Daily Writing Camp-作文特训小组 火之龙 第一次发作文贴 坚持就是胜利！

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Daily Writing Camp-作文特训小组
火之龙
第一次作文贴
坚持就是胜利！求修改。
9月13日
20091031NA It is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new country because of the lose of old friends?
Friends are essential in our life.Not only do they share the happiness and sorrow,but they also are indispensable to help us to get over difficulties.Some argue that because of losing old friends, moving to a new place is an unworthy experience.However,I support the opinion that it is a good thing to move to a new city.
First of all, moving to a new place does not necessarily mean losing old friends.Because people can connect with old friends through other forms inspite of the distance between them. In modern society, as technology of communication develops quickly, it is convenient to keep in touch with old friends through Internet,like email,chat tools or skype.If people live in the same country, they are able to make phone calls to chat with old friends joyfully.
What is more, it is no exaggeration to say that it brings many advantages to move to a new place.It offers more chances to get a suited job than the previous place. For instance, one of my classmates move from Guangzhou to Shenzhen to search for opportunity. As a consequence,he get promoted in his new job.Apart from that,learnig novel things and communicating with diverse people of a new place not only expand veiw of the world, but also influence previous ideas.By taking the old and new thoughts into consideration, individuals would become informed of the world.
Finally, it is beneficial to the development of career which people contribute most of their lives to.In recent years, a quantity of Chinese people move to other countries cause the environment of foreign countries offers more incentives and benefits to their career.
Above all, one can draw the conclusion that moving to a new place is a good things for people.

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作文我已经复制下来了哈~~
改完给你传上去~

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改好了~~~