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Do you agree the following statement?
It was easier to achieve success in the past than it is today.



Success is something that most people desire for, whether in the past or now. In the long history of human progress, there are many people who have got startling success, and their ways lead to the destination is different. In my opinion, contradict to the point it was easier to achieve success in the past than it is today, it will be easier to success in modern society because of these reasons below.


To begin with the first one, I would like to talk about the education availability in comparison of different period. In the past years, universities were signature of where people from rich and reputable families assembled. The poor want to attend university over the past might only dream. In the contrary, universities open to aspirant students all over the world nowadays, and fundamental education for children is guaranteed by governments. That means young people would have more open mind and innovating thinking, which could be one of the crucial factors of being successful.

In the second place, another persuasive reason is that more opportunities are offered in modern society. Result from the development to market economy happens worldwide, more jobs are provided. For example, since China’s accession to WTO, there were 11740000 job opportunities added to the market annually. Furthermore, the developing outsourcing industry also created a great deal of jobs for people.
That means more approaches to success are clear at a glance. If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.

Finally, as the fast growing pressure for people from the advancing society, people will have the built-in urge to move forward. That would be the major emotional factor leads to success, which are quite pivotal. Survival is no longer a easy topic for people, especially for Chinese, in contrast to people who were guaranteed by the government over the past decades. It was said:” More enterprise leads to more success.”, and now the conclusion is obvious.

In conclusion, although the title statement might still raise disagreement among different people, it’s clear at the moment when taking into all the reasons above-mentioned. These points intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become persuasive, we can arrive at the conclusion that it is easier to achieve success today than it was before.