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发表于 2011-11-22 15:00:38 |只看该作者

不好意思我还不能上传附件只好这样改了
Have you listened to the on line classes or just surfed the internet searching for a confused conception? The advent of the computers and internet has made it more flexible and efficient for us to receiving various kinds of information. At the same time, majority of people argue that it is the popularity of the high developed computers that leads to children inured with violence and it is hard to educate the students right, but others who oppose it strongly contend that the diversity of the educated ways really facilitate the education nowadays. From my own perspective, I still think the latter is favorable.

First and foremost thing is that the advent of the fast and high developed technologies makes the education time more flexible, and consequently people could receive the knowledge more easily. Take my mother as an example, she was born in an indigent family, which could not fulfill her fees at school. When she was a middle school student she had to get a part-time job at nights（night） and studied in school all the day. That is what the controversy arises, both the days and nights works worn her out, and thus she could really afford that kinds of pressure. When it was the time for her to go to the high school, she dropped. Whenever she reminds this period, she also (always)says ,if there were computers that time she would adjust his(her) study and work to the best, and not ever to acquit(quit). That is now with the help of the computers she is studying any class at any time, and it is not (the) only reason that we could get educated easily.

Additionally, with the spread of the various sciences, people could engross in all kinds of knowledge. For instance, Chinese are famous for their philosophy, and in the past time, all the people who went to study were constrained in learning the unique science. But now people would learn all kind of knowledge such as physic, engineering and so on. Thus we could receive all kinds of works only if we like it. That is now we could be educated by the favorite disciplie with the best qualified teachers who are famous for her or his study through the internet.

Last but not the least, it is true that the diversity of the communicated ways also gains its flaws. As the popularity of the computers, even child who does not have the right judgment is also surfing with others. Admittedly, the information on the internet includes good educated ones, as well as the bad. All kinds of entertainments in the internet have made many children got addicted, and who could not get themselves been out of it. Life abounds with such examples, there are many children who addicted into the computers game, and then get low scores in their study with being dropped by the schools. Although these examples happen, these could not override the advantages of the internet and computers.
(这一段是陈述弊端么？但是是不是有点点偏题，和get educated 有点远，或者突然写不是所有的educated 都是好的educated 。但总觉得有点突兀了)

To sum up, as the reasons and examples I proposed above, combined the disadvantages of the developed technologies, I still strongly conceive that nowadays we could attain more knowledge we like and more information easily, and that is we are educated more easily.

严重超时……5分钟….思路整理了太久了。

写的非常好真的要像你学习中，有很多很好的很成熟的句子，内容也很丰富