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发表于 2011-4-12 10:07:41 |显示全部楼层
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Do you like a new shopping center being built in your neighborhood?
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[url=]Many people consider our community is a small provincial backwater, lacking both culture and the amenities of modern life. Building a new large shopping center would be a step in the right direction, away from our backwards past, and towards participation in the larger world. It will create new jobs, aid the economic development, and provide entertainment and convenient for our residents.[/url][h2]
Although our community is placed in the center of the city, the nearest shopping center has twenty minutes away by car. I have to say it will take much more time to shopping and I can’t use the spear time to enjoy my life. Think that if there will built a store and open in 24hours, then you can go downstairs and to buy the food taken late at night when you hunger at evening. [url=]Secondly[/url][h3] , the shopping center also can spark community economic activity. Just like the research indicates that enterprises can promote the local economy. This is true in our community, the shopping center [url=]is[/url][h4] a large scale affairs, and accordingly need to employ a fairly large number of people. [url=]In addition to providing jobs and developing the local economy, the large shopping center will also improve our quality of life. [/url][h5] Large store can buy everything which you needed, and the price is low because they offer quantities of goods at wholesale prices.
Maybe some people will oppose the project, they think building a large shopping center would destroy the environment of our peaceful community and push the local grocery aside. However, comparing with the disadvantage, I believe the potential benefits of building a new large shopping centre would outweigh the impact of the poor quality. If we take the proper precautions, the project must can take the whole area stands to [url=]benefit[/url][h6] .

[h1]2011/4/11



[h2]社区附近新建建筑物必用开头!一定要背下!



[h3]其实为了增加字数可以选用其他一些转折词。网上搜集罗列一些。



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[h5]这一句就很好的加了很多词。



[h6]本篇的硬伤是词不够,而且没有举出具体例子,对于研究报告也不知道清楚的,这个一定要仔细认真思考思考!
好好学习,天天向上!

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