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For instance, I have learned how to do household chore at a young age and know the difficulty doing household chore, so I will always be grateful to my parent as they have done so mush for the family

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Some people think children should study and play, other people think children should help with household chores

When facing the issue of whether children should do household chore, people's opinions are divergent involving the issue, some hold that children put study and play as top priority when they are young, while others hold a totally different idea. From my perspective, I fundamentally hold that it is meaningful and necessary for children to help with household chore considering advantages brought by doing household chore .

To begin with, doing household chore can definitely give rise to sense of responsibility of children. As we know, household chore is very troublesome and complex for parents to do. By encouraging children to take part in the process can make them aware of the difficulty of household chore and train their sense of responsibility towards the whole family.For instance, I have learned how to do household chore at a young age and know the difficulty doing household chore, so I will always be grateful to my parent as they have done so mush for the family . On the contrary, a child just seeking all kinds of entertainments, will never have chances to feel the responsibility that they should take. There is no doubt that a person, who are not conscientious toward his family, can never be a well-developed person.

In addition, through doing household chore, not only children can gain precious practical skills, but also promote their interests toward study. One apt example example of this point comes immediately to my mind, as I have learned how to do household chore and even how to cook in a young age, nowadays  I usually cook some delicious food for my friends and win their appraise. Besides, through doing household chore, I find it very useful for us to learn physics, thus when I was a senior high school student ,  I was keen on physics and always perform well in physics.

Admittedly,  some people may argue that it would waste children lots of time for them to do household chore, but the fact is that children are not facing so much study task, further more I always regard it a good way to relax  through doing household chore.

As has been discussed above,  I strongly conceive that it is essential and advisable for children to do household chore concerning lots of benefits brought by it.

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Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished.
In order to educated people, especially children, most movies producers would choose to make movies that people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished, nevertheless I still hold that not all of the movies should demonstrate that bad people will be punished and good people be paid back.

To begin with, some of the movies are just produced to entertain audiences, there is no good or bad characters in the movie, let alone, bad people being punished and good people being praised here. For instance, the famous TV series"the big bomb theory" is really popular nowadays among college students in China. The male characters and female characters in the series are really very funny. They have got some funny appearance and action as well as interesting words, so it is unlikely to distinguish who are bad or not. The basic objective of the TV series is to entertain. In general, it is unfair to assert that all of the movies should show bad person being punished and good person being rewarded as the existence of such kind of movies.

In addition, some movies are trying to tell people the realism of society, if the movie and TV producers are always trying to praise the good and criticize the bad, then the movie and TV series will lose their value. One apt example of this point is that a movie, called "After graduation" , describes the life of university students after graduation. Due to the high employment pressure, many graduates cannot find a good job, though they are really intelligent and knowledgeable. However, those who are not only inferior in study and capability but also have done many immoral behaviors  would find a satisfactory job, because of their family's strong background. Nevertheless it is  unfair and will cause the unhappiness of audiences, but no one can deny the fact that this kind of movies will arouse people's deeper consideration and understanding toward the society.

Admittedly,  some educative programs, especially children programs, should strengthen the point that good spirit will always be awarded, while evil spirit will be discarded. However, it is unwarranted to impose this restriction on all of the other movies concerning the objectives of some entertaining movies as well as some realism movies.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but less vacation time.


Currently, people are facing a high employment pressure, a job with more vacation usually means less money earned, a job with high salary usually leaves us less vacation. So which kind of job should we choose? People's opinions are divergent involving the issue. I fundamentally hold that a job with high salary is better tough it means I have less vacation time concerning lots of benefits brought by a high salary job.

To begin with, a  high salary job enables me to live a better life. Nowadays, in china, it is especially difficult for us to live a normal life in big cities. If we want to buy a house in a big city, then we have to earn enough money. Without enough a high salary, never can we find a house to live, let alone buying cars or supporting all our family. Besides,with no money, though we have much vacation, we cannot go anywhere and cannot enjoy the vacation.A statistical report from the government shows that a normal white collar needs to work for 30 years in order to buy a house in a big city. .Thus, we can conclude that a high salary job is really essential for me, who want to settle in big cities.

In addition, we can usually gain not only more money but also valuable experience from a high salary job compared to what we acquire form a low salary job. For some person, current job may not what they really want, however, with the money and valuable experience we gain from the job we can choose our own career. For instance, one of my friends, who found a high salary job in shanghai, is not satisfied with the job he was doing, as he want to be the boss himself. After several years of working, he accumulated enough money and experience, so he chose to open his own business and it turned out that his business enjoyed a big success. In contrast, never can a person gain enough money and valuable experience to open his own business form a low salary job though with long vacation.

As has been discussed above,  I strongly hold that a high salary job is needed though with less vacation considering lots of benefits that money can bring and the great possibility for us to make our own career.

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Currently, people are facing a high employment pressure, a job with morevacation usually means less money earned, a job with high salary usually leavesus less vacation. So which kind of job should we choose? People's opinions aredivergent involving the issue. I fundamentally hold that a job with high salaryis better tough it means I have lessvacation time（建议改成free time，或者time to have vocation）concerning lots of benefits brought by a high salary job.

To begin with, a  high salary job enables me to live a better life.Nowadays, in china, it is especially difficult for us to live a normal life inbig cities. If we want to buy a house in a big city, then(去掉) we have to earn enoughmoney. Without enough a high salary(a high enoughsalary), never can we find a house to live （加上in）, let alone buying cars or supporting all our family. Besides, withno money, though we have much vacation, we cannot go anywhere and cannot enjoythe vacation. A statistical report from the government shows that a normalwhite collar needs to work for 30 years in order to buy a house in a big city..Thus, we can conclude that a high salary job is really essential for me,who want to settle in big cities. (我觉得改成这样比较好一点for me, who want to settle in big cities, a high salary jobis really essential)
这一段的论据和例子都很充分，和且说服力比较强，我要多向你学习。

In addition, we can usually gain not only more money but also valuableexperience from a high salary job compared to what we acquire form a low salaryjob. For some person, current job may not what they really want(建议加上to do), however, with the(去掉比较好) money and valuableexperience we gain from the job （建议加上then） we can choose our own career. For instance, one of my friends, whofound a high salary job in shanghai, is not satisfied with the job he wasdoing, as(改成so) he want to be the boss himself. After several years of working, heaccumulated enough money and experience, so he chose to open his own businessand it turned out that his business enjoyed a big success(改成to be a successful business可能比较好). In contrast, never can a person gain enough money and valuableexperience to open his own business form a low salary job though with longvacation.
这一段朋友的例子恰当



As has been discussed above,  Istrongly hold that a high salary job is needed though with less vacationconsidering lots of benefits that money can bring and the great possibility(great用来形容possibility有点奇怪，opportunity) for us to make our own career.




你的文章论点很好，说服力强，例子也很充分。就是在句子结构上面有点累赘，大多数句子都比较长，建议稍微的写点短句子调剂下。