一支穿云箭，千军万马来相见！ 呼叫猜猜版主

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30# Guessy 听你这么一说，我忽然又觉得前途叵测，未来好黯淡阿。。。555

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30# Guessy 听你这么一说，我忽然又觉得前途叵测，未来好黯淡阿。。。555
lime_wp 发表于 2011-1-15 06:29

科研不是什么很容易做的事情
既然你想做 那就努力吧
最坏的打算你在ubc做过一段时间 至少能拿到一封好推 如果运气好能挂到文章 那就更爽了

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版主请问Simon Fraser University， Molecular Biology and Biochemistry的Associate Professor好不好？ 我看到一位bcca的老师是那个学校的，不知道该不该也问一下volunteer的事呢？

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版主请问Simon Fraser University， Molecular Biology and Biochemistry的Associate Professor好不好？ 我看到一位bcca的老师是那个学校的，不知道该不该也问一下volunteer的事呢？
lime_wp 发表于 2011-1-25 12:00

没具体到人 怎么知道好不好？
SFU的生物很一般 还是Associate 你再研究研究吧。。。

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标题和吸引

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34# Guessy 呵呵 那我就先再斟酌一下吧 那个我打算开始给老师发邮件了 打了个草稿，烦请指正一下：Hello Dr. Angela Brooks-Wilson,
I am an university student in Lanzhou University, China, now I am spending my final year of undergraduate study in University of Manitoba as an exchange student, and looking forward to pursuing education in graduate level.

I read your lab web site recently and feel very interested in your research area, which is studying on cancer susceptibility in the presence of genetic heterogeneity and incomplete penetrance. So I am looking for some volunteer opportunities in your lab during this sumer(April to June), so that I can gain a better knowledge of your research and familiarize with the academic environment in UBC.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

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university student--> undergraduate student

studying on cancer susceptibility in the presence of genetic heterogeneity and incomplete penetrance
这个你是在哪看到的 是这个老师很多项目中的一个还是所有的工作都和这个主题相关？
我建议你更多问一下老师有什么项目需要人做
以及表达你想在他那以后读硕的愿望
否则你做了3个月得知他以后不招学生你打算怎么办。。。

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37# Guessy 所有的工作都和那个主题相关，那我再改改，还有就是我需不需要说我对老师的具体什么方向感兴趣了？还是直接说I am interested in your research然后就直接问有什么项目需要人做，希望以后跟你混？

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恩 如果所有都和那个相关那你这样写就没关系
但不要说你具体对某个项目感兴趣 因为他那个项目不见得缺人或者也不见得进展顺利

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39# Guessy 已经修改完了，再请版主指正修改！Hello Dr. Angela Brooks-Wilson,

I am an undergraduate student in Lanzhou University, China, now I am spending my final year of undergraduate study in University of Manitoba as an exchange student, and looking forward to pursuing education in graduate level.

I read the information on your lab web site recently and feel very interested in your research area, which is studying on cancer susceptibility in the presence of genetic heterogeneity and incomplete penetrance. So I am wondering if you will have any positions available  in your lab for master's program applicants.

For now, I wish there could be some volunteering opportunities in any of your lab programs during this sumer(April to June), which can help me gain a better knowledge of your research and familiarize with the academic environment in UBC.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

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原谅我水一下，一路看下来唯一的感想就是：猜猜姐是大好人~！！

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40# lime_wp

把那个in lanzhou u改成at

另外你这个有个大问题就是 你的目的写的不太对劲 当然也很可能是我之前说的不太对劲

我的建议是 你的邮件主要内容是询问能不能做volunteer 次要内容是说明自己volunteer希望可以以后有机会继续读硕
你现在变成了主要内容问人家招不招学生 好像先assume了人家要招你 然后说想过去先锻炼锻炼 这个逻辑不对啊

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41# 风晴午后 恩，相当大好人啊！

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42# Guessy 猜猜姐我又改了一下，这回应该可以了吧，烦请你再鉴定一下。。。。。然后我就拿这个当模版，给prof们发了I am an undergraduate student at Lanzhou University, China, now I am spending my final year of undergraduate study in University of Manitoba as an exchange student, and looking forward to pursuing education in graduate level.

I read the information on your lab web site recently and feel very interested in your research area, which is studying on cancer susceptibility in the presence of genetic heterogeneity and incomplete penetrance. So I wish there could be some volunteering opportunities in any of your lab programs during this sumer(April to June) that may available for me, I think it can also help me gain a better knowledge of your research and familiarize with the academic environment in UBC.

In addition I am wondering if you will have any positions available  in your lab for master's program applicants.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

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疯了。。。

可以用了 但为啥你就不能把你做volunteer和想读master这2个事连起来说呢。。。