ISSUE112，一点疑惑，请大家进来讨论一下～

头痛UID: 138636

112. "Some educational systems emphasize the development of student's capacity for reasoning and logical thinking, but students would benefit more from an education that also taught them to explore their own emotions."


似乎很多翻译还有很多提纲都是把这道题看作是写 the development of student's capacity for reasoning and logical thinking和 taught them to explore their own emotions直接哪个更能benefit 学生，可是我看了这道题，觉着是讲education是只注重 the development of student's capacity for reasoning and logical thinking还是注重两种结合起来的education，哪个更能benefit学生，因为题目中有个also这个词啊～
不知道有没有理解错，大家的看法呢？

头痛UID: 138636

看我现在的成文，不知道有没有理解错误～

As we all know that the task of education is for the full development of the student individual and of the whole society. No one would doubt the emphases on the development of student's capacity for reasoning and logical thinking, which seem to be the basic skills to survive in the society. Then how about the capacity for exploring their own emotions? I strongly agree that students would get more benefit from an education that emphasize both these two aspects.

Nowdays diverse challenges fill with everyone's life. No one could simply wait for the visit of lucky, the best way to survive and get more promotion in the society is to develop one's own abilities.the capacity for reasoning and logical thinking would make person more efficient on his job, which could be regarded as a valuable weapon. While there is another weapon that we could not neglect, the control of one's emotion, which could be develop in one's education time.

Firtly, in this competitive age, when no one could avoid frustration(less or more), self-confidence and the ability to endure frustration would play a more important role. One famous businessman has said(and I paraphase),' Public could only simply see my success, few could look to the things back of the success, the countless defeats. If without the strong endurance and the strong belief on success, I would have given up and maybe have become a beggar.'

Another example for this viewpoint is that one could hardly succeed if without the ability to communicate with others, even he or she is comeptent on operation. Without communication, you can't show how capable you are, you can't ask for some help from others when you fall into a difficulty, you can't lead a team into an efficient one.

Therefore, since one should be capable not only of handling affairs but of controling his emotion when be in the society competitions, education should give the students the chance to have the trainings on these two aspects before they go into the society, and such educational systems make students more adapt to the society.

Moreover, the education that ignor the emotion exploring and merely emphsize on the development of student's capacity for reasoning and logical thinking sometimes would lead to an impropor development of students, such as in-self-confidence, overconfidence, dissociableness, or sometimes some impropor value, there are some good examples for it that some scientists that work on the evil virus, that would be harmful to human being,just for money. So the education on emotion exploring would give a proper guidance for students' lives.

From all that discussed above, we can conclude that the emotion exploring would be indispensable for an educational system, and the education emphasize both the the development of student's capacity for reasoning and logical thinking and the emotion exploring would make more benifit to students' future lives.

paisleyUID: 64183

你的理解虽然没错，但是前人的理解更准确。一是逻辑思维能力，二是情感，这两者显然不能偏废，没有人会说只要一个而另一个没有必要存在。所以，如果按你的理解，那题目太显然了，几乎不需要争辩。因此，前人的理解更好，主要在于辩驳哪一个更重要的问题。

你的思路比较出呼意料，讲的是现代社会里调整自己情绪的重要性。我觉得这个POINT也不错，虽然我原先认为题目里要我们讨论的是“心灵”。

同学，你的作文已经被很多人改过、提过意见，希望你也能多多修改其他朋友的文章。尤其是提点结构上和想法上的建议。因为你不可能每个题目都练过来啊，看别人的题目，自己脑子过一遍,既可以给别人提建议，自己又多了一次训练的机会.为别人服务的人优先得到斑竹的修改哦！

头痛UID: 138636

哦。。。。就是paisley你第一次就给了我沉重的打击，呵呵，可是我不知道自己现在写得到底如何了～唉。。。帮别人改怕误了人家啊。。。：（，paisley，给我这个文章打个分好吗？如果还不够得上打分得资格，也请你再给我一次打击好吗？我想这对我是很重要得哦～