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GuessyUID: 2184792

44# lime_wp

I am an undergraduate student at Lanzhou University, China, now I amspending my final year of undergraduate study in University of Manitobaas an exchange student, and looking forward to pursuing education ingraduate level.
把china后面那个逗号改成句号。。。这种错误也犯的。。。

I read the information on your lab web site recently and feel veryinterested in your research area, which is studying on cancersusceptibility in the presence of genetic heterogeneity and incompletepenetrance. So I wish there could be some volunteering opportunities inany of your lab programs during this sumer(April to June) that mayavailable for me, I think it can also help me gain a better knowledgeof your research and familiarize with the academic environment in UBC.

In addition I am wondering if you will have any positions available  in your lab for master's program applicants.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
把上面bold的部分改成下面就好了 没啥大改动反正就连在一起说了而已
另外你为啥要说“familiarize with the academic environment in UBC” 人家又不知道你是要申请ubc还是神马 这么说好奇怪啊

I wonder if you are still taking any volunteer student this summer inyour lab, and I would love to volunteer during April to June,2011. At the same time, I am also planning to apply for graduate school and interested in knowing if you will take master student in Septermber.

joeanUID: 2540838

zan!!

lime_wpUID: 2823627

47# joean 万谢！！我要是能去vancouver，到了就请你吃饭，哈哈！

GuessyUID: 2184792

你是在说我 还是joean joean不在vancouver...

lime_wpUID: 2823627

49# Guessy 是你啊，不小心点错回复了。。。

GuessyUID: 2184792

呃 没事 不用 你申到学校就好 呵呵