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发表于 2010-9-20 16:54:40 |显示全部楼层

本帖最后由曼小沫于 2010-9-20 22:44 编辑

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发表于 2010-9-20 16:55:59 |显示全部楼层

本帖最后由曼小沫于 2010-9-20 22:44 编辑

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Nowadays, lots of young children have a heavy burden because they are required to learn all kinds of things. Parents always want children have a wonderful future and in their mind, learning earlier and more can help their children win in the competitions in their life. The young children who are led by parents go to a music class or the other kinds learning class after school is a common phenomenon. In my view, it is an unreasonable deed. It makes the children very tired and annoyed to the learning. Besides that the parents will have a heavier burden to raise a child. So I disagree with the statement, in my opinion, the study of the art or music need to be based on the interest not on the requirements.

Firstly, it is no denied that learning too much things will make the children have a heavy burden. Because the abilities of thinking and learning are still developing, the learning of math, language, science and history which are the basic part of the knowledge system is already hard to the children. If parents strictly to ask the children to learn playing the piano, drawing pictures in their apart time, it will make the children much more tired and have not enough time to relax and play. As a result, the children not only have a bad emotion, but a bad health conditions also. Our life abounds with such examples. My little sister needs to learn playing piano and also the painting. Although she is only six, she always has no time to play with the family. When I talked with her, she always complains about her life which is filled with the learning in the school and after school. Such a little girl, but she is unhappy because the heavy burden. And she always sits on the seat or stay in a room for a whole day. It has a bad influence on her health.

Secondly, if one wants to learn the art or the music very well, it will need the interest and enthusiasm. But the children who are sent to learn these things are almost depend on their parents’ thought and they may have no interest on the art or music. They only take the learning as finishing homework. Learning art or music in this way will always have a result opposite to their parents’ hoping. Many of my classmates have this situation. My classmate Jimmy learned playing piano when he is a child. But he thought it was boring and tired from the first day he learned it. So he stopped learning it when he stepped into high school and never wanted to touch the piano again. Although he learned playing piano many years in his childhood, he can play a whole song after he doesn’t practice for several years. So the interest is the best teacher. Parents can require their children to learn what when they are young but after they grow up the things they learned as a special skill will always depend on their interest.

Thirdly, children spend time on this kind of learning and the parents need to spend lots of money. As we all know, the classes which teach the painting, dancing or music are always expensive. So the parents need to spend much money on this kind of learning. It is a heavy burden for the parents. Besides that, the children need to stay at school to learn the basic knowledge and need to learn the art after school. By doing so, the children will have a little time to stay with their parents. So the parents can’t have a good communication with their children. It has a bad influence on the cultivating of a child.

In conclusion, the children shouldn’t require to learn the art or music or the other things in addition the basic knowledge such as the math. Depended by their interest, it will good for the children and also for their parents.

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