第一篇作文issue11求拍

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3月初要考了，今天才开始写全文，希望大家提点建议，谢谢啦！
TOPIC: ISSUE11 - "All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
WORDS: 455          TIME: 01:25:11          DATE: 2011-2-19 11:46:39
      The speaker asserts that the all nations should support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the most persistent problems in the world.While this assertion has merit,I think it unfairly simplified the progress of building a global university and generalized  the imfluence of the global university.Many important facets of the problem are not been taken into consideration.
     Admittedly,in the era of increasing globalization,the development of a global university has its positive effect that people can not overlook.As the  technology develops at an amazing speed,and the sociaty become growingly open,the world is witnessing a mixture of the culture,economy,policy and envirenment to some extent.when people deal with the probem of global warming,all the world should take action because of the globalization.people should face the pollutant together,make policies hand in hand and provide necessary help to other countries.Another persuasive example comes when peolpe confront the global financial crisis.As the collaboration between counries accelerates,a problem in one countries will spread to others in a short time,thus the global action can not be underestimated.In addition,a global  university has positive impact when people handle the difficulties of the elimination of drug and terriorism.From what is asserted above,the global university has its outstanding effect to develop.
    While the global university is of great importance,we should also take the progress of building it into consideration.The most fundamental factor should be the financial costs.Should all nations provide the same amount of money  to the design and building progress?Apparently no one will agree with it.Then should some nation with more wealth support more?It is also not a pefect solution in the long run.The second problem is what kind of teachers should they choose and the source of them.Different culture cultivate different teacher,and thus lead to different opinions on some issues. As a consequence, the different backgrounds may be obstales on the way to success.Totally give thought to  these factors,all nations will hesitate to support the global university.
    Another fundamental problem is that the impact of the global university may not be as outstanding as the speaker asserts,or even lead to a negative effect when applied to some events.Once the global university is driven by some nations of marvelous influence,it lose the primary purpose of designing it.The gobal university may work as a tool for the powful nations to aggrandize their benefits.In the long run,the welfare of other people in the world may experience surprising harm,and the future of all nations can not be estimated to be stable.
    To sum up,although a global university may melt many problems and obstales in some situations,more attention should be attached to the design and building progress.Also th long-term running should not be neglected.All nations have to think twice before their decision.

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LZ不用太心急，其实你发文章上来之前可以先自己检查一遍语法和拼写，推荐你直接复制到word你就会发现有很多红线。
大略看一下，LZ先把基本的语法以及拼写注意一下先。
其次，LZ得分清楚这是Issue不是Argu，然后你再看看这篇文章像不像一篇Argu？
3月初考真的不用急，用心去做，每天保证完成任务，LZ你可以的。

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2# fangjianrui
谢谢你的建议和鼓励啦！太着急了所以出了很多错，也不知道怎么写。。。哎慢慢努力去了