新东方的新G绿皮书issue238，第一篇习作

糖果cathyUID: 3054739

额。。这个题目貌似在坛子里给出的新G的issue题库里木有，不过写都已经写了，筒子们给点意见吧。。。俺工科女生，可能木有很多筒子写的有深度。板砖随便拍。。不碍事。。。。

238 每个人都应该阅读诗歌、小说、神话以及各种各样的想象文学。
It is necessary for everyone to read poetry,novels,mythology and other types of imaginative literature.  



有保留的赞成
1、对个人：都市生活紧张而有压力，阅读想象文学可以放松，让我们的生活更五彩斑斓。

2、对社会：“logical positicism"缺乏人文色彩，并且是宗教信仰的基础。




    When it comes to the question whether it is necessary for everyone to read imaginative literature , for example, poetry and mythology, the speaker gives the answer Yes. Although the speaker overlooks certain circumstances in which some imaginative literatures are not worth reading , on balance, I tend to agree with speaker.

    As the modern human beings are living in a world abounded with tension,pressure and nervous, reading such books can relax ourselves ,as well as make the life colorful. Just imagine one, a white-collar worker, gets back home, after a long and busy day, throws himself on the sofa, then reads a vivid novel. Absorbed in a imaginary world,starkly contrary to the real life, he may forget the obsession in the daytime and , the next day, he will be vigorous again. To illustrate this point,let us consider the famous saying of Shakespeare ,"Variety breeds vividness".This remark,insightful and thought-provoking, in effect illuminates the point that imagination, result to variety, makes our earthy world more colorful and vivid.

    On the societal level, it is meaningful to tint perceptual colours onto the rational world, especially in today's "logical positicism" . During a long period, humans have been emphasizing more on scientific technology,while neglect literature. Consequently, more and more questions are in the face of us,such as the extinction of certain animals , the deteriorating environment and people's numbness to others. Humans are not aware that ---it's a utterly wrong belief that science can solve every problems, until now. So it's necessary to read the imaginative literature, as the speaker asserts. Because this books can enlarge our minds, make the distance between one and the other shorter, bring more hope for the stony people. Besides, imaginative literature, especially the mythology, to a certain degree, are the base of religious faith. This immediately reminds me of the close affinity of Greek mythology with the later western religious culture.
   
    Admittedly, in some cases, imaginative literature can be waste of time, and even counterproductive.For instance, some books are so imaginative that it's almost nonsensical and meaningless.Such books include back-in-time novels and the one which are adapted on a way distorting history. Besides,some type of literature ,such as the poetry, can't easily get across.So More over, if one have difficulty in surviving, how can he have money and energy to read such books?

    In sum, the speaker correctly asserts that it's necessary for everyone to read imaginative literature.Indeed, it's related to our personal pleasure, as well as social development. However, we can't ignore that some imaginative books which are not worth reading. We must have a clear and judicious opinion about selecting which to read.  

咖啡盐UID: 2973669

XDF出来的，格式首先就让人看着舒服了很多~~呵呵

咖啡盐UID: 2973669

话缩，我怎么脚的这是老G的题目嘞

doraliuUID: 2842061

加油哦~~~表示看到AW头就大~~~

咖啡盐UID: 2973669

When it comes to the question whether it is necessary for everyone to read imaginative literature , （这句话有点罗嗦了...is it necessary for people to read imaginative leiterature? 直接一个简单句开头，个人感觉会更清晰）for example, poetry and mythology, （这个只是作为一个补充，而且题目中出现过了，没神马意义再复述出来）the speaker gives the answer Yes. Although the speaker overlooks certain circumstances in which some imaginative literatures are not worth reading , on balance, I tend to agree with speaker.（这个地方，我脚的这种表述太中国化了些，先数落了下别人是有问题的，然后又赞同别人的观点，会给人有点摸不着头脑的感觉，如果LZ是赞同的，那么在一开始就直接赞同就好了）

    As the modern human beings are living in a world abounded with tension,pressure and nervous, reading such books can relax ourselves ,as well as make the life colorful. （and make our life colorful as well）Just imagine one, （我映像中好像这种表达是比较口语化的。直接for instance或者I would like to take a white-collar worker's life as an example）a white-collar worker, gets back home, after a long and busy day, throws himself on the sofa, then reads a vivid novel. Absorbed in a imaginary world,starkly contrary to the real life, he may forget the obsession in the daytime and , the next day, he will be vigorous again. To illustrate this point,let us consider the famous saying of Shakespeare ,"Variety breeds vividness".This remark,insightful and thought-provoking, in effect illuminates the point that imagination, result to variety, makes our earthy world more colorful and vivid.

    On the societal level, it is meaningful to tint perceptual colours onto the rational world, especially in today's "logical positicism" . During a long period, humans have been emphasizing more on scientific technology,while neglect literature. Consequently, more and more questions are in the face of us,such as the extinction of certain animals , the deteriorating environment and people's numbness to others. Humans are not aware that ---it's a utterly wrong belief that science can solve every problems, until now. So it's necessary to read the imaginative literature, as the speaker asserts. Because this books can enlarge our minds, make the distance between one and the other shorter, bring more hope for the stony people. Besides, imaginative literature, especially the mythology, to a certain degree, are the base of religious faith. This immediately reminds me of the close affinity of Greek mythology with the later western religious culture.
   
    Admittedly, in some cases, imaginative literature can be a waste of time, and even counterproductive.For instance, some books are so imaginative(太过幻想就是空想，fanciful,or even ridiculous) that it's almost nonsensical and meaningless.Such books include back-in-time novels and the one which are adapted on a way distorting history. Besides,some type of literature ,such as the poetry, can't easily get across.So More over, if one have difficulty in surviving, how can he have money and energy to read such books?(LZ想从书的角度，而不是人的角度来作为切入点，立意是好的，不过个人觉得没能很好的驾驭住，显得文章很空很淡，读了半天没感觉到什么实质性的内容，而且正反两方面都是从范例入手的，形式上也就搏不出新意来。反例还是由特例出发比较好，浅显易懂，方便驾驭。可以从反社会，对生活无用的方面找两个特例或者重点分析一个特例即可。就像这句Such books include back-in-time novels and the one which are adapted on a way distorting history.只是一句陈述，却没有理由，这样不能让读者信服。)

    In sum, the speaker correctly asserts that it's necessary for everyone to read imaginative literature.Indeed, it's related to our personal pleasure, as well as social development. However, we can't ignore that some imaginative books which are not worth reading. We must have a clear and judicious opinion about selecting which to read.  

我觉得LZ刚开始准备的话还是从比较大众化的角度作为入门比较好，比如这篇文章从人的角度来切入，阅读这类文学著作对人的影响，什么样的人需要阅读，什么演的人不需要阅读...thesis虽然烂了点，但是要讲清楚说明白也是很要下功夫的。


呃呃....拙劣的意见，小小丢下脸....LZ酌情考虑，加油~

糖果cathyUID: 3054739

3# 咖啡盐

恩 好像是老G题库里的

我上的新G强化班是第一批 老师说材料都是以旧G为主滴 还木有来得及变动 - -# 虽然换了个颜色的封皮。。

糖果cathyUID: 3054739

5# 咖啡盐

感谢咖啡的宝贵意见，我也觉得我的切入点都满浮的，不过这个特例我想了半天都想不出来。。。。。

我先回去写两篇简单点的TOPIC ，然后再来改这篇作文。。。第一次写都没什么感觉，还得再多准备点论据素材才行。。。

咖啡盐UID: 2973669

因为你大多写的是范例，直接想把论点推及到普遍性的层面上，这样就需要有一个很好的文字驾驭功底了，一般来说论点都是先体现在一个典型上，再由典型推广到普遍性上比较容易点，直接推广到范例，首先就牵扯到一个问题：如何“深挖”？一旦涉及到普遍性，你的论证就会牵扯到各方面的平衡上，反而给论证增加了枷锁

Issue是要我们讲一个现象或观点，展示在大众面前，并为大众所接受，最重要的就是要有理由，受众面倒是其次考虑的问题，那么我觉得，还是单就一点深度剖析比较好

我觉得一开始不要急着去keep balance，不妨偏激一点，争对一点进行单方面突破

咖啡盐UID: 2973669

唉~8G的XDF孩纸都是折翼的天使啊，XDF自己都还没有接触过....不过说不定会在考场看到老师去参加考试哦~~

糖果cathyUID: 3054739

8# 咖啡盐

恩 多谢宝贵建议啦~O(∩_∩)O~

丽萨linUID: 2955329

话说绿皮书好不好啊，有必要买吗，他的阅读，填空和数学是和新G题目一样吗，望解答，我也是上了XDF的，不过我们用的是黄皮

咖啡盐UID: 2973669

话说绿皮书好不好啊，有必要买吗，他的阅读，填空和数学是和新G题目一样吗，望解答，我也是上了XDF的，不过我们用的是黄皮
丽萨lin 发表于 2011-7-3 16:57

流出真题就那么些，不过是换个颜色，换个叫法而已，都是XDF赚钱的噱头

neahowUID: 3044715

话说绿皮书好不好啊，有必要买吗，他的阅读，填空和数学是和新G题目一样吗，望解答，我也是上了XDF的，不过我们用的是黄皮
丽萨lin 发表于 2011-7-3 16:57

绿皮数学和黄皮数学是一模一样的；
绿皮填空包括了以前黄皮的部分单空题，然后加上了XDF自己编的一些两空、三空题；
绿皮阅读文本还是黄皮里面的文本，但是题目的话根据新G做了调整，有选句、多选这种题目了。

不推荐这些书，都是赶时间做出来的，没有什么质量，最好等8月左右的样子再去看看新东方有没有新书出版吧。
不过，话说即使要买的话能在市场上买到吗？