疑问 Argument12

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1.      题目：Fifteenyears ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouragedstudents to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Sincethat time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in theirclasses, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by 30 percent.Potential employers, looking at this dramatic rise in grades, believe that gradesat Omega are inflated and do not accurately reflect student achievement; as aresult, Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as havegraduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to securebetter jobs, Omega University should terminate student evaluation ofprofessors.Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence isneeded to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken orstrengthen the argument.


我的论证顺序是：1.并不能从overall student grade averages at Moega have risen by 30 percent这一现象得出教师刻意抬高了学生的分数，也许学生的学业水平确实提高了。


技                         2.即使是教师刻意抬高了学生的分数，这也不一定是Omega的学生的找工作没有临近的Alpha University的学生成功的原因。le
                           
                            3.终止学生对教师的评价与成功找到工作之间并无必然联系。找到工作有很多因素决定。


但是看了张雷东老师的终极提纲大全，里面对这题的错误有一个是：The dean fails to mention the positive effects of the evaluation system。而且还是一个五颗星最高等级的错误。但是这个错误我觉得有点偏，大家觉得这个有必要吗？是不是确实是个非常重要值得提得point?


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