issue159 小弟第一次发文 求拍 谢谢

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第一次发文求拍 狠狠的拍 写完后修改了一下 字数可能不准确了 另外谁能告诉我怎么发附件？！

题目：ARGUMENT166 - The following appeared in a local newspaper.
"People should not be misled by the advertising competition between Coldex and Cold-Away, both popular over-the-counter cold medications that anyone can purchase without a doctor's prescription. Each brand is accusing the other of causing some well-known, unwanted side effect: Coldex is known to contribute to existing high blood pressure and Cold-Away is known to cause drowsiness. But the choice should be clear for most health-conscious people: Cold-Away has been on the market for much longer and is used by more hospitals than is Coldex. Clearly, Cold-Away is more effective."
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In this argument the author comes to the conclusion that Cold-Away is more effective than Coldex.To justify the claim,the author points that Cold-Away has been on the market for much longer and is used by more hospitals than is Coldex.Close scrutiny of this argumetn reveals that it is unconvincing in several aspects.
To begin with,by point out that most health-conscious people will choose Cold-Away which just cause drowsiness rather than Coldex which will cause existing high blood pressure.But no evidence show that the high blood pressure caused by the medicion is bad for health.It entirly possibly that the tempt high pressure caused by the Coldex can only last for a shot time that do no harm to the health of patients or for another reason that the high blood pressure is designed to cansed by Coldex that can help to cure the cold instead of that kind of harmful effect of Coldex mensioned in the argument.
In addition,Cold-Away has been on the market for much longer can not be a considerable reason to prove that Cold-Away is much more effective than Coldex.Since there is no futher study show which medicion is more effective it is entirely possibly that the new come medicion use more advanced technology that can be much more effective than Cold-Away.The arguer must show more convincing evidence before I can accept that Cold-Away is much more effective.
Finally,the author unfairly infer from the wider use of Cold-Away that it is much more effective.Since Coldex came to school later than Cold-Away and the author provide no evidence to the effect of the two kind of medicion,it is entirely possibly that it was because the less time that Coldex has been on market that most of the hospitals has not find it way more effective.It also might be that it was because of the law prize of Cold-Away that make it some popular.Many doctor may also use Cold-Away as a kind of sleeping pill because of its side effect which makes the wider use of it.
In some ,the conclusion reached in this argument is invalid and misleading.To make it ligically acceptable,the arguer  would have to substantiate that Cold-Away is much more effective than Coldex and also much more health.I need to know the reason of the wider use of Cold-away before I can accept that it is more effective.

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