Daily Writing by ttuuttuu

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10月08作業
综合： TPO12
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TPO 12
The professor in the lecture is discussing that Jane Austen. He disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage for several reasons. He believes that the teenage girl in the professional painting is not Jane Austen.

The first reason why the professor disagrees with the article is because of the portrait used by Austen's family. He says that Austen's family started to use the portrait after Jane Austen had been died for 17 years. Thus, the lecturer believes that the girl in the portrait is not Jane Austen.

Second, the speaker refutes the reading by mentioning the face. He says that teenage female of Austen's family have the similar face. He also mentions that one nephew looked like Jane Austen. Therefore, the man holds that using the face can't prove that the subject in the painting is Jane Austen.

The third reason why the speaking in the lecture disagrees with the ideas in the reading article is related to Ozias Humphrey's painting style. He says that this painting canvas is sold by William Leg. However, he also notes that William Leg didn't sell the canvas in Landon when Jane Austen was a teenager. Until she was 27 years, he started to sell the canvas in the Landon. Thus, the lecturer concludes that the style can't prove this painting's subject is Jane Austen.

Finally, the professor in the lecture disagrees with the points in the reading. He believes that Jane Austen is impossible to be in this painting.

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还是发个WORD的附件吧~下载方便

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tpo13  by  ttuuttuu整合寫作


The professor in the lecture is discussing the sale of fossils. She disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage for several reasons. She believes that the sale of fossils have many benefits.

The first reason why the professor disagrees with the article is because of the public. She says that the sale of fossils can enhance the public to purchase the fossils easily. He also mentions that the public such as universities and libraries can buy the fossils which they are interested. Thus, the lecturer believes that the sale of fossils doesn't affect the public to approach the fossils.

Second, the speaker refutes the reading by mentioning that scientist's losing access for important fossils. She says that scientists is the expert for indicate the fossils. He also claims that every fossil before arriving the buying will go to the scientists firstly. Therefore, the sale of fossils doesn't decrease the opportunities which scientists approach the important fossils.

The third reason why the speaker in the lecture disagrees with the ideas in the reading article is related to fossils' damage. She says that people will find more fossils because of the sale of fossil. She also notes that it is better than fossils stay underground. Hence, the lecturer concludes that the sale of fossils will make people find more fossils.

Finally, the professor in the lecture disagrees with the points in the reading. She believes that commercial fossil will have more advantages.

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我错了，没看到下面的附件。。。

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10-09综合写作

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改完了，晚了sorry

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tutu你快给我写综合。，抽死你阿。

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1011  Independent Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sports teach people lessons about life..08.12.05

The general consensus now appears that sports don't teach people lessons about life. However, I oppose this viewpoint. That's because that sports can make people learn how to collaborate with each other. In addition, we can make different friends from sports. Furthermore, doing sports can relax my pressure. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, people can learn the spirit of collaboration from sports. That's because that a lot of sports need more than two persons including basketball, football, and so on. Therefore, everyone in the group has his response. People need to learn how to believe our group members. I learn this spirit from the baseball which is one of my favorite games. In addition, I apply this spirit to my project. Previously, I always tried to finish whole things when I had a project. Now, I choose to believe others' ability in my group, and divided the work to them separately.

Second, it is easy to make distinct friends from sports. That's because that people from the same team have the similar goal-winning the game. It also enhances the relationship between teamers. Like Joe, one of my best friends, buy a new apartments, and he need some to design his apartment as well as buy furniture. One of his team members provides a free design service of room designs for him because he is a house designs. Therefore, we can make friends from different area when we play sports.

Third, doing sports can make people relax the stress. When we study whole day, we always feel stressful. Therefore, doing sports can make me to relieve my pressure. In addition, it also can enhance my health. For me, I prefer to go swimming when I feel stressful. During sports, I can forgive the difficulty and refill my energy. After finishing the exercise, I become energetic and use positive attitude to overcome my problem.

To sum up, I agree that sports teach people a lot about life. That's because that people can learn how to collaborate with others. In addition, they can make friends efficiently. Furthermore, doing sports can help people to relieve their stress and become healthy. Thus, sports have a lot of benefits for people.

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The general consensus now appears that sports don't teach people lessons about life. However, I oppose this viewpoint. That's because that sports can make people learn how to collaborate with each other. In addition, we can make different friends from sports. Furthermore, doing sports can relax my pressure. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, people can learn the spirit of collaboration from sports. That's because that a lot of sports need more than two persons including basketball, football, and so on. Therefore, everyone in the group has his response(职责responsibilities). People need to learn how to believe our group members. I learn this spirit from the baseball which is one of my favorite games. In addition, I apply this spirit to my project. Previously, I always tried to finish whole things when I had a project. Now, I choose to believe others' ability in my group, and divided the work to them separately.

Second, it is easy to make distinct friends from sports. That's because that people from the same team have the similar goal-winning the game. It also enhances the relationship between teamers（用teammates好点吧）. Like Joe, one of my best friends, buy a new apartments, and he need some （some什么？）to design his apartment as well as buy furniture. One of his team members provides a free design service of room designs for him because he is a house designer. Therefore, we can make friends from different area when we play sports.

Third, doing sports can make people relax the stress. When we study whole day, we always feel stressful. Therefore, doing sports can make me to relieve my pressure. In addition, it also can enhance my health. For me, I prefer to go swimming when I feel stressful. During sports, I can forgive（免去的意思吗？） the difficulty and refill my energy. After finishing the exercise, I become energetic and use positive attitude to overcome my problem.

To sum up, I agree that sports teach people a lot about life. That's because that people can learn how to collaborate with others. In addition, they can make friends efficiently. Furthermore, doing sports can help people to relieve their stress and become healthy. Thus, sports have a lot of benefits for people.

总体写的不错，很流畅，也没什么错。词汇在丰富些就更好了~

白天一直没找到你链接呢

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1012 independent Writing by ttuuttuu
15 家庭
Some people think one’s working is more important
than being with one’s family. 071020

The general consensus now appears that people's job is more important than staying with their family. However, I oppose this viewpoint. That's because people grow in the family, it is important than anything. In addition, people's family can help us relieve stress when we fail. Furthermore, people's family has more benefits for people. There are many reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, people family plays an influential role in their life. From the childhood, their parents taught how to walk as well as speaking. When they grow and meet more difficulties, family members provides suitable answers for us. In addition, the career research displays that over 70% successful persons are from complete family.
Therefore, it shows that family plays an important role for people.

Second, people's family can help us overcome stressful life. When people finish the whole day's work, it causes a lot of pressure in the same time. People can share their experience, and family members provide their opinions. For instance, John, one of my best friends, had a huge project last month. During that time, he felt stressful as well as stressful. However, his family gave him the biggest support to overcome the difficulty. Without his family, he couldn't finish that huge project.

Third, their family provides more valued and durable advantages than working. The relationship between family members is forever. When we meet problem, they can give us help and suggestions. Although working can make people become rich, their family is able to abound their life. It is possible to loss the job, but it's impossible to miss the family. For me, I felt depressed and couldn't do anything when I failed my exam. However, my sister and parents always encouraged me during that time. After that stage, I refill the energy and keep positive attitude to face the problem.

To sum up, I entirely disagree that people's working is more important than their family. That's because that people need their family. In addition, people's family can help them to conquer the problem. Furthermore, their family provides enduring benefits for them. Thus, people can't live without their family.

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11/17 綜合寫作
TPO 11
The Professor in the lecture is discussing literature's reading. He disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage for three reasons. He believes that literature's reading doesn't have a lot of advantages.

The first reason why the professor disagrees with the article is because of the reading public. He says that people can read other materials such as science magazines, although the writer says that only the literature provides the intellectual stimulation. He also mentions that there are many reading materials suitable for people. Thus, the lecturer believes that literature's reading is not only source which can benefit the reading public.

Seconds, the speaker refutes the reading by mentioning culture in general. He says that culture has already changed. He also claims that movies as well as music help people save time to chase the culture. Therefore, the man holds that movies and music can provide many kinds of culture contents.

The third reason why the speaker in the lecture disagrees with the ideas in the reading article is related to literature itself. The writer in the reading says that literature writers lack an audience. The speaker notes that their contents are hard to realize them entirely. He also claims that the public doesn't like to read literature because of this reason. Hence, the lecturer concludes that literature's content decrease the audience.

Finally, the professor in the reading disagrees with the points in the reading. He believes that literature doesn't have abundant advantages.

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TPO12...阿...昨天。

TPO11我没做过..,.

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TPO

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1119 綜合寫作
Theprofessor in the lecture is discussing salvage logging. He disagrees with theideas in the reading passage for several reasons. He believes that salvagelogging doesn't have a lot of benefits.

The firstreason why the professor disagrees with the article is because of dead trees.In the reading, the author talks that the dead would influence new trees'growth. However, the professor says that the soil under the dead trees includesa lot of useful nutrition. He also mentions that it could help forest's futuregeneration grow well. Thus, the lecturer believes that salvage logging wasn'tnecessary, and it would affect the dead trees' function.

Second, thespeaker refutes the reading by mentioning the insect. The write in the readingdiscusses that decaying wood is suitable for the insect. By the professor saysthat the insect has lived the forest for a long time without any damage. Healso claims that other species like birds still needed the wood. Therefore, theman holds that salvage logging would cause more damage than the insect.

The thirdreason why the speaker in the lecture disagrees with the ideas in the readingarticle is related to the economy. In the reading, the writer mentions thatsalvage logging would increase the job's opportunities. However, the professorsays that the vessels which have used in salvage logging would need to spendmore money to maintain. He also notes that the job from salvage logging istemperate. Hence, the lecturer concludes that salvage logging doesn't have abundantadvantage for the economy.

Finally, theprofessor in the lecture disagrees with the points in the reading. He believesthat salvage logging is not useful.



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1119 獨立寫作

Do you agree or disagree with thefollowing statement? Observing and studying animals’ behavior are useful forknowing more about humans.

The general consensusnow appears that observing and studying animals' behavior are not useful forknowing more about humans. However, I oppose this viewpoint. That's because ofthe fact that many animals have the same organ as humans and also studyinganimals' behavior also benefit humans' sport; humans are not the only wisespecies in the earth. There are three reasons to support my idea.

The firstreason why I agree with the statement is because of animals' behavior. Animalshave a lot of behaviors such as they can run as well as jump, either people do.From observing their behavior, humans can realize their selves more. Forinstance, the research team usually injects the new medicine to the animals.They want to observe how animals reflect about the new medicine. Because someanimals have the same kinds of organ, people can observe their behavior beforethey operate in the humans' body. Therefore, observing animals' behavior has alot of advantages for humans.

Second, itis worth to learn animals' behavior for people. Animals can ran faster and swimin a high speed, people can learn from their behavior. In addition, people canimprove their performance in sports when they learn from animals' behavior. Theuniversity swimming team did the same thing last year. They used high speedvideo recorder to observe the dolphin for three months. The swimming teamimproved their original swimming pose, and model the dolphin’s swimming pose.This May, the swimming team won the reward in the 2010 university swimminggame.

Third,humans are not the only smart species in the world. We can learn from animals,and also correct our weakness. For example, we know that the cow saw the redcolor, and they would run to the red target. If one man discusses about yourweakness again and again, you can avoid being angry. You can predict that heprovide a good suggestion for your future. Don't be like a cow. Animals’behavior includes a lot of useful information for humans.

To sum up, Iagree that Observing and studying animals' behavior provide a lot of benefitsfor humans. From their behavior, humans can realize about their selves, andenhance their performance in sports game; they can improve their weakness from abundantanimals' behavior. Thus, I entirely agree with this statement.

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