[1010G]For One Reason作文互改小组总帖

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1.小组规则：https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=1123313&page=1&extra=#pid1774166875
2.组员备考日志汇总：
    梦的溪夜：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1123580-1-1.html
    dycccc：  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1125212-1-1.html
    其他成员日志待添加
3.作业格式
a. 请组员发作业帖时，
b. 作业字体统一用4号字            
请小组成员现将各自的拼写和基本语法错误自己纠正之后再上传。
4. 作业提交（本部分规则参考文以载道小组规则，在此致谢！） ：     
    23：00 前发布作业贴，标题按照以下格式:
    若为issue： i习作temp  issue题号 【ForOneReason小组3】 日期 ，argument形式类推，分类为a习作temp。
    请注意版面发帖格式，避免锁帖影响互改。
    然后每个人都在相应的作文大帖里列出自己作文贴的链接，写明： 日期 ，题号
5.互改要求：      
我会在每次习作排出互改顺序，组员对自己负责批改的作文尽量在当日晚24：00以前完成批改意见并且反馈给作者，时间实在不凑巧的，在次日中午12：30以前必须递交。
我们鼓励大家积极改文章，每一天都有新文章，但是之前改过的文章，之后仍然会改变批改顺序继续修改下去，修改任务一并放在互改顺序里，同一篇文章有多人修改。
6.作业完成交改要求 ：   
1 请在上传每一次作业前，先借助word纠错功能（模考后期请练习自我检查）把语言点错误改正过来，节省批改时间。   
2 批改兼顾语法问题，注意词汇句式多样性，重点梳理逻辑谋篇，建议将自己的想法和要点进行分享。   
3 建议批改时纠错用红色标注，值得学习的地方用蓝色标注，一目了然。   
4 要求批改后写一个短小的简评，指出最需要注意的若干问题。
可参考作文互改指南：https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=670640&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Ddigest
7.小组总的训练计划已经给出，参考链接：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1125243-1-1.html
安排的原则是Issue按照分类每个分类中按频率排序，每个话题练习至少两个。Argument按照频率依次排序。
温情提示：由于大家的机考时间不一致，希望大家根据自己的时间安排，把小组晚于自己机考时间的练习自己练写。

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7.20作业内容：
Issue51:
"Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."
Argument7：
The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Clearview newspaper.                    
"In the next mayoral election, residents of Clearview should vote for Ann Green, who is a member of the Good Earth Coalition, rather than for Frank Braun, a member of the Clearview town council, because the current members are not protecting our environment. For example, during the past year the number of factories in Clearview has doubled, air pollution levels have increased, and the local hospital has treated 25 percent more patients with respiratory illnesses. If we elect Ann Green, the environmental problems in Clearview will certainly be solved."  
作业汇总贴见：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1125417&extra=
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7.21作业内容：
Issue 130：
"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
Argument51：
The following appeared in a medical  newsletter.                                                                                                                  
"Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician, were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment."        
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7.22作业内容
issue121
"At various times in the geological past, many species have become extinct as a result of natural, rather than human, processes. Thus, there is no justification for society to make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species."
argument38
The following memo appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council.                    
"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."  

作业回复到第一次作业的帖子里，点击“编辑”然后加入新的链接

梦的溪夜UID: 2616129

本次作业修改顺序暂定为按组员序号，1，2，3，4，5，6，7，8，2修改1，3修改2，4修改3，5修改4，。。。，1修改8.
对于前面一个同学如果没有写argument的，后面一个同学修改更往前一个序号的同学的argu，这样就连贯起来了，这次没写argu的同学就可以只改前面同学的issue。比如，2号同学没写argu，那么3号改1号的argu~~
另外，如果想要自己的文章被改两遍就主动改别人的 然后如果发现自己被改了两遍的要回改。希望大家积极的多改，同一篇文章改5次比写5篇文章收获可能更大~
如顺序有变动会在晚上10：30以前修改，有原因需要请假的请于这个时间以前请假，请大家修改前看好自己的作文号。
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7.21 本次参加的人有2、3、4、5、6、8批改顺序：2改4、3改5、4改6、5改8、6改2、8改3

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加油~！

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由于4\8号请假，修改顺序变更为2改6、3改5、5改2、6改3 3# 梦的溪夜