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For most people, be polite to others is what they had been taught since very young. To some degree, be polite is the key for us to get well along with others. Therefore we should not be rude to another person. However, in some special situation, a little impolite may be useful too.

First of all, polite is one of the fundamental features for own human. It is no doubt that we are social animals, which means we should depend on others for surviving. Therefore we may have to be polite to others. During the communication with others, be polite will make a good first impression on your potential friends. Besides, to be rude to others can do damage to the relationship between you and others, even his or her is your close friend. For instance, a person is very wonderful in many aspects, but he is very easy to get angry and says something that may be make you unhappy. Do you still want to be friends with him? The answer may be negative.

However, in many situations, we may be very angry for what others have done and just want to do some rude things to impress our angry. Should we still be polite? Many times, it may be us feel much better to be impolite such situations. But after a few days later, we usually will be regret for what we have done or said. For example, for one of our friends' fault, we have miss a very important meeting, and lose the best chance for our career improving. Therefore we may say something unsuitable, which may result in the ending of the friendship. However, when we calm down from such events, we will find compare to the friend, such an improvement is nothing. Therefore, we should not to be rude to another person in most times.

Of course, there also be some special situation that impolite can be a better choice. For example, someone may always do something make you unhappy; however, even you have tried many times to make him not do such things again, he still does what he usually did. Therefore, a little rude may make him realize that you are really angry about his actions, which will give a chance for the friendship between you and him to be lasting.

In sum, most times we should be polite to others, for to be polite is one of the most important social rules, even though in some special situations we can also be impolite.

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For most people, be polite to others is what they had been taught since very young. To some degree, be polite is the key for us to get well along with others. Therefore we should not be rude to another person. However, in some special situation, a little impolite may be useful too.
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First of all, polite is one of the fundamental features for own(of) human. It is no doubt that we are social animals, which means we should depend on others for surviving(survive). Therefore we may have to be polite to others. During the communication with others, be polite will make a good first impression on your potential friends. Besides, to be rude to others can do damage to the relationship between you and others, even his(him) or her is your close friend. For instance, a person is very wonderful in many aspects, but he is very easy to get angry and says something that may be(却去掉) make you unhappy. Do you still want to be friends with him? The answer may be negative.0 `. v; @* w5 c: z/ M

However, in many situations, we may be very angry for what others have done and just want to do some rude things to impress our angry.（句式很奇怪，建议改一下） Should we still be polite? Many times, it may be us feel much better to be impolite such situations.（这句话语法错误，不太明白是什么意思） But after a few days later,（去掉after或是later） we usually will be regret（regret是动词）for what we have done or said. For example, for one of our friends' fault, we have miss(missed) a very important meeting, and lose the best chance for our career improving. Therefore we may say something unsuitable, which may result in the ending of the friendship. However, when we calm down from such events, we will find compare to the friend(什么意思？), such an improvement is nothing. Therefore, we should not to be rude to another person in most times.

Of course, there also be(没有理由用be) some special situation（s） that impolite（用名词） can be a better choice. For example, someone may always do something make you unhappy（that）; however, even you have tried many times to make him not do such things again, he still does what he usually did. Therefore, a little rude may make him realize that you are really angry about his actions, which will give a chance for the friendship between you and him to be lasting（句式需要改变一下，非常拗口且有些小错误）M6 `& r5 j4 S

In sum, most times we should be polite to others, for to be polite is one of the most important social rules, even though in some special situations we can also be impolite.（这句话逻辑上不太好，建议注意标点符号的使用。Even though前面应该是句号，后面是逗号，不然意思都反了）

总评：三段式逻辑还是把要说的东西基本上清晰地表达了，基本分应该是可以拿到了。但是语法错误不少，建议注意细节，人称，单复数，语态时态等细节。另外整篇文章的内容有些单薄，最好能饱满丰富一些。其他还不错，加油哦！~