remember there are also another things that are unmissable.