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TPO VOL1 独立写作
do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement ?
Atuniversities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as importantas classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer



In the integrated university education ecosystem,classes and libraries offer basic and core specialized knowledge, somehowsports and social activities function as laying a solid physical basis, boostingstudents’ overall capacity, and even draw a rainbow for their lifetime.

Sports result in excellent physical quality. Themore practice students take, the healthier they would be, so does theproductivity of their campus life, including studying without doubt. Oneresearch published by UCLA has combined students’ physique with their verbalability, reading comprehensive skills. 65% of the investigated turned out to beoverweight by California body mass index. The physique qualified students gothigher average scores during exams than do the unqualified. So there is nodoubt that equal attention should be focused on sports infrastructure buildingas well as that of classes and libraries.


College social activities -- extracurricularinterests group, social communication activities, some of which can expand youreyesight, teach you how to think critically, and even instruct powerful skillsthat may be super useful in your later life.（earninglifelong）Such views can be perfect proved by an example of Steve Jobs, applepresent CEO. After dropping-out from the Reed college in his freshmen year,Steve decided to take a calligraphy interests course which he found sofascinating. Many years passed, when he and his colleagues was designing thefirst Macintosh computer, it all come back to him, and he designed it all intothe Mac, which is the first computer with beautiful typography. And just like avirtuous circle, in 2005 he gave a speech to introduce his “lucky socialexperience” in Stanford University graduation ceremony. The behavior itself becameanother meaningful extracurricular course, needless to say.


Not only being irreplaceable part of entireeducation ecosystem, sports and social activities makes students take rides ofspiritual journey, fighting together with basketball teammates, make acquaintancewith future venture partner, even lifetime company. Memories can be carved deepinto hearts to draw a rainbow of lifetime.


So we can draw the conclusion that at universitiesand colleges, sport and social activities are just as important as classes andlibraries and should receive equal financial support.



第一次发作文贴，不知道格式对不对，请狠狠的批改，这是第一篇作文，磨了5个小时，估计语言惨不忍睹，自己改了一下，觉得第三段偏题了。。。但是太喜欢Jobs那个例子了就没改，请帮助修改！！！

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TPO VOL2 独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Certainly people see honest as one characteristic that matters during interpersonal relationship. Unquestionably this character seems extraordinary significant among friend and love partnership, but even excluding these two kinds of circumstance can we also pick up some typical example to champion this viewpoint. There's been substantial chance that job seeker’s candid, straightforward personal statement may impress your interviewer. Similarly, celebrity should force their behavior to be honest. Cheating trick, like faking degrees, fabricating autography like a fiction, academic cheating, even impart reader the pseudoscience, will not be forgiven by public.

But in some specific relationships, this social generally accepted morality won’t occupy the position of the first importance. Like the above interview case, the likelihood that the company will hire someone simply for his/her candid or ingenuous without considering his/her professional competency is practically nonexistent. It is not hard to understand that the prior consideration vary with different circumstances and relationship rather than seizing one fixed character – honest, especially a team relationship in office or athletic sport, in which honest can made your partner trust you , but if you are a leader of the team, decision making ability and management coordination would be the key to let your team count on you and finally fulfill this work program, whereas, the spirit is the core quality for the rest of the team.

While facing some specific circumstance and relationship, nothing but truth is not always appropriate, that is to say, the result gained by straightforward without hesitating maybe not much of fitness as that is gained by some strategies, such as the white lie. A case in point is when a patient is suffering an incurable disease, should the doctor and his/her relatives inform the patient of the truth? Some people hold that the dying patient is a man of weak will that he cannot bear that cruel burden, so to inform him actually risks destroying his hopes, in that way, he may deteriorate faster. They should lie to the patient in the hope that he can live peacefully and free. The same will work for the following example, when your little princess cries back home and tell you all this was about unstoppable mocking by her kindergarten friends for her “unique, tall nose”, cause she is still not is still not mentally matured to the point of accepting this genetic fact, and “yes, your nose is indeed tall” will crash her and cast a shadow in her future self-aesthetic, at this moment, white lying is moral, and if you do it for your love, well-meant lies may possess magic power. It can send out the radiance of love, kindness and humanism.

又是如分娩一般的产物- -

sh890418UID：2974512

昨天帖子题目写错了,是不是这个原因没有人来看阿...求批改阿，我作文自己改起来很老火的，因为水平太差。
初来乍道，大家照顾照顾阿

sh890418UID：2974512

自己修改过的
TPO VOL1 独立写作
do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement ?
Atuniversities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as importantas classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer

In the integrated university education ecosystem, classes and libraries offer basic and core specialized knowledge, and sports and social activities function as laying a solid foundation on your health condition, boosting your overall capacity, and even creating memory that never die.

Sports result in excellent physical fitness. The more practice students take, the healthier they would be, same with the productivity of their campus life, including studying. One research published by UCLA has combined 749 students’ physical fitness and weight data their academic performance. 65% of those investigated turned out to be overweight by California body mass index chart, and they got visible lower average scores at College than those physique fit students did. So there is no doubt that equal attention should be focused on sports infrastructure building as well as that of classes and libraries.

College social activities, such as extracurricular interests group, social communication activities, can broaden your horizon, teach you how to think critically, and even instruct skills that may benefit you lifelong. Such views can be perfect proved by an example of Steve Jobs, Apple present CEO. After dropping-out from the Reed College in his freshmen year, Steve decided to take a calligraphy interest course which he found so fascinating. Many years passed, when he and his colleagues were designing the first Macintosh computer, it all came back to him, and he designed it all into the Mac, which is the first computer with beautiful typography. In 2005 he gave a speech to introduce his “lucky social experience” in Stanford University graduation Ceremony, the behavior itself became another meaningful extracurricular course.

Not only being an irreplaceable part of entire education ecosystem, sports and social activities makes students take rides of spiritual journey. Fighting together with your basketball teammates, first meeting your lifetime company, such experience just makes your life rich and unique. As times goes on, these memories will forever be engraved on the heart.

So we can draw the conclusion that at universities and colleges, sport and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

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TPO3
Question:
Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement?
It is moreimportant to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer.


因为基础原因不能跟着daily writing天天写,尽量多写一些作文贴上来,希望大家狠狠批改,并给我这个新手一些意见.
我总觉得自己在最后把想法写成英语时很累,找不到合适的句子来说,这篇作文写了4个小时多...



Old friends are usually ones who have shared the same memory of childhood or youth. The test of time makes old friends supportive, loyal, and reliable. My own experience could assert to this, when comforting little sticky issues, the feedback of my help request from my old friends is always effective, timely, and without hesitation. In addition, it is the cozy and familiar atmosphere of an old friendship circle that ties them together. Everyone's nature force them behave with reservation to defend themselves when getting along with someone unacquainted. While the old friend circle provides an opportunity to relax completely, a chance of recalling the past. No number of words can describe the excitement playing a basketball match with old chums after one week tied work. And all of these advantages make spending time with old friends a better option than establishing new friendships.


But people cannot only rely on old friends, they must also look for new ones. When stepping in a new environment, like college graduation, overseas studying, occupation mobility, spending time establishing new relationship can help prevent over isolated in work and social life, gain a propulsive force for adapting to new environment and potentially accessible supports. While it's still possible to communicate with old friends by phone calls, letters, even by videos, but restricted by distance, the likelihood that they would supply immediate and handy aid in your new job field is practically nonexistent. On the other hand, for sharing the same expert and probably interests, mutual assistance can really promote bond between new friends more and more firm and intimate.

In my opinion, whether old friendships or new ones are important is not carved in stone, because you must treasure and value both. Actually there is no better way to successfully deal with these two kinds of relationship than to connect your old friends with your new ones. The widespread use of many social network services such as Facebook can be taken as an example, using Facebook you can share your current status and any new experiences with old friends and explore a variety of new friends you "like". In this process, you play a role of spreading information out to both of them, thus connect them together. Within a certain period of time, new friends will turn to be old friends.