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17"There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
1.It's difficult to judge whether the laws is just or unjust because the judging criterion for every people is different.
2.Every people must obey laws even they are unjust for them, or laws exist only in the name.
3.Although laws are unreasonable in some aspects, they would develop with the social development.

221"The chief benefit of the study of history is to break down the illusion that people in one period of time are significantly different from people who lived at any other time in history."
1.Admittedly, people in one period of time have some similarities with people at any other time in history.
2.However, there are also a lot of differences between people living in different period.
3.Moreover, the author overlooks other advantage in studying history.

70"In any profession—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership."
1.It is beneficial for any profession to keep the leader refresh immediately. On the one hand, it could prevent the corruption. On the other hand, it could inspire leader to work more hard.
2.Moreover, it is also good to the development of the new force and they are always more creative.
3.However, some jobs need stability and the workers must have experience.


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XDF16
1.There is no evidence inferring that the current condition of education and public health in Lucria is due to the lottery.
2.There may be many differences between L and I, so a similar lottery system may not helpful for I.
3.The number of people treated by L's public health program dose not necessarily indicate the quality of the program.

XDF17
1.We cannot rude out the possibility that ABC has also ordered additional trucks.
2.The author fails to conclude other factors of each company, such as the procedure and the technology of trash-collecting.
3.We don't know what question was asked in the survey, so we cannot judge whether the answer "satisfied" is significant.

XDF18
1.The arguer fails to rule out the possibility that not enough time has passed to determine the effectiveness of the change reducing the accident rate.
2.The argument fails to consider that all other factors affecting highway accident rates have remain unchanged since the county lowered its speed limit.
3.The situation at P and B may not be comparable.

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