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发表于 2011-4-27 20:34:22 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
1.It is better to broaden knowlege of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.悲催的写作。。
有好多问题:
1.不能快速想到合适的例子
2.文章连贯性、逻辑性比较差
3.字数不够
4.用词和句都太简单
5.不能有效地阐述观点
抓头,求好心人指点啊~还有一个月,还有一个月:curse::dizzy:
Even you get a doctor degree, you are farfrom qualified as an expert in some specific subject. Then why do we bother tospecialize in specific subjects? Why not put more emphasis on broadening ourknowledge of many academic ones?



Studying a variety of subjects help studentsto broaden their vision. Imagine when you are so bored and fed up with your ownmajor, there might be some subject which really attracts you and deserves yourdevotion. If you don’t look for this, you never know what subjectyou like most.

Second, widening knowledge interest in various fields contributesto shaping the foundation of a student’s own major. A computer science student canget
much inspiration from Maths,language and engineering lessons. Because subjects relate with each other in intrinsticconcepts and logic. That is why philosophy once called” the foundation of allother subjects.”

Third, the social trend requires more andmore interdisciplinary talents. Students can be more adaptable in future careerif they choose a wide range of subjects to study. For instance, news agenciesnow prefer graduate who have a background of economics, literature and lawbesides journalism.

In a word, I strongly agree with the ideaof broadening knowledge of various academic subjects in the aspect ofdiscovering a students’s interest, deepening the understanding of his own majorand living up to social demands.
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