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The human race changesthe world by the wisdom. They develop the technologies to make the life better.However, it is understood that the development is stopped by the human racethemselves. Apart form some inevitable natural disasters, the human race take theresponsibilities indeed.

The chief reason forthis point of view is that the violence destroys the world. That is the human racethat carries the violence to the world. For example, in the history of mankind,there have been twice World Wars in the last century. Millions oflives were brutally eliminated. Basic infrastructures were bombed anddestructed. The normal production could not be maintained. The wholecivilization was vaporized in the ash of explosives. In the front of violence,the human race stops the development.

Another reason for myview is that the greed consumes the world. The human race selfishly exploit thenatural resources for various development regardless the compensationback. Consequently, those resources are either dried out or converted into thewaste. Specifically, petroleum is regarded as the blood of industry. It is theresource to promote the development of the modernization. A number of nationseven fight for it. Due to the over-exploitation, it is estimated that thepetroleum would be undoubtedly dried out decades later. In case thatsubstitution of the petroleum is still under research or unidentified, thedevelopment of human race would be fell back in a great deal.

In sum, the charactersof human race, like violence, selfishness, are in the way of the development.On the other side, the human race learns to control those evil spirits and tominimize the damages they have done. Otherwise, the whole development of thehuman race would die in vain in no time.

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