issue 136 总是有选择...

crazyjooUID: 2805124

TOPIC: ISSUE136 - "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
WORDS: 595


position:赞成，没选择只是因为态度问题
1。选择很多而且人们乐于选择
     选择是乐趣（点餐，买衣服，选伴侣）
    选择是种简化（科学假说，员工提意见）
2。没选择是因为人的态度问题
      2.1 没有选择符合自己胃口从而认为没选择
       负面作用
           
3。 我们应该积极乐观地发现选择，在有限的选择里作出选择




Should we go to the library? Would you prefer a cup of coffee over a bottle of orange juice?
All of these questions are choices to us and our life teems with multiple options. In my view, it is personal attitude toward life that decides how many choices he/she has to choose everyday. In other words, optimistic people tend to have more choices while pessimistic people do not.


To begin with, few people would say that they have no choices. In fact, people love to choose and choices usually serve to simplify some complex events and provide people with some possible solutions. In restaurant, we order the food we favored. In shopping center, we pick the clothes we like. Besides, happiness marriage is a product of two-way selections. In this light, to choose is really an enjoyable moment in our lives. Further, it is apparent that things will become easier when we got options to choose since we need not to figure out a brand new strategy or solution. The bosses evaluate various suggestion recommended by employees and finally choose one for action; scientists render hypothesis to facilitate the scientific research. Through judging the correctness of the hypothesis, scientists step closer to the truth.


However, it is not uncommon to see that there are some people complaining
that they have no choice. Admittedly, choice is affected by objective attitude as well as subjective factors which usually are inevitable. Although the subjective factors such as the whole society often decrease the number of multiple options, it is still too hasty to say that we have no choice left. Even in the great depression, people could still choose to complain all day long or to go out and seek for a job. In my view, in our modern world, it is more of objective factors than subjective factors make people think they have no choice.


In most cases, people complaining that they have no choice are those ones who have to choose some choices they dislike. Can you still buy luxuries during the great depression? Could you still lead a peaceful life during the Second World War, especially you are living in Europe?
However, we should not let subjective factors totally determine the way of lives we lead. When one facing with hardship, claiming "I have not choice" is a sign of vulnerability. Such people tend to accept passively all the negative influences since they do not have the chance to choose what they want. Moreover, they are also reluctant to alleviate the problems. This attitude is naive as well as dangerous for the possibilities that the productivity will be halted by such pessimistic perception and the moral of whole society will decrease immediate upon the arrival of catastrophe or economic crisis.


Therefore, we should maintain a positive attitude and insist on the belief that we always have choices. God will open a window for you when he closes a door. A positive attitude will broaden our view sight and hence help us find choices which have been always existing in the intersections of the road of life. With the belief that we always have choices, people become more optimistic Thus, they are willing to examine a matter in several different angles and to create possible choices even though they will suffer from the process of exploration.


As shown above, even though the subjective factors appear to limit our choices, we still have multiple choices. This idea is not only a fact that determined by the modern world which provides us much more choices than ever before, but also a positive perception which serves us well.

觉得无话可说啊。。好烂

starfirezhuUID: 2842465

TOPIC: ISSUE136 - "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
WORDS: 595


position:赞成，没选择只是因为态度问题
1。选择很多而且人们乐于选择
If you really want, you always have choices!
     选择是乐趣（点餐，买衣服，选伴侣）
    选择是种简化（科学假说，员工提意见）
2。没选择是因为人的态度问题
Attitude can affect choices either positively or negatively!
      2.1 没有选择符合自己胃口从而认为没选择
       负面作用     
3。 我们应该积极乐观地发现选择，在有限的选择里作出选择
Sometimes choices come from active discovery rather than ready presented.


GOOD! You finally began to draw outlines before writing. I strongly recommend you write outlines in English instead. This will save time and help you a lot.



Should we go to the library? Would you prefer a cup of coffee over a bottle of orange juice?
All of these questions are choices to us and our life teems with multiple options. In my view, it is personal attitude toward life that decides how many choices he/she has to choose everyday. In other words, optimistic people tend to have more choices while pessimistic people do not.
Choices are always related to more than one items! .... library or classroom? ...coffee or juice?...
GOOD!

To begin with, few people would say that they have no choices. In fact, people love to choose and choices usually serve to simplify some complex events and provide people with some possible solutions. In restaurant, we order the food we favored. In shopping center, we pick the clothes we like. Besides, happiness marriage is a product of two-way selections. In this light, to choose is really an enjoyable moment in our lives. Further, it is apparent that things will become easier when we got options to choose since we need not to figure out a brand new strategy or solution. The bosses evaluate various suggestion recommended by employees and finally choose one for action; scientists render hypothesis to facilitate the scientific research. Through judging the correctness of the hypothesis, scientists step closer to the truth.


However, it is not uncommon to see that there are some people complaining
that they have no choice. Admittedly, choice is affected by objective attitude as well as subjective factors which usually are inevitable. Although the subjective factors such as the whole society often decrease the number of multiple options, it is still too hasty to say that we have no choice left. Even in the great depression, people could still choose to complain all day long or to go out and seek for a job. In my view, in our modern world, it is more of objective factors than subjective factors make people think they have no choice.


In most cases, people complaining that they have no choice are those ones who have to choose some choices they dislike. Can you still buy luxuries during the great depression? Could you still lead a peaceful life during the Second World War, especially you are living in Europe?
However, we should not let subjective factors totally determine the way of lives we lead. When one facing with hardship, claiming "I have not choice" is a sign of vulnerability. Such people tend to accept passively all the negative influences since they do not have the chance to choose what they want. Moreover, they are also reluctant to alleviate the problems. This attitude is naive as well as dangerous for the possibilities that the productivity will be halted by such pessimistic perception and the moral of whole society will decrease immediate upon the arrival of catastrophe or economic crisis.


Therefore, we should maintain a positive attitude and insist on the belief that we always have choices. God will open a window for you when he closes a door. A positive attitude will broaden our view sight and hence help us find choices which have been always existing in the intersections of the road of life. With the belief that we always have choices, people become more optimistic Thus, they are willing to examine a matter in several different angles and to create possible choices even though they will suffer from the process of exploration.


As shown above, even though the subjective factors appear to limit our choices, we still have multiple choices. This idea is not only a fact that determined by the modern world which provides us much more choices than ever before, but also a positive perception which serves us well.

觉得无话可说啊。。好烂
还不错吧，打4.5分！

hyacinthUID: 2184492

your example does not support your points...

at least you did not show the readers how you relate your examples to your points... you can list as many as examples as you want, but that does not prove your statement is right....

and try to develop your ideas instead of writing as many points as possible

your essay is at most a 4 to me.

crazyjooUID: 2805124

3# hyacinth

exactly..2楼是我爸爸，在给我鼓励呢。。呵呵 不到一周就要考了
我以前观点就是正反2个点；现在学高手。。像数学一样分类讨论了 。。的确需要balance一样 谢谢斑竹！
关于证据问题~好好思考ing

hyacinthUID: 2184492

4# crazyjoo



cute Dad... haha

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the use of example in one's essay is kind of similar to analogy...

when you are trying to make a point by giving an example, just think about how you find the answer to analogy problems and if someone does not know the relationship between the given pair of words and the answer, you have to explain to them.  This explaination should be your reasoning in your essay...

hope it helps~

starfirezhuUID: 2842465

Suddenly, it come up to my mind that you have to discern what particular choices you are talking about. Good choices or bad choices! It's nonsense to say you always have choices if these choices are all bad ones! So your position will have to change to make the statement clearer by modifying it to: The absence of good choice is a circumstance that is very, very often.