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[i习作temp] 习作一篇,求建议和意见ISSUE 43 [复制链接]

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43,To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards




Does an effective leader must obey the highest ethical and moral standards as the writer asserts? I concede that every person should maintain the highest ethical and moral standards, especially being an effective leader. However, there are two important problems in this topic which I will discuss below.



Admittedly, highest ethical and moral standards give a person an important standard when dealing with problems. So as an effective leader who is the center of an enterprise, one can cultivate the subordinate’s credence by his or her humanity which can be expressed by maintaining highest ethical and moral standards. Moreover, a leader who maintains the highest ethical and moral standards will lead the company to a right direction. For example, when a leader looks at the further benefit an enterprise can make, he may not make a policy which is harmful to our environment for a short profit.



However, the writer neglects two significant problems rising from this assertion. Firstly, the aim of a company is the profit maximizing as well as the responsibility of the leader, which maybe have a conflict with the highest ethical and moral standards. For example, when maximizing the profit, a company should open more factories, which occupy the arable land and forest land that offer us foodstuff and peaceful environment. When faces this dilemma, the leader may choose the solution which is benefit for company instead of the highest ethical and moral standards by the threaten of the broad.



Secondly, when facing moral conflict with the highest ethical, an effective leader is hard to choose. Moreover, the standards of the ethical and moral is obscuring insofar as conception of the highest ethical and moral standards is not so clear. That is to say, it is different to different objective. For instance, when a officer who is so poor that he can not lose this job violate the company rule. From the perspective of the company, the highest ethical and moral standards which is the rule of the company should  retire this officer. While from the perspective of the social morals, because of the special poverty of this officer the leader should not retire this worker. So the obscurity of the standard is the threshold of this topic.



In sum, from our daily experience, it seems to warrant that an effective leader should maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. However, the truth is whimsical and changeable. If we could not avoid the threshold of this topic I have discussed, it is nonetheless to discuss this topic.



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发表于 2011-1-18 14:32:28 |只看该作者
楼主的风格和我很像啊...汗,莫非都是北美范文出身么...看到了好多熟悉的词语...汗

感觉楼主的毛病也是我的毛病,一个就是每个句子都比较长,而且句型不是很多变...读起来很费劲..至少我个人不是很喜欢这种风格,我写出来的文章也是,主干很短,拖着一大堆定语从句...当然不是说这样不好,但是通篇这样的句子就不大舒服了,最好多一点倒装啊,排比啊什么的...现在我正在努力的向ETS范文靠拢,至少跳出北美的桎梏

第二,我觉得楼主像是在写argument,先是正面肯定一下,然后反面说,第一,当领导和当“具有最高道德素养的领导”的冲突,隐含着作者的意思就是,这个lecturer的建议不可行;第二,"ethical"和"moral"不一定能得兼,还是隐含着作者的意思,这个lecturer的建议不可行。批驳完了,ETS真正想看的我们的立论,也就是自己的观点,没有了。我觉得这里完全可以再加一段,比如说What is necessary for an effective leader?

从楼主身上看到了我自己的影子...我2月1号就考了,加油加油~

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发表于 2011-1-18 15:47:11 |只看该作者
楼主的风格和我很像啊...汗,莫非都是北美范文出身么...看到了好多熟悉的词语...汗

感觉楼主的毛病也是我的毛病,一个就是每个句子都比较长,而且句型不是很多变...读起来很费劲..至少我个人不是很喜欢这种风格, ...
zxzxy1988 发表于 2011-1-18 14:32


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