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madfrog4227UID: 2840905

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life.


Different people may learn lessons from different kinds of things, some get them by studying at school, others can obtain knowledge from working. As far as I am concerned, there is one important way- that is playing sports--from which we can learn a lot during our life.

Playing sports can teach us how to persist what we have been doing until to the end.The people who always attend sports activities m could agree that sports can bring to us the spirit of perseverance. Just look at the athletes in the Olympic Game, the most significant quality people can gain from them is that never give up before the final result turns out.

Also, participating sports activities can cultivate people to keep a positive attitude all the time. As many successful people says that the positive mental attitude can play an extremely important role in what they have accomplished. Take the most famous soccer club-Manchester United for example, many player of this club illustrated that they always enjoy the game, no matter wether they win or lose. It is just this kind of mental attitude which contributes to the remarkable achievements of this great club.

Last but not the least, playing sports have been taught me to be more brave. I have play soccer since I was eleven years old, the almost 13 years experience has helped me to become a strong man.For instance, I can still remember how nerves when I attended a game when I was an junior high school student. In that game, at last, we defeated the adversary. From many of these similar situation, eventually I have begin to understand that even the adversary is pretty strong or the task we are confronting is so difficult, the only thing I can do is to face it and not be afraid.

When I consider carefully about all the lessons which I procure from sports activities, I believe that not only the persistence, the positive mental attitude, and the courage can benefit me to have a better life in this society, but also there are many other good qualities can make me more confident and competitive. Consequently, playing sports is a good teacher who can teach quite a huge number of lessons to us.

猪猪快跑UID: 2852764

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1 }! S8 K% T) YWhen I consider carefully about all the lessons which I procure from sports activities, I believe that not only(这里得用倒装吧） the persistence, the positive mental attitude, and the courage can benefit me to have a better life in this society, but also there are many other good qualities can make me more confident and competitive. Consequently, playing sports is a good teacher who can teach quite a huge number of lessons to us.5 L" W- f  d% ]
我把你的can全部给圈出来了，有点泛滥了，你试着将can去掉或者换个短语或词来表达，效果会好很多。^^加油！！

madfrog4227UID: 2840905

11.30独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality of education in a country is to increase teachers’ salaries.

Is the best way to promote the quality of education of one country is to raise the teachers' salaries? Although, the promotion of educators' wage can be a significant element to incite the teachers' enthusiasm to spend more effort to their teaching work. However, from my point of view, if the administration want to increase the quality of education basically, what they should do is not to only focus on the teachers' salaries, but pay more attention on other factors which have great effects on education.

To begin with, the administrators should adjust the setting of curriculums which the school supply to students. As all people know that what courses our educational system has provide can largely determine what these children can learn in the school. That means that, under our present social conditions, the deploy of curriculums not only should emphasize the training of academic skills, but also must stress the importance of cultivating other kinds of abilities, such as considering issues completely, resolving problems independently, and so forth.

What's more, education industry should let other social parts to participate in, including individuals,corporation, and so on. Take the America for example, the best university-that is Harvard University- in the United States is not the one setted up by the government, but by private investors.Various kinds of participants get involve into the realm of education will propel this area to become more competitive.

Finally, the family is also a extremely important factor to benefit our education. Just like the saying goes, "Parents are the best teacher of children." The members of one family can have great effects on the growth of their children, since that such a long time that children will live with these family members and it's these family members who teach them to talk, to get to know people around them, and to treat something even when they do not know anything about this world. Thus, the contribution of families should never be ingored.

Admittedly, increasing teachers' salaries can produce some benefits to our education, nevertheless, its influence is quite limited. From the discussion above, I believe that the best way to promote the quality of our education is to adjust the setting of curriculums ceaselessly and let different social parts to get in, besides, more importantly, administers should always remeber that the strategy of education should be adjusted according to the changing society.

师走99UID: 2857041

Different people may learn lessons from different kinds of things, some get them by studying at school, others can obtain knowledge from working. As far as I am concerned, there is one important way- that is playing sports-（总觉得这样写有点奇怪，改成：doing sports，from which...会不会比较好？）from which we can learn a lot during our life.

Playing sports can teach us how to persist what we have been doing until to the end.The people who always attend sports activities m（might？） could agree that sports can bring to us the spirit of perseverance. Just look at the athletes in the Olympic Game, the most significant quality people can gain from them is that never give up before the final result turns out.

Also, participating sports activities can cultivate people to （很奇怪，似乎不能加to吧。）keep a positive attitude all the time. As many successful people says that the positive mental attitude can（有点不通顺，直接plays就好） play an extremely important role in what they have accomplished. Take the most famous soccer club-Manchester United for example, many player of this club illustrated that they always enjoy the game, no matter wether they win or lose. It is just this kind of mental attitude which contributes to the remarkable achievements of this great club.

Last but not the （没有the吧）least, playing sports have been（应该去掉） taught me to be more brave（braver）. I have been playing soccer since I was eleven years old, the almost 13 years experience has helped me to（去掉） become a strong man.For instance, I can still remember how nerves I was when I attended a game when I was an(in) junior high school student(去掉). In that game, at last, we defeated the adversary. From many of these similar situation, eventually I have begin to understand that even the adversary is pretty strong or the task we are confronting is so difficult, （no matter how strong the adversary is or how difficult the task is,）the only thing I can do is to face it and not be afraid.

When I consider carefully about all the lessons which I procure from sports activities, I believe that not only the persistence, the positive mental attitude, and the courage can benefit me to have a better life in this society, but also there are （去掉）many other good qualities ，which can make me more confident and competitive. Consequently, playing 去掉吧sports is a good teacher who can teach quite a huge number of lessons to us（teach us a lot of lessons）.
恩，我觉得语法错误有点多的说，还有一些词有点累赘了哈~个人意见恩~

5huihuiUID: 2285610

Is the best way to promote the quality of education of one country is to raise the teachers' salaries? （这句话感觉没必要）Although, the promotion of educators' wage can be a significant element to incite the teachers' enthusiasm to spend more effort to their teaching work. （这句话句子结构不全，要不就把although去掉吧，although要引导一个让步状语从句）However, from my point of view, if the administration want to increase the quality of education basically, what they should do is not only to focus on the teachers' salaries, but also to pay more attention on other factors which have great effects on education.

To begin with, the administrators should adjust the setting of curriculums （删which） the school supplies to students. As all people know （删that ）,  what courses our educational system has provide can largely determine what these children can learn in the school. That means （删that）, under our present social conditions, the deploy of curriculums not only should emphasize the training of academic skills, but also must stress the importance of cultivating other kinds of abilities, such as considering issues completely, resolving problems independently, and so forth.

What's more, education industry should let other social parts to participate in, including individuals, corporations, and so on. Take the America for example, the best university-that is Harvard University- in the United States is not the one set (set的过去分词为set)up by the government, but by private investors. Various kinds of participants get involve into the realm of education will propel this area to become more competitive.(这之后如果再加一句，让教育领域competitive对教育的发展有什么好处，感觉论证会更完整些)

Finally, family is also an extremely important factor to benefit our education. Just like the saying goes, "Parents are the best teacher of children." The members of one family can have great effects on the growth of their children, since that children will live with these family members for such a long time and it's these family members who teach them to talk, to get to know people around them, and to treat something even when they do not know anything about this world.（这句感觉念起来有点绕，不知道是不是因为太长的缘故？） Thus, the contribution of families should never be ingored.

Admittedly, increasing teachers' salaries can produce some benefits to our education, nevertheless, its influence is quite limited. From the discussion above, I believe that the best way to promote the quality of our education is to adjust the setting of curriculums ceaselessly and let different social parts to get in. Besides, more importantly, administers should always remember that the strategy of education should be adjusted according to the changing society.(最后一句话我给分开了，感觉这样分开层次更明晰)

我觉得那句很绕的话可以分开写。
The members of one family can have great effects on the growth of their children. Since children will live with these family members for such a long time, it's these family members who teach them to talk, to get to know people around them, and to treat something they do not know about before.

madfrog4227UID: 2840905

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

It is really true that people can get to contact with various kinds of advertisements almost anywhere and anytime in our present society, it is also no doubt that these advertisements have produced great influence on people's life style, such as diet habits. Thus, some people would like to claim that advertising is the most significant cause of inappropriate diet habits. From my point of view, considerable though these disadvantages that the advertisements result in are, they can not compete with the huge impact on people's diet habits that their families and life style of people round them bring about, if more factors are taken into deliberation.

To begin with,the eating style of one person's families can play an important role in forming he or she diet habit. For example, when we were young, what we ate was largely determined by our parents or other families who supervised us. That is to say, it is our families who have help us to form our eating preference, therefore, they will also acquire their parents' unhealthy eating habits. And as we all know, hardly can we change our eating style once it had formed.

What's more, the diet styles of people who living around one person will also effect the one's eating habit profoundly. Especially for those people who do not cook by themselves. When they go to restaurants-commonly the flavors of the food provided by these restaurants are decided by most people who have lived in this area-what they can get to eat is just what these restaurant will offer.If there is some bad eating style of this region, probably they can learn unconsciously.

Admittedly, advertisements, to some degree, can always persuade people to choose their products through all kinds of means, such as vivid color, delicious taste on the television or post. Notwithstanding, so their effects on people's diet habits are quite limited, in the sense that people, no matter from the point of Psychology or  Sociology, will never change their preference easily.

In one word, contrary to the opinion of many people is my objection to the view that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits. As I see it, the families and people's living places are the profound elements which will effect the form of people's inappropriate eating style throughout.

这篇写的很纠结，麻烦猛拍一下，thanks

grandyangUID: 2730087

我改好了，疯狂的青蛙。。

师走99UID: 2857041

我写的也很纠结……呵呵~
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师走99UID: 2857041

哦，那是改的，文件标题有点模糊不清~哈~

猪猪快跑UID: 2852764

6# madfrog4227
改好嘞~~^ ^
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madfrog4227UID: 2840905

12.2独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？Being creative, rather than planning carefully, helps people come up with the best solution to a problem.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？Being creative, rather than planning carefully, helps people come up with the best solution to a problem.

To deal with some one problem, distinct people can cope with it through different ways. Probably, some individuals can figure out creative solutions to resolve those problem. Consequently, many people would like to say that, compared with planning carefully, being creative can be more beneficial for people to come up with the most useful solution to those people. Contrary to this opinion is my agreement with the idea that planning carefully is the best way to resolve one problem.

Admittedly, creative persons can sometimes think out new solutions for one problem which are different from most people's. For example, when I was a senior high school student, there was one of my classmate always can figure out some solutions-which are very strange-to many mathematics problems. It is the kind of talent skill that helps him to be matriculated by one of the best universities of my country without taking exams, in the sense that this talent capability can be extremely useful in some certain areas in our present society.

Although there are several advantages for one person to be creative, these advantages can not compete with the merits that planning carefully results in, if some other significant factors are taken into deliberation. On the one hand, planning more detailedly can resolve problems more completely. For instance, for building a house, workers always design a detailed blueprint. It is this blueprint that can make the building firmer. Especially, when there are some new problems appears during the building process, this drawing will play an important role in solve the new situation.

Another advantage of planning detailedly is that for those huge projects, only through planning can we finish them successfully. Maybe there are some people can achieve several projects without making a plan before they start; nonetheless, more or less, some problems caused by those unwise choice possibly will lead the project to a failure. Take the Three Gorges Dam for example, for such a huge project, it is unbelievable that people can accomplish it without any plan. Consequently, never can we ignore the importance of planning for problems' solving.

From the discussion above, at times, considerable though the advantages that being creative brings about are,their merits will be more unobtrusively than those advantages that planning carefully leads to, if we considerate those elements-which are resolving problems throughout and features of huge projects. Actually, both of those skills are necessary for the development of our society, people should try to acquire both.

师走99UID: 2857041

12.2日，改好啦~
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嘉木香草UID: 2805584

改好了~~

madfrog4227UID: 2840905

终于可以传附件了，呵呵

linaxu0123UID: 2925353

加油啊！^^~