<Daily writing作文小组> liang0603 的作文贴

香草鱼UID: 3125484

我补的修改版现在发给你= =

lwrsmilingUID: 3159417

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xiaoniao123UID: 2541605

加油，晚上帮你改综合！

xiaoniao123UID: 2541605

11月17日的综合改好了！

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11.18 综合改好了，加油！

Fenjuan.HuUID: 3104413

改好了，加油！

骆嫣婷UID: 3179118

11月18日 100619NA If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, you will use e-mail or text messaging, or use the telephone or voice-messaging.


As the society fast develops,　people have to deal(+with) all kinds of business with the help of communications and technologies.　At the same time,　when it comes to the issue(复数？issues) that the（去掉the） ways to keep in touch with others are where the controversy arises.(这句话有点绕，而且题目是说如果说到争议性的内容，而选取interact的方式，不如改成，when it comes to the controversial issues, many problems or conflicts may arise )　The majority of the(去掉the) people conceive that e-mail and text massaging would
save not only(not only save) our time but also the money when they talk with some ones(others) who are long distant beyond them,　but others argue that although text messaging could make the problems clearly it is also leading(不用进行时) to disputes.　From my own perspective,　the latter is favorable.

The first and foremost thing is that the verbal texts always make misunderstanding resulting（result） in bickers.　Take myself （my）experience for an example,(用自己做例子是个好办法，学习了)　one time,　I texted my mother that I won't be home because of the bad exam scores,　and I wanted to go some places for a relax（relaxation， a去掉）.　In fact,　at that time I was not in that bad mood of being sad, just being a little nervous to be back home.　My mother had searched every places I could go with the fear that I would be too sad to live.　It is the misunderstanding of the text,　making(which make) my mother so nervous,　and thus (since then) every time (like that) I would make a call to my mother.


Additionally.　the telephone or voice-messaging would make us chat with each other in time,　and which may have many new ideas engendered.　As speaking is one of the abilities that human beings condign(好像不对，这个词).　Text and e-mail would make（改成have或者get） a lot of our time lost when we tap(type) the words on the keyboard.（这一点好像和本小主题句没关）　What is more,　telephone likens(?) a face to face talk really gets it clout(?) in the modern society,　and nowadays attains its éclat(?) as well.　For instance,　I could share my research with my friends who are even in another country,　and that is also where we could build a new research plan,　which makes our research programs run better,　when we could point out other's problems or flaws in time.(这一段有的地方写成是text messaging比较好，于你的观点不符)

Last but not the least,　the telephones give us a new life with more communications with each other,　and we should make the best use of it.　Many people contend that telephone call is so expensive that it may cost most of the outputs of the families.　But as the high developments we could just benefit this from the internet where calls cost nothing.　What is more,　do　not judge the text quickly,　for it is maybe from one of you families,　or it also be one of the bad guys who wants to extort you.

To sum up,　the text things have the disadvantages,　and combined with the advantages of the telephone calls in time,（把上面的换成besides take the advantages of using telephone in consideration）　I still state that the telephone or voice-messaging should be highly acclaimed（chosen即可，acclaim好像是推选的意思）.
后半部分写的仓促了，再多酝酿一下就好了~改的不好，请见谅~

By 骆嫣


再接再厉啊~加油~

Heather890704UID: 3167004

改好啦~~有点晚了。也谢谢你给我的建议。

liang0603UID: 3182007

39# cxdyx
是 的 ，不好意思 ，我才 写好。

Fenjuan.HuUID: 3104413

改好了。比昨天好多了。果然恢复精力，神勇了啊！！！:loveliness:

闫颜UID: 2788503

不好意思，昨晚有事，现在改好了！！

liang0603UID: 3182007

43# 闫颜 谢谢，你的呢？

闫颜UID: 2788503

我19号的作文==再等等哈~~