小女的第一篇ISSUE，大侠们帮我改改吧。。。

露露hohoUID: 2980096

写了一晚上终于写了篇出来，虽然自己感觉文章写的烂到不行，肯定也毛病一筐，但是相信接受过批评指点后才能有进步，所以非常难为情的来晒文章了:loveliness: ，请大家指正啊。
"There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
Every law aims at being obeyed by those who are subject to it,but if a law is unjust ,should we supposed to obey it?I claim the answer is no.

"An unjust law is no law at all",said St.Augustine,providing the foundation of civil disobedience movement across the globe.If a law is not really a law at all,it is argued,one has a right-even a duty-to break it.Martin Luther King articulated this view in his Letter from Birmingham Jail:"one has a mortal responsibility to disobey unjust laws".Florida is the only state in the USA to have a law that specifically bars gay men and lesbians from adopting children.This not only discriminates against an entire class of citizens,but it hurts the more than 3,500 children in Florida's foster care system by diminishing  the poor of eager,loving adults who could potentially adopt them.should we let this unjust law hurts Florida's foster children?should this kind of senseless ban be ended?

So Definitely,we hold a responsibility to disobey and resist unjust laws,However,on the other hand， here comes the problem that while the law is a matter of public record,justice is an intensely personal matter.What  one person regards as just may strike another as an unwarranted imposition,for example,some families in china which want more than one child may treat the Birth-Control policy as an unjust one.So we need to make the meaning of unjust law clear to the public.St.Thmoas Aquinas once said,"An unjust law is a human law that is not rooted in eternal law and natural law.Any law that degrades human personality is unjust"

As is mentioned above,I will quote a famous remark to end this issue,"One who breaks an unjust law that conscience tell him is unjust,and who willingly accepts the penalty of imprisonment in order to arouse the conscience of the community over its injustice,is in reality expressing the highest respect for law".
别告诉我这文章差的都没法修改了。。。。:dizzy:

咖啡盐UID: 2973669

你在一开始的时候可以先去word上写，这样可以帮你找出很多语法和用词上的错误，还有一点，你文章太短了，这么短是不可能把问题说清楚的，起码500字左右，你这个估计最多300多个字吧。哪怕写写废话凑字数也要凑上去。

你估计就是这么直接开始写了吧？推荐你先看看AWintro里ETS对于Argument和Issue的考评标准，然后看看6分和5分的例子，就会知道大概要怎么写了。还是先多看看范文吧，不要急着动手写，这样效果不大。

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还行吧，凑乎

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2# 咖啡盐
我一篇作文也没看过，3月份就要考试急死我了:mad:

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4# 露露hoho
剩下的时间紧张点呗，你这么一篇憋了多久？超过3个小时的话，那就要好好看看范文了

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5# 咖啡盐
嗯嗯，我要啃范文了。。。。

咖啡盐UID: 2973669

LS真是无处不在啊

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9# lasselore
歪楼党，好样的.....
水版看着好乱哪....进去了一次马上出来了...我还是老老实实混AW吧

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9# lasselore
党员，问你个问题，“cong”什么意思？

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7# lasselore
谢谢:loveliness: ，晚上看了点范文，简直就是银河系的差距嘛，惭愧。。。。。