091031独立作文，可以给个思路么（已给,THX）--写了篇，求修改

zyz0216UID: 2959327

agree or not?
It is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new cou try because of the lose of old friends?

着重点是在 move to a new place 后的效果，还是lost friends 的影响？

大牛们，救救我吧


感谢大牛小牛们的贵言

我级别太低， 所以回不了贴，SORRY啦！！

我根据思路，写了一些，可不可以帮我看看，死拍！！！

小女子跪谢了:loveliness:


Do you want to leave you city where you used to live? Mostly,the answer is no. To this people, moving to a new city or a new country means that they have to adapt to a new environment. People are always afraid that everything around them is unconversant and a strange place gives them a feeling of unsafty.Moreover, moving to a new place will led to lost old friends.However,I'd like to say "yes,I do".
Choosing a new place to live in is a decision that you can own a new start of life. If your company, which you worked for several years, gives you an opportunity for advancement that you hope eagerly.But you are reqired on the other city, which means you have to move and work there. What is your choose? Moving to a new city or a new country can give you more chance to improve yourself. You also can benefit from it, like meeting different kinds of people, learning a different kind of culture, having another living experience.

In addition, while many modern forms of communication like mobilphone, email, and even letter, are extremely convenient, nothing beats speaking to old friends. If we really need to meet friends face to face, such as shopping together, celebrating a special day, or even just chating, there are so many transportations--bus,train,boat,plane-- we can use any one of them . For instance, my university is far away from my hometown, it takes about 2 hours to fly and taking a train will be 10 times to arrive. Meanwhile, my friends choose to go on studying in my homtown almostly. So we cannot meet until we have holidays. We connect to each other with email, and don't miss any interesting stories that happen to oursleves. When spring break or winter break comes, we always talk in a quiet cafe and I really enjoy the peaceful and comfortable feeling with them.

Admittedly,in fact, a good friend do not need us to stay together everyday. Friends agree best at a distance. I consider that a friend will understant the reason you leave, congratulate you on  your new life, encourage you to live in the strage condition, instead of blaming you for your leaving.
To sum up, for what has been discussed above, although moving to a new city or a new country will be far away from old friend, I insist that it is not a bad thing to have that choice.

zyz0216UID: 2959327

有莫有人啊....小女子喊破喉咙了

tuofuzuihouUID: 2969827

不是牛人 我会写不同意
new place new friend
friend也不care 是不是一定要在一个city把
之类的

竹子落UID: 2797518

lose friends 是 move to a new place的效果中不好的方面
如果我来写 我会反对 move to a new place未必不好
理由可以说
不会失去朋友 现在通讯科技 交通系统都很发达 视频啊什么的 而且有时间完全可以见面啊
而且新的环境 可能会有更多适合自己的机会 对自己的将来发展可能有更大的空间
之类等等的 或者最后可以小小让步一下

zyz0216UID: 2959327

怎么又莫有人了....难道这篇写得如此无力,大家都不忍看了..