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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits.

Some people consider advertising predominantly leads to unhealthy eating habits, because people are susceptible to the advertisements on television and internet. Although it is true that advertisements effect people more or less, however, the primary cause that result in unhealthy eating habits for people is themselves. Plus, I would demonstrate how people affect themselves to unhealthy eating habit.
One reason why people can get into unhealthy eating habits is overeating in a long time. People who are in a significant activity or after intense sports, would like dedicate themselves into eating a plentiful of food. In this process, they just enjoy the delight of eating food rather than
consider the consequence which is harmful to their lives. If it lasted a long time, they would face the threat of sub-health without realizing it.


In addition, excessive going on a diet also lead to the unhealthy eating habits on a large scale. Almost all the human being regard the thinness as a standard which can measure a person is sexy or ugly so that we are insanely on a diet. As a result, this sort of unscientific diet method can also lead to unhealthy eating habits. Take my aunt as an example. My aunt A who a fashionable mid-aged lady, was always going on a diet arbitrarily, whenever she realized that she was a little bit fatter than before. What is worse, she never seek medical advice for dieting and just get her own way. Consequently, she was taken anorexia and being under medical treatment.


Furthermore, unhealthy eating habits is associated with the nature of jobs. nowadays as the development of our society a variety of jobs come into being in the market. And some of these jobs require employees working in a special hours which do not enable them to have breakfast or launch on time. Programmers whose work is programming or designing codes, often face a great deal of workload and stress, and they can not eat on time usually. As a result , most of them are supposed to try a new job 10 or 15years later due to threat of long-term unhealthy eating habit to their lives.

For these details, people should abandon their ideas that advertisements play an important role in causing unhealthy eating habits. Plus we can conclude that people behavior is the primary reason for these bad habits.

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