第一次写的作文，完全没有头绪，求各位亲们指导下啊！！！

清箫云从UID: 3152016

Do you agree or disagree. The best way to teach children about responsibility is to have them care for animal.

    In modern society, it is incontrovertible that responsibility has a typically great impact upon the behaviors, attitudes and thoughts of children which will affect their future lives. Education specialists and  psycologies are searching for simple yet magically effective method to teach children about responsibility. Some people assert that caring for animal is the best way while others doubt about it.  Therefore, there is a heated debate whether having children care for animal is the best way to teach them about responsibility.
   
    It is undeniable that a good way to teach children about responsibility is to have them care for animal in that their love and intimate relationship will enormously help them form responsibility toward animal and then toward others as well as society. Caring for animals, such as cats or puppies, children will play, feed and even bath pets. All of these behaviors contribute to a strong sense of  closeness and responsibility toward animals. Actually, this kind of responsbility has exceptionally great relevance for children in that it changes children's attitudes and behaviors to their surroundings. As children become mature,this responsibility will definitely become responsibility toward people arounded and the whole scioety.
    However, because working or helping household tasks is an extremely direct and simple yet effective method to learn about responsibility, especially for these people who are allergic to animals, it is hardly appropriate to say caring for animal is the best. Young children can do some simple housework, generally such as washing dishes, taking newspapers or letters and helping families clear home, to learn a sense of responsibility toward their famlies. Teenagers can paticipate in important affairs and decisions of their families to learn the reponsibility as a family member. Besides, they can also learn a lot of knowledge related to interpersonal and social responsibility from their parents. For all children, helping take care of their old grandparents or sick families is not merely their duty, but gain much sense of responsibility, which they will never learn from caring for animal.
    Judging from above evidence offered, I can hardly agree that the best way to teach children about responsibility is to have them care for animal. Actually, working or helping household tasks is a better way than caring for animal for its convenience and meanings.For a child, it is meaningful and imperative to take an active part in household tasks to make our families and lives more comfortable, satisfying and happy.

清箫云从UID: 3152016

这一篇就更不会写了，最后一段想了很久都不知道怎么写，就先空着了，郁闷……
In order to achieve the happinese of yourself, you have to try to make other people happy.

  Apart from being an exceptionally feeling, happiness, which makes our lives and world colorful and meaningful, always obsesses people in all ages, and this trend is expected to continue into the future.Generally speaking, it is the nature of human that determines that people are often affected by the person around them. So, it is indisputable that in order to achieve the hapiness of yourself, one has to try to make other people, especially parents and colleagues, happy.
   It is incontrovertible that in order to achieve the happiness of yourself, you have to try to make your parents happy on account of happy parents provide an oppotunity to shape a more relaxed and harmonious family environment which makes you feel happy.Actually, psycologies and researcher have found that happy parents will make paramount impact upon their offspring, and subsequently children will be more likely to be happy. Just doing tiny simple and direct things, such as that of telling a joke at the dinner table or cooking breakfast for your parents,will bring unexpected enomous happiness to your parents.Then it will be enormously gratifying and happy when you get praise and appreciation from parents.Any person who fails to notice the paramount impacct on making their parents happy will pay the exobitant price of losing harmonious family enjoyment.
  Admittedly, in order to achieve the happiness of yourself, you also have to try to make your colleagues happy in that a sense of hapiness and closeness between you and your colleagues means enormous satisfaction and happiness feom job.Apart from parents, colleagues are the persons we spend most of our time with. Making your colleagues happy is not merely contributeing to an exceedingly effective and happy working environment, but enormously gain happy feelings of accomplishment from job and closeness from colleagues.

清箫云从UID: 3152016

:mad:自个儿顶一下……