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发表于 2011-3-12 16:49:04 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

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It is no doubt that with the high social pressure derived from the rapid development of society and the progress of the technological achievements, the number of graduates focusing on the subjects which related to the future working, although some of them find the courses so boring, while ignoring the subjects that they are really interested at. On such an intricate and controversial issue, whether choosing depending on the pure interest or judging according to the potential labor need of the future is misleading and unwise. Like a man walking with two legs, it is impossible for the person to walk with only one leg. The same rule will also be applied to the situation of the choices of university students, when the proper guidance and advice given are taken into consideration.

Without interest, Hawking can not concentrate on the field of the relationship of the universe and the classical physics and contribute to the frontiers of the modern theories, covering from the Einstein’s General Theory of Relativity and so-called multiple histories. Normal people with Hawking’s body condition would commit suicide or maybe addicted to drugs, not seeing the bright future of tomorrow's blue sky and the shinning sun reflecting on the curtains. Nevertheless, it is the powerful inner interest and motivation that entitle him the extreme ability to explore the mystery of the universe and the foundation of the cosmos, not only specializing on the academic field but also enlighten us with his humors and easy-understanding words about his excellent discoveries. Interest, to some degree, is the best teacher for the students, and especially the subjects relating to arts, including music, painting and sculpture. These courses are the regulators to modify the inner happiness of individual and a soft touch on the tired heart of a person to relive stress and maintain the peace of mind, which contributes to the high EQ for every student. From this point of view, it is necessary to make choice depending on what you really want and the desire of the spirit.

One can decide what he or she really wants to his or her heart, however, under some circumstances, it is impossible to choose to cater the demand of the soul in the ideal world. We live in a world full of competition and stress, each one struggling to grab a firm foothold in a new place and establish a strong position through the process of sparing no efforts to reach the ideal goal in the realistically world. Faced with the brutal and bloody atmosphere, even the firming dream catcher who shows his passionate love for rock music or the Roman buildings must lower his head to accept the fact that he need to live on the earth not the air. It is the bread not the guitar or wonderful drawing of the ancient Roman Stadium that forms the root for a person to live in the modern world. Instead of flying in the air, the programs promising a job market receives nothing but the embrace of the fact-beaten students.

At the level of university, combining both the two ''legs'' to promise a well balanced future for college students can not be better. Just like seeing a object from different angles and forming various images in our minds, when we collect them as a whole and view in a complete viewpoint, what we observe is not the scattered bits and pieces, but a cubic perception, two ''legs" is always better and must be taken into consideration.

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