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windslpUID: 2903140

11.18综合tpo13,by windslp

The professor in the lecture is discussing the sale of fossils. She disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage for several reasons. She believes that the sale of fossils have many benefits.

The first reason why the professor disagrees with the article is because of the public. She says that the sale of fossils can enhance the public to purchase the fossils easily. He also mentions that the public such as universities and libraries can buy the fossils which they are interested. Thus, the lecturer believes that the sale of fossils doesn't affect the public to approach the fossils.（最后一句应该是影响了吧,我觉得应该还要提到exposure 才会导致he sale of fossils can enhance the public to purchase the fossils easily）

Second, the speaker refutes（我喜欢,~） the reading by mentioning that scientist's losing access for important fossils. She says that scientists is the expert for indicate(z这里应该是indicating吧) the fossils. He also claims that every fossil before arriving the buying will go to the scientists firstly. Therefore, the sale of fossils doesn't decrease the opportunities which scientists approach the important fossils.（恩~逻辑米有问题~~）

The third reason why the speaker in the lecture disagrees with the ideas in the reading article is related to fossils' damage. She says that people will find more fossils because of the sale of fossil. She also notes that it is better than fossils stay underground. Hence, the lecturer concludes that the sale of fossils will make people find more fossils.（恩,我觉得如果能提到点细节会更好额~~不过没有也ok的~）

Finally, the professor in the lecture disagrees（我觉得disagree 用的有点多~） with the points in the reading. She believes that commercial fossil will have more advantages.

总体而言写得很不错啊,~~~中心基本都抓住了,如果能在阐述方面运用的更流利就perfect叻~~
加油啊,!~~不好意思, 我只是听了,看了一遍,没有时间写了T T。
哎,现在要出发去宁波考试叻,,不报以希望T T。准备3占叻~！~哈哈,
Tutu你可以的,~绝对可以破百啊~~~加油~~~↖(^ω^)↗
对了,话说,一直很期待你的签名更新的哈,不要停在75句叻!!!~坚持~！~

lovelgbUID: 2775569

The professor in the lecture is discussing salvage logging. He disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage for several reasons. He believes that salvage logging doesn't have a lot of benefits.

The first reason why the professor disagrees with the article is because of dead trees（dead trees怎样，主题理由句不够明确，是因为移走dead trees之后土壤缺少养分了）. In the reading, the author talks（describes） that the dead would influence new trees' growth. However, the professor says that the soil under the dead trees includes a lot of useful nutrition（是dead trees decompose 之后提供养分，移走dead trees 之后可能造成土壤缺少养分）. He also mentions that it could help forest's future generation grow well. Thus, the lecturer believes that salvage logging wasn't necessary（我觉得speaker认为不应该这么做), and it would affect the dead trees' function（development of the new plants）.

Second, the speaker refutes the reading by mentioning the insect（同上）. The write（writer） in the reading discusses that decaying wood is suitable for the insect. :)By(While) the professor says（适当换词，points out） that the insect has lived （in）the forest for a long time without any damage.:) He also claims that other species like birds still needed the wood. Therefore, the man holds that salvage logging would cause more damage than the insect.
建议粗体部分两句话调换位置，逻辑更清晰
The third reason why the speaker in the lecture disagrees with（换词contradicts） the ideas in the reading article is related to the economy（同上）. In the reading, the writer mentions that salvage logging would increase the job's opportunities. However, the professor says（argues） that the vessels（vehicles） which have （插入been）used in salvage logging would （need to spend 改为cost） more money to maintain. He also notes that the job from salvage logging is temperate（temporary）. Hence, the lecturer concludes that salvage logging doesn't have abundant advantages for the economy.

Finally, the professor in the lecture disagrees with the points in the reading. He believes that salvage logging is not useful.
各个要点很清楚，结构一目了然，很好。
字数有点多；最后后一段不是理由段，所以用finally开头不合适，应该是in conclusion, all in all 之类的；注意不要在段落中重复用同一个词，会显得乏味。
以上是我个人意见，如有疑问，欢迎讨论

lovelgbUID: 2775569

The write（writer） in the reading discusses that decaying wood is suitable for the insect. By(While) the professor says（适当换词，points out） that the insect has lived （in）the forest for a long time without any damage.
没标清楚，不好意思，调换位置的是这两句

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11.20 独立占座

ttuuttuuUID: 2299729

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sports teach people lessons about life..08.12.05

The general consensus now appears that sports don't teach people lessons about life. However, I oppose this viewpoint. That's because that sports can make people learn how to collaborate with each other. In addition, we can make different friends from sports. Furthermore, doing sports can relax my pressure. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, people can learn the spirit of collaboration from sports. That's because that a lot of sports need more than two persons including basketball, football, and so on. Therefore, everyone in the group has his response. People need to learn how to believe our group members. I learn this spirit from the baseball which is one of my favorite games. In addition, I apply this spirit to my project. Previously, I always tried to finish whole things when I had a project. Now, I choose to believe others' ability in my group, and divided the work to them separately.

Second, it is easy to make distinct friends from sports. That's because that people from the same team have the similar goal-winning the game. It also enhances the relationship between teamers. Like Joe, one of my best friends, buy a new apartments, and he need some to design his apartment as well as buy furniture. One of his team members provides a free design service of room designs for him because he is a house designs. Therefore, we can make friends from different area when we play sports.

Third, doing sports can make people relax the stress. When we study whole day, we always feel stressful. Therefore, doing sports can make me to relieve my pressure. In addition, it also can enhance my health. For me, I prefer to go swimming when I feel stressful. During sports, I can forgive the difficulty and refill my energy. After finishing the exercise, I become energetic and use positive attitude to overcome my problem.

To sum up, I agree that sports teach people a lot about life. That's because that people can learn how to collaborate with others. In addition, they can make friends efficiently. Furthermore, doing sports can help people to relieve their stress and become healthy. Thus, sports have a lot of benefits for people.

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TPO 16

The professor in the lecture is discussing archaeology. In the article, the author discusses about problem as well as limitations of archaeology. However, the professor disagrees with the idea in the reading passage for several reasons. He believes that the science of archaeology plays an important role in Britain.

The first reason why the professor disagrees with the article is because of construction projects. In the article, the writer talks that construction projects destroyed a lot of precious artifacts. However, the professor says that any construction company needs the archaeology's signature before they start to establish any building. He also mentions that the archaeology decides to excavate the artifacts or build around these artifacts when they find the articles. Thus, the lecturer believes that the archaeology has the power to make a decision about the articles.

Second, the speaker refutes the reading by mentioning financial support. In the reading, it mentions that government funds and grants are not inadequate. However, the speaker says that the construction company pays for the archaeology. Every construction projects need the archaeology to observe the site. Therefore, the man holds that the archaeology doesn't need to worry about the financial support.

The third reason why the speaker in the lecture disagrees with the ideas in the reading article is related to careers' decline in the archaeology. he says that the archaeology is a pay work. He also notes that archaeology expert hire a lot of people to do research, collect data, as well as write articles. Hence, the lecturer concludes that there are many job opportunities about the archaeology.

Finally, the professor in the lecture disagrees with the points in the reading. He believes that the archaeology doesn't lose the stage now.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sports teach people lessons about life..08.12.05

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The general consensus now appears that sports don't teach people lessons about life. However, I oppose this viewpoint. That's（可去掉，直接接连词） because that sports can make people learn how to collaborate with each other. In addition, we can make different friends from sports. Furthermore, doing sports can relax my pressure(relieve my pressure 或relax myself). There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.
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First of all, people can learn the spirit of collaboration from sports. That's because that (发现你很喜欢用That's because that，这样不好，用it is because that吧)a lot of sports need more than two persons including（such as） basketball, football, and so on. Therefore, everyone in the group has his response. People need to learn how to believe our group members. I learn this spirit from the baseball which is one of my favorite games. In addition, I apply this spirit to my project. Previously, I always tried to finish (the) whole things when I had a project. Now, I choose to believe others' ability in my group, and divided the work to them separately. 5 H) c$ N8 @/ ]
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Second, it is easy to make distinct friends from(用 through吧) sports. That's because that people from the same team have the similar goal-winning the game. It also enhances the relationship between teamers. Like Joe, one of my best friends, buy a new apartments, and he need some to design his apartment as well as buy furniture. One of his team members provides a free design service of room designs for him because he is a house designs. Therefore, we can make friends from different area when we play sports.（嗯，为了切合题意可以加一句这对于我们的日常生活非常有利之类的）8 M0 {8 z! O, F4 K4 c
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Third, doing sports can make people relax（relieve） the stress. When we study （a）whole day, we always feel stressful. Therefore, doing sports can make me to relieve my pressure. In addition, it also can enhance my health. For me, I prefer to go swimming when I feel stressful. During sports, I can forgive the difficulty（difficulties） and refill my energy. After finishing the exercise, I become energetic and use positive attitude to overcome my problem.

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To sum up, I agree（with the point） that sports teach people a lot about life. That's because that people can learn how to collaborate with others. In addition, they can make friends efficiently. Furthermore, doing sports can help people to relieve their stress and become healthy. Thus, sports have a lot of benefits for people.（感觉和开头重复了，可以照应开头但不要写一样的话，可变换一下表达）

24# ttuuttuu

莫莫吟UID: 2951537

真是不好意思啊，我都搞忘了
The professor in the lecture is discussing（about） salvage logging. He disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage for several reasons. He believes that salvage logging doesn't have a lot of benefits.
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The first reason why the professor disagrees with the article is because of dead trees（因为dead trees怎么了应该说清楚）. In the reading, the author talks that the dead would influence new trees’ growth. However, the professor says that the soil under the dead trees includes lot of useful nutrition. He also mentions that it could help forest's future generation grow well. Thus, the lecturer believes that salvage logging wasn’t necessary, and it would affect the dead trees' function.

Second, the speaker refutes the reading by mentioning the insect（提到insect对trees的damage的问题）. The write in the reading discusses that decaying wood is suitable for the insect（应说清楚这对健康的树有影响）. By（But） the professor says that the insect has lived（in） the forest for a long time without any damage（s）. He also claims that other species like birds still needed the wood. Therefore, the man holds that salvage logging would cause more damage than the insect（do）.5 G+ O& Z7 m; q+ k
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The third reason why the speaker in the lecture disagrees with the ideas in the reading article is related to the economy. In the reading, the writer mentions that salvage logging would increase the job's opportunities. However, the professor says that the vessels which have used in salvage logging would need to spend more money to maintain. He also notes that the job from salvage logging is temperate（
temporary）. Hence, the lecturer concludes that salvage logging doesn't have abundant advantage for the economy.
我觉得你写的很详细啊，要点细节都写出来了，每段主题句再突出点就好了

Finally（用In conclusion吧）, the professor in the lecture disagrees with the points in the reading. He believesthat salvage logging is not useful.

16# ttuuttuu

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请问一下你有没有今天综合TPO17的听力部分啊，我只找到了阅读，有的话可以发我吗，谢谢~
25# ttuuttuu

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独立批改完毕

tuxinyiUID: 2921399

已改，1127加油哈！

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抱歉，改晚了