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有些人觉得他们可以靠自己或者家人的帮助，解决important problems.因此，人们不需要政府的帮助。
Every person is a single union of the society and the gathering of them consists the government and nation. To some extent, the problem they face is also the challenge to the country, however, when the problem relates to personal enthusiasm(emotion) they will get help from their friends or family instead. So in my opinion, who we ask for when we encounter difficulties depend on the problem itself.

To start with, it is the responsibility of country to help its people to get out of the hard time and secure their safety or rights when someone intents to infringe. What's more, some problems can be only solved by the government, for instance, the war between two countries, weapons are controlled by the government and they should fight for freedom for its people and never let the invaders to occupy the land or their culture. Also the government is the representative and only the government has the ability and right to negotiate with the world to get a peaceful environment for well developing. You can take the Second World War as the example. Another thing I want to say is that the law is drafted by country and only they have the ability to fulfill it when people's rights are despoiled such as the food safety, the fair opportunities for people to employ or even the basic living rights. So you see above, the problem can not be dissolved by people themselves and we should depend on country.

Another thing that we can't solve by ourselves in the country is the living environment. Because we hand out much tax to government and what they need to do is to ameliorate the condition we live in. Such as build the roads, set up more parks and provide more instruments for people to develop their physics health and offer more places to enhance citizen's spiritual level. All will need a lot of money and should be well projected. Just depend on personal viewpoints are not only a waste of time with low efficiency but also hardly to get an unify. If this dissatisfaction accumulates for a long time, it will definitely shake the stabilization of the country. So it is the problem needs the country to compromise.

Although our government has so many abilities, they will do little help on personal emotional problems. At this time, it is better for us to turn to our relatives and friends because they know more than any other communities or organizations. They may be more willing to be a good listener to our difficulties such as the lovelorn or the quarrelling with family members and provide us solutions sincerely. If we ask for help from the governments, I admit they will give their hands but they may not deal with them in time or may increase the difficulty. So under this circumstance, families and friends is the first choice than others.

In sum, different problems turn to different people. Never pretend to be a bravado or be a useless person, then all problems will be solved easily and what we need to do at last is to enjoy the happy life in harmony.

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darlingruiruiUID: 2840976

顶一下，求批改。

darlingruiruiUID: 2840976

求人批改啊。咋都没人呢，囧！%>_<%

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楼主~~~作文批改是个互助的过程，你先去批改别人的，别人才会来批改你的。

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5# windieicloudie
哦 好谢谢啊，我刚了解。