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发表于 2010-9-5 22:18:11 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 enyadido 于 2010-9-5 22:21 编辑

啊,先贴一篇以前写的吧,以后再写作业~~
我作文写得烂,大家猛拍……


The issue that should people use public transportation in free is a topic that is often discussed. Some people embrace such a chance to not pay to use the public transportation, personally speaking, however, the public transportation should reduce their fees instead of totally free.

To begin with, utilize public transportation is a good way to protect our environment. Nowadays, there are a growing number of people have their own cars, some families almost have one more cars, due to this, the pollution in our country was increasing heavy.
Compare with the private cars, the public vehicle could bring more people and produce less pollution. If the transportation company reduce the price and add the lines, it will attract more people to use
mass transit, and the use of private cars will also decrease.



What's more, if more people use the public transportation instead of their own cars, it will be less congestion in our country.
In China, some big cities like Beijing and Shanghai always congest during the work times; the great use of transportation system will relieve this situation. At that time, it will be a convenient way to use the public tools.


Finally, reduce the fees of transportation will save money for citizens.
With the increasing price of gas-oil, the people who have their own cars will take heavy money to buy gas-oil. If the price of public vehicles decreases their fees, it will save more money for citizens.


Despite of those advantages discussed above, it is impractical free to use the public transportation. It is because that the transportation company needs to get some benefits to maintain their operation. Even though the government will give some financial help to the company, the fee to maintain the public transportation is really a big number. Thus, transportation would better reduce their fees instead of totally free.

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发表于 2010-9-5 23:54:08 |显示全部楼层
呃……难道是太烂了,没人改……

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