madfrog4227的作文帖

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12.14独立

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改好了哈。

madfrog4227UID: 2840905

12.15独立

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改好了~

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only movies that can teach us something about real life is worth watching.

In our present society, different people will get to know our true society through different ways. Some of them can get this kind of knowledge from movies. Consequently, those people may would like to claim that only movies that can teach us something about real life is worth watching. Contrary to this opinion is my heartfelt agreement with the the idea that many other methods, such as from TV programs and books, will also provide to us some aspects bout the real life.

First of all, people can learn quite a lot by watching TV programs. In other words, those programs will play an essential role in helping us to learn the true world. Take my favorite TV drama-that is Prison Break-for instance, a little exaggerated though this drama is, it is true that it reflect the cruelty of our society, such us the betray between people, also the love between brothers.

In addition, such as TV programs, books can also offer us a miniature of this society, especially those fictions whose stories base on the real event of the real world. For example, the greatest work of Victor Hugo, Notre Dame de Pairs, illustrated various of kinds of bizarre life in French during the fifteen century. I can suppose that what people have learn from this fiction, except the evil, never can the right be eliminated from our world.

Admittedly, movies are true can teach people about this world. (這句我沒看懂，句法有點問題) I deem that this is the reason for people go to the theatre to watch movies. For instance, the movie-Gone with the Wind-has been the most well-known movie in this world, people can get to know more about the life during the period of the Civil War. Notwithstanding, it is the fiction, which is Gone with the Wind, that has made it so popular among people.

Wonderful though the knowledge that movies bring about are, they cannot compete with the advantages that TV programs and books lead to, if we compare their influence on people throughout our history. Therefore, hardly can we do is to ignore the significance of other ways for people learn about our real world.

總得來說還是很不錯的。句式很豐富。 加油~！

mileschen2008UID: 2771287

恩，我觉得你思路很明确，阐述很有理啊。如果第二段的例子举得好的话那就perfect了。我刚开始准备作文，现在就是拿到题目idea较少，而且我发现我这次切题有点问题了，呵呵，看能不能给出些建议啊

有个问题想讨论下，就是独立的字数大概是在300个，小于300肯定是不好的，但是如果写得过多，比如超过400个字，好不好呢？这个问题我一直想问的了，呵呵。我这次的独立就写了400多点呢。

yaoxiang1015UID: 2311632

改好了~  my lovely friends~!

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgrounds.


In our present society, different people have distinct interests, some people may enjoy visiting the museums and listening to symphony. Consequently, those people would like to state that the government should spend more money on art museums and concert halls, rather than on entertainment facilities. Contrary to this opinion is my heartfelt agreement with the idea that never can the government ignore the construction of recreational facilities. (這句話寫得很出彩，闡明了觀點，同時也秀出自己的寫作功底)
第一段寫得很好~！

Undoubtedly, art will provide （to） us great spiritual enjoyment. I believe that this is why our human beings create all kinds of art works unceasingly throughout our history. Just think about some well known art works, for example, people can learn Van Gogh's intense love for life from his best-known painting-Sunflower; also the symphonies of Beethoven convey to us that people should not surrender easily in their life; from Victor Hugo's fiction, Notre Dame de Pair, we can get to know about the bizarre life in Pair in the fifteen century.(這一段寫得太好了,引用的例子很詳細,我愛！  我要把它記下來~
)

Notwithstanding, just like art work, some recreational activities, such as swimming, or play soccer and so forth, can also bring a lot of fun to us. In other words, those activities will offer people, though from different aspect, quite amounts of enjoyment. For instance, when a soccer team wins one game, from it, not only some material awards can those player will gain, but also a sense of achievement, more importantly, will encourage them to achieve better in their future life.

On the other hand, except the spiritual entertainment, people still can benefit their health through attending those activities. All people know that a health body is the fundamental of everything we do, no matter visiting the museums, listening to the concert, or reading some fictions. What I mean is that, without the health body which benefit from attending all kinds of entertainment, such as swimming in the pool or playing basketball in the playground, can nobody（這里是不是應該用nobody can？ 也許是我讀錯了 難道是倒裝？  原諒我句法有點混亂） spare any effort to appreciate the art works.

Wonderful though the benefits that art museums and concert halls will bring about are, they cannot compete with the merits that recreational construction leads to, if those elements-which are spiritual enjoyment and benefit for（to） people's health-can be taken into consideration. Therefore, I disagree with the statement that the government should spend more money on art than those entertainment constructions.

LZ這篇文章真是我學習的典範呢~
寫得很好~~！！ 加油加油，我們要一起進步！！

madfrog4227UID: 2840905

Observing and studying animals’ behavior are useful for knowing more about humans.

In our present society, there are a lot of colleges and institutions conduct some research programs to study some animals' behavior, such as the behavior of dogs or gorillas. I suppose that what people what to obtain from these researches is not only some knowledge about those animals, but also some principles which can be used for our huamn beings. Consequently, I would like to agree with the statement made by the author. There reasons are as follows.

First of all, studying animals' behaviors can benefit the researches on the structure on human's brain. In the sense that people all know that some animals' brain has the same structure with people's, through those studies can we learn more about how our behaviors are formed. For example, just like the condition-reflection experiment illustrated, dogs might have some similar reflection system with our human being. By studying their reflection in certain condition, we can get more complete knowledge about people's mechanism of reflection.

In addition, through those researches, not only can we know more about our reflection system, but also can we gain more information about our certain behaviors in society. Take the study of gorilla groups for example, scientists study these groups in order to learn more about our social behaviors, since that just like our human beings, gorillas are also a kind of animal which own social characteristics. That is to say that there are similar with us in social aspect. There is nothing better than observing their behaviors to advance our studies.

Notwithstanding, other animals are not equally our human beings. What our scientists should always keep in mind is that they should adjust some conditions of their conclusion when they apply these results to people. Otherwise what the can achieve will be of less accuracy, or even wrong.

From the discussion above, I would like to admit the claim that studying other animals behaviors can be extremely helpful for our researches on human. Consequently, no matter individual, corporation or the government should offer their support to these researches.