argument 161--尝试racoon的思路...【泪流满面系列互改】

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ARGUMENT161 - In a study of reading habits of Leeville citizens conducted by the University of Leeville, most respondents said they preferred literary classics as reading material. However, a follow-up study conducted by the same researchers found that the type of book most frequently checked out of each of the public libraries in Leeville was the mystery novel. Therefore, it can be concluded that the respondents in the first study had misrepresented their reading habits.

【昨天看了racoon的 argument就应该这样写。。泪流满面。。打击很大。真的感觉到绝望中又带点希望，要知道我以前的那种静态攻击，找到一个错误是一个，忽略作者逻辑链的作文还没能在限时内练好，现在又来了这个。不过看的是心悦诚服，不然argument像以前那样写真的很没意思，动态攻击才是真谛。 不知道有没有领悟 -。-继续摸索】



Before concluding that the first study is an error one, the evidence cited in the argument should be examined from several other angles. The arguer assumes that these two study conducted by the same researchers are comparable while ignoring several reasons that why one cannot conclude that the second study is a correct one while the first study is wrong.

Initially, no evidence indicates how long time between these two studies. Common sense informs us that nothing remain the same over extended time. Thus, if the second study were conducted by the same researchers one year after the first study, it stands a good chance to think that the preference of reading of Leeville citizens may change. They may be affected by a hot movie whose theme has something to do with mystery novel. Or perhaps the structure of population has changed greatly and the respondents involved in the second study differ from those respondents attended the first study in many aspects.

Moreover, the statistics from the public libraries do not lend strong support to the arguer's assumption that people prefer mystery novel
over literary classics.Perhaps the public libraries have much more mystery novels than literary classics and hence it is understandable that people rent more mystery novels than literary classics. Or perhaps people who like reading literacy classics are inclined to but book rather than to lent one from public libraries. Besides, in the absence of the lasting time of the second study, it is tempting to think that this seemly mania for mystery novels might be motivated by a nationwide feat and cannot tell the real reading habits of Leeville citizens.Without ruling out these or other possibilities, the arguer cannot justifiably equal the frequent checked out of mystery novel to its intensive popularity.

Finally,whether the representativeness and validity of these two study remains unknown. We do not know the number and backgrounds of respondents and how the researchers conduct these surveys. If the researchers only interview their classmates, or conduct their surveys in a relatively small region, the result of the study of reading habits cannot guarantee representativeness at all. Besides, the argument does not mention the way the researchers conducted the first study. It is possible that the result of the first study is analyzed from the answers in the questionnaire while the conclusion of the second study is derived from the observations of the checked out condition of public libraries. Thereby, we cannot evaluate the change of reading habits of Leeville citizens from two different studies.

Thus, to make a study of comparison valid and accurate, it must be controlled. Everything should remain the same except the factors researchers experiment on. However, the studies cited in the argument fails to do that.

(2010-7-30 11:42:38)

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interesting
个人认为你最后的结尾还不如不要 当然 只是我个人意见

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2# chinese_idiot

什么结尾？？

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Everything should remain the same except the factors researchers experiment on
这句话你想表达的中文意思是什么？

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4# chinese_idiot
非学术的说一句，lz的头像用的u2，可是名字确实GD的American Idiot的变体。。哈哈

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5# DonDonDon

哈哈 其实你可以找到他们的内在联系的呀 都是rock
虽然greenday很多人觉得是Punk但我自己还是把他们当rock看的
你还可以看我的签名 这是oasis的歌啊

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6# chinese_idiot

。。GD是rock？？不敢苟同，不过随着音乐界限的模糊，他们是什么类型已经不重要，重要的是歌传达的东西~ 很喜欢U2专辑的封面们，很有爱，你应该听过one吧~超级爱那句歌词：You say love is a temple，love a higher law~~对于爱情的理解好棒啊~~~~不过我最喜欢的还是coldplay，够英伦，可是又够有自己的特色，文艺但不小众，流行但不媚俗。。。。

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这个帖子快变成水贴了。。。。
coldplay确实很赞 但是我觉得parachute之后的专辑水平明显比不上以前
不过一首yellow够他们传世的了
嗨 如果gre机考时题目是对音乐的分析 写几千字都是一气呵成啊 其实教育类艺术类什么都好写 就是文化类这东西我是一点办法都没有 我一直都不是很在意文化这东西的 虽然说中国是一个文化上的国度而非地域上的国度

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果然是和题目一样 楼主泪流满面了