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Everyone has his own Hamlet in his heart. Some consider that human beings should be practical, because human cannot exist where is far away from reality. While others contend that how can a common fellow read the mind of a great man. In my viewpoint, individuals who lack of concerning about the reality will confront some disasters from their own daily life. On the other hand, the one who makes great contribution to the society never lack of aspiration.
Reality is essential to an individual. We are mortals, thus we need to eat and drink. And our everyday living materials require our own endeavor to obtain. The person who only considers his aspirations is just the same as the one who immerse oneself in the day-dreams. As a result, he would die due to thirsty or hungry. In my own experience, every senior student wants to attend to the Tsinghua University in China. Regardless of one’s own learning ability, the one would hurt himself as a result.


[size=13.8889px]However, after solving the problem originating from reality, one should have a reasonable aspiration. Without an aspiration, even if the person has excellent talent, he is just the same as the one who walks on a street wearing beautiful clothes in a dark night. What’s more, a great aspiration would lead a person to accomplish his own social value. Both of the entire society and the individual can benefit from it. An entrepreneur, called Wang Hai, had an aspiration that he should try his best to make his enterprise become the leading company in his business field since he has become the leader of his enterprise. Finally, he made it in his 45th. Right now he becomes the 47th richest people in China and his company contributes lots of tax to national revenue.


[size=13.8889px]In all, we should meticulously control the practical plan and challenging plan in the future. Lacking one of them, our lives would be lackluster.

zhouycloudUID: 2772040

希望好心人帮忙看看啊，自己先顶一个

YukikoUID: 3170692

Everyone has his own Hamlet in his heart. Some consider that human beings should be practical, because human cannot exist where is far away from reality. While others contend that how can a common fellow read the mind of a great man. In my viewpoint, individuals who lack of concerning about the reality will confront some disasters from their own daily life. On the other hand, the one who makes great contribution to the society never lack of aspiration.
Reality is essential to an individual(a person). We are mortals, thus we need to eat and drink. And our everyday living materials require our own endeavor to obtain. The person who only considers his aspirations is just the same as the one who immerse oneself in the day-dreams. As a result, he would die due to thirsty or hungry. In my own experience, every senior student wants to attend to the Tsinghua University in China. Regardless of one’s own learning ability, the one would hurt himself as a result. , c" R2 R4 E7 Q; A  T

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However, after solving the problem originating from reality, one should have a reasonable aspiration. Without an aspiration, even if the person has excellent talent, he (,)is just the same as the one who walks on a street wearing beautiful clothes in a dark night. What’s more, a great aspiration would lead a person to accomplish his own social value. Both of the entire society and the individual can benefit from it. An entrepreneur, called Wang Hai, had an aspiration that he should try his best to make his enterprise become the leading company in his business field since he has become the leader of his enterprise. Finally, he made it in his 45th. Right now he becomes the 47th richest people in China and his company contributes lots of tax to national revenue. 5 f8 Q$ m' Y* l  F5 m5 C7 I

,In all, we should meticulously control the practical plan and challenging plan in the future. Lacking one of them, our lives would be lackluster.

单词都用的好难的，词汇量很多吧

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还有你的作文题目是什么？
能帮我也改一下吗？谢谢！
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1304971-1-1.html

zhouycloudUID: 2772040

4# Yukiko 我的作文题目是：人们应该坚持自己有挑战性的未来计划还是比较实际的未来计划