小C的作文贴

伶女UID：2797207

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Taking financial responsibility plays an indispensable role in adults' daily live. Some people suggest that it is beneficial for forgoing this important quality if letting children learn to manage money by themselves at a young age. However, I don't agree with this idea for several reasons.% b/ d3 L5 k+ G  k/ {

Firstly, mastering the skills of money management requires accumulated experiences as well as advanced psychological analyzing ability, which can only be obtained by adults. Money is such a sensitive topic that a child can hardly understand its special meaning. Whether investing extra money on a house or pursuing a small business could lead more money? There is no way for an ignorant你好喜欢用这个词哦，我一直没搞明白它到底有没有贬义 kid to solve such a problem due to lack of professional skills or related experiences.

Furthermore, if young children are forced to manage money at a young age, their viewpoints of value might be twisted, pursuing only maximize of financial benefit. A scientific research indicates that people's social opinions are greatly determined by the education received when they are children. Then telling a seven-year-old boy not to borrow his cash to unfamiliar classmates for no reason, would make him form a thought that friendship is less important than money, though this instruction follows one essential principle of controlling money effectively. As a result, in his mind, many valuable things, such as politeness, love, honor, will be ignored and replaced by money, which is totally a disaster for the whole generation（life因为只针对这个boy）.

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Another point also worthy to be mentioned is that teaching young people the significance of money might add a unsustainable burden on their shoulders. It is commonly accepted that children are supposed to have fun, leaving nothing to worry about. However, allowing them touch the money when they are not ready will definitely bring more troubles since they have to calculate the total money spent everyday, pay attention to the prize of each toy they want to buy, even compare their economic ability with others. Once children's lives have turned into that situation, childhood would mean nothing to them but unhappiness.



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To sum up, I strongly recommend that children are not suitable to deal with money too hurry, this assignment not only expands far beyond their capacity, but also would harm children's healthy development.

不好意思来晚了
很好，很有说服力，写了我很难想出来的三个论点啊，例子也挺好，长句越写越精彩了，依然学习了～～

candis712UID：2824089

3.14 独立
Do you think people should buy things made in their own country, even the price is higher than same things made somewhere else.

Due to the globalization and increasing international trade, diverse products from different countries are now available in local market. Some people argue that in order to protect the economic system and business interest of their country, people have to buy things made by their country regardless the price. However, I believe that it is wise for permitting consumers to choice the products they want, rather than enforcing them to buy local things.

The first point locates on the interest of most people. From the perspective of a common consumer, the features of suitable good include the high quality as well as reasonable price. If people have to buy everything which is produced in their country without considering the fact that whether the price is lower than imported one or the quality is better, their personal interests must be harmed. For example, in china, many imported electronic products seem to be more attractive than local ones, especially the laptops and MP3, then, it is unfair to argue every citizen to sacrifice their own interest, pay the extra money to support local companies.

Furthermore, it is the local company who should take the responsibility to improve the level of products, trying to gain more market share, rather than the consumers. When consumers became favor of foreign brand, what the companies are supposed to do is to figure out the contributors to the trend, instead of just persuading people to buy their things without acceptable reasons. They have to compare the goods from foreign countries with their own, analyzing and absorbing the advantages of foreign goods as well as eliminating the former drawbacks in their own products. After this process, a serial of adjustments could allow the local brand to improve into a better level and attract consumers again. This is also the excellent meaning of international trade which is that each country could share their fruits with others while receive the deserved reward meantime.

To sum up, I strongly suggest that every consumer should follow the nature rule of free market, selecting the products according to individual preferences, because these behaviors not only protect their own interest, but also benefit the development of local business from the long term viewpoint.

Go2011GoUID：3006241

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Due to the globalization and increasing international trade, diverse products from different countries are now available in local market. Some people argue that in order to protect the economic system and business interest of their country, people have to buy things made by their country regardless the price. However, I believe that it is wise for permitting consumers to choice the products they want, rather than enforcing them to buy local things.; N- _$ F( L9 Q2 ?$ |
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The first point locates on the interest of most people. From the perspective of a common consumer, the features of suitable goods include the high quality as well as reasonable price. If people have to buy everything which is produced in their country without considering the fact that whether the price is lower than imported one or the quality is better, their personal interests must be harmed. For example, in china, many imported electronic products seem to be more attractive than local ones, especially the laptops and MP3, then, it is unfair to argue every citizen to sacrifice their own interest, pay the extra money to support local companies.
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Furthermore, it is the local company who should take the responsibility to improve the level of products, trying to gain more market share, rather than the consumers. When consumers became favor of foreign brand, what the companies are supposed to do is to figure out the contributors to the trend, instead of just persuading people to buy their things without acceptable reasons. They have to compare the goods from foreign countries with their own, analyzing and absorbing the advantages of foreign goods as well as eliminating the former drawbacks in their own products. After this process, a serial of adjustments could allow the local brand to improve into a better level and attract consumers again. This is also the excellent meaning of international trade that each country could share their fruits with others while receive the deserved reward meantime.
To sum up, I strongly suggest that every consumer should follow the nature rule of free market, selecting the products according to individual preferences, because these behaviors not only protect their own interest, but also benefit the development of local business from the long term viewpoint.

写得非常好，语言很流畅，从customer和local company两方面去说,读着很舒服～～学习了

tulipzongUID：2803521

Do you think people should buy things made in their own country, even the price is higher than same things made somewhere else.) h, D) k' B  x5 U
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Due to (the) globalization and increasing international trade, diverse products from different countries are now available in local market. Some people argue that in order to protect the economic system and business interest of their country, people should buy things made by their own country regardless of the price. However, I believe that it is wise for permitting consumers to chose the products they want, rather than forced to buy local things./ o, G$ N, Y* \/ \

4 i# B1 ^  E4 E+ n+ _2 u7 L$ yThe first point locates on the interest of most people. From (the) perspective of a common consumer, the features of suitable good include (the) high quality as well as reasonable price. If people have to buy everything which is produced in their country without considering the fact that whether the price is lower than imported one or the quality is better, their personal interests must be harmed. For example, in china, many imported electronic products seem to be more attractive than local ones, especially (the) laptops and MP3. Certainly, it is unfair to argue every citizen to sacrifice their own interest and pay the extra money to support local companies.
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. |$ T$ T1 r6 b/ N2 r  P% XFurthermore, it is the local company which should take the responsibility to improve the level of products, try to gain more market share, rather than the consumers. When consumers became favor of foreign brand, what the companies are supposed to do is to figure out the contributors to the trend, instead of just persuading people to buy their things without acceptable reasons. They have to compare the goods from foreign countries with their own, analyzing and absorbing the advantages of foreign goods as well as eliminating the former drawbacks in their own products. After this process, a serial of adjustments could allow the local brand to improve into a better level and attract consumers again. This is also the excellent meaning of international trade which is that each country could share their fruits with others while receive the deserved reward meantime.
To sum up, I strongly suggest that every consumer should follow the nature rule of free market, selecting the products according to individual preferences, because these behaviors not only protect their own interest, but also benefit the development of local business from the long term viewpoint.
厄，不好意思，上周突然有事，所以才改，实在不好意思，急着改了下，不足之处，请见谅

candis712UID：2824089

3.20的托福成绩出来啦， 考完本来很郁闷，独立是互改组里出过的题，可惜没练，最后还写走题了，悲剧。。。 好在综合还可以 good+ fair 24。 虽然远没有预期的好，但是也算勉强了，一战99。今天上来感谢所有组里的同学，一起加油！