8.20考，第一篇雅思作文，求拍！拜托各位了！

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一直在准备托福，中间插了一次雅思考试。8.20 之前一个月在看书，这个月才准备写大作文。。。==所以模板神马的浮云，不想背，也背不来，就感觉痕迹太重，所以只好自己瞎胡扯。。。按照预测写的，大家不要吝啬，求拍啊！！！

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题目：Some people think that students benefit from going to private secondary schools. Do you agree or disagree?

In every time of modern society, education is an instant topic that every one has his or her hamlet. Parents always want to send their children to a better secondary school in order to receive a better education and apply for a world famous university. Now, a debate is still hot discussing which is that whether students should be send to private secondary school and do students benefit from the private school? Personally, i agree with the opinion that students would benefit from going to the private secondary school.


To begin with, comparing with other kind of schools, the number of students per class is much smaller due to the difficulties in getting in private school. As a result, every student would be paid more attentions, not only on their curriculum but also on physical, mental, and psychological health. If a student meets some problem or be frustrated with his or her discipline, they could find teacher for help immediately, but it seems hard for students who are in public schools or other kind of schools to do so.


Moreover, because of the strong capability of finance, private secondary schools could hire more teachers who is passionately fond of teaching and have rich educational experienced and profound learning. These teachers may prefer to encourage students to have their own ideas instead of learning by rote. In addition, it is entirely possible that private schools' teachers aimed to  cultivate students to think independently and critically. They instill not only knowledge, but also high moral values. Besides, students are given more options to select their disciplines and expected to evaluate their teachers' performance.


Finally, although the tuition in private secondary school may be a little higher than any other kind of schools, students would have more opportunities to participate in different kinds of activities in every aspects such as sport, entertainment, charity organization or community environment protection. Such these activities would contribute to the fact that students in the private school would quickly understand what the responsibility is and how to communicate with others skillfully.


In sum, according to all the analysis above, although private secondary schools have disadvantage on their high tuition fee that not everyone could afford it, i still hold the opinion that students will benefit a lot from going to private secondary schools. They would receive better education and have more opportunities to successfully apply for world famous universities.